Phoenix Destiny: Postscript: This is not a tragedy
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This postscript should have been written yesterday, but I can’t write it anymore, so I put it today.
The delay was just in time for me to see how everyone reacted to the ending.
The original intention of writing this ending is not to abuse the readers. Therefore, I think it is necessary to interpret it so that you can understand the intention. Even if not everyone can accept it, at least let everyone see where the hope lies.
This book is a robbery in my writing career. There have been many, many times, and I think I can't make it through.
Its birth is inherently inadequate.
I don’t know how many readers have read my previous "Fairy Atlas", this one can be said to be my ultimate fantasy on the subject of cultivation, so after writing it, I will think about it, not in the short term. Write comprehension.
First, many of my imaginations about this subject have already been shown in that book. Without new brains, I would just repeat myself. Second, I clearly realize that I know too little on the way of online writing. It can even be said that I still didn't know how to write online articles.
I am a very lucky person. When I first wrote the first work "A Immortal Is Hard to Find" on Girls.com, I never thought about how to write a "red book", just because I read "Mortal Cultivation of Immortals" At the time of Biography, I was very interested in the world presented by the author, and indulged in my own imagination, and came up with such an idea.
So I started writing this work enthusiastically.
Since I never thought about whether it would be "red", my psychological acceptance was very high at that time, and I was too happy to have readers join me in the joys and sorrows. There are too many achievements in the future.
Because of the performance beyond imagination, I did not experience the cold reception that a new author should have, and I still retain my innocence and self.
In the end, this book cannot have a perfect ending because of the fetters of reality.
Many of its ideas, in my later opinion, have big flaws, and this flaw is also a major reason for affecting the outcome.
It opened up my new world and became my black history.
I feel deeply sorry for it.
Under this situation, I am going to write "Fairy Atlas" to correct the mistakes made in the previous work.
I want to tell myself that I can write better works.
Immediately afterwards, I withstood all the tests that the debut album saved me.
The cold reception of "Fairy" is something I haven't thought of. The initial boringness rejected most readers.
As mentioned earlier, I was still naive at that time. After sorting out the whole story, I thought it was a good story. There is no reason why others would not appreciate it.
So, I immersed myself in writing this story, and I wanted to write it wonderfully and show it to everyone.
Later, I did it. Although the subscription score of this book is not as good as the previous one, it has brought me you who will never leave me.
Up to now, I still think this is my most sincere work, although not so many people accept it.
This work, 3.77 million words, was written for nearly three years.
In the process, I finally realized that writing online articles is not that simple.
And I am no longer a newcomer who writes for hobbies, now I need to rely on it to support my family.
I began to consciously study other people’s works, understand readers’ preferences, analyze my own shortcomings, and look for a breakthrough.
During this process, I wrote a lot of writing works, some of them were destroyed, some were left on the hard drive, and some were experimented.
Calm down and analyze, the cold reception of "Fairy Spirit" is not innocent, and it has committed many taboos that should not be committed on the Internet. A female protagonist who has a vague gender consciousness and is not easy to substitute, a beginning that is not cool and straightforward, and a story that is too long and not enough.
This is basically half of the failure.
However, even if the story lacks a hit point, it can still be written very well.
It's insufficient grades, it can only be because it is not good-looking, because I failed to write it well.
After the end of "Fairy", I haven't opened a new one for half a year.
In the past six months, I have reflected on many issues and wrote a lot of short and medium articles about pen practice.
After the Chinese New Year, the editor came to urge me to open a hole.
It really stopped for too long, and it should start a new journey.
At that time, what I prepared was the story of "Chengluan". Therefore, the characters of Lu Mingshu and Xie Xingchen belong to this story.
At that time, it was not perfect enough, and there was no good entry point. I encountered a problem at the beginning.
I still couldn't write a satisfactory beginning, so I accepted the editor's suggestion and decided to write a transitional book.
Choosing in my own new and old pits, I finally chose the framework of "Destiny for the Phoenix".
Since the person setting is almost done, I also fell in love with these two characters, so I put them in this story and adjusted accordingly.
Since it is a transition, it must be changed here.
The direction I chose at the time was to move closer to the tastes of the general public, so this book had a very **** beginning.
Looking back and thinking about it now, a transitional work was doomed to its innate deficiencies from the beginning.
Let’s not hide it from everyone, the initial structure of this book is a shuttle text from another world. As I said before, it was originally inspired by "The Great Adventure of Wuxia World". Looking at the setting at the beginning, you can still see the traces. I have mixed up various worlds. It should be a series of copies of different worlds. There are magical worlds, interstellar worlds, and even modern worlds.
But after I opened the book, I found it couldn't work.
If you write about fantasy, then your overall view of the world should be fantasy. Adding magic will give people a sense of nondescript.
There are already examples in front of me. I saw another book with the same writing method. As a result, the author told me that the rate of abandonment by readers was very high, and subscriptions plummeted-->>, The fastest update to the latest chapters of Destiny for the Phoenix!
. Later, she broke the change, and she hasn't finished writing until now.
So I began to adjust the structure, reducing the content of traveling through other worlds, and even reduced it to only a few embellishments, focusing on the world.
In this way, it does make readers see more coherently, but it deviates from my initial expectations.
From then on, I lost control of it.
The more you write later, the stronger the sense of loss of control.
The plot points I prepared are completely useless, and I can only adjust them while writing.
And this is not the biggest problem. The most terrible thing is that my personal emotions exploded.
As mentioned earlier, after writing "Fairy", I decided not to write cultivation in a short time. Therefore, "Destiny" itself is a compromise.
I fell into a depressed mood, and the more I wrote later, the more I disgusted myself. I asked myself over and over again, since I don't want to write, why do I have to reluctantly. Now that I have started to write, why can't I persist. Is the story reduced to this, worthy of the character?
Then I went back to look at this work and found that the current version had too many shortcomings, and I didn't write the feeling I wanted at all. It shouldn't be like this, if I were to rate it, it would even fail.
The most bitter codeword is no better than good eyes and low hands. The ideal is too high, the level is too low, too much thinking and too little writing.
In any case, since I have started writing, I must give it an ending.
So I re-planned the structure again.
This ending has been set at the end of July.
Actually, I think this is the best ending I can give them.
Lu Mingshu has experienced a lot of injustice in his life. The death of her grandfather and mother sent her into the world of Wu Xiu. Even if she shines through her own efforts, others still think that she is too upright to get good results.
There was a fire in her heart. Once it broke out, it would be the consequence of a prairie fire.
But she also met good people.
The master whose meridians are all abolished, cheer her up again. Gao Xiang, a childhood sweetheart, fights injustice for her. There are people like Master Zhuo who help her as much as they can.
For these good people, she has been trying to control the fire in her heart.
The higher the strength and the less no one can control her, the more she has to control herself.
She is not willing to dominate others with the same strength because she has been treated unfairly.
So, she would rather let herself become a good person, leaving room for others everywhere, rather than tyrannize to the end, coldly kill.
This is her self-cultivation.
So, at the last moment, when faced with that choice, she decided to become Jianmu and give those good people a better world.
She hopes that even if she has been coldly treated, she can still see the world with kindness.
In the end she did it.
Seeking benevolence and benevolence.
And Xie Xingchen, his personality is more complicated, but his desires are very pure.
The experience of the first half of his life, when he merged into a new Xie Xingchen, he became a simple self.
He wants to be with the one he loves, make her happy, and let her get what she wants.
So, when Lu Mingshu faces that choice, his attitude is, you go after what you ask, and I will follow you forever.
Where you are, is where my heart is.
I once told myself not to write BE, and this is really not BE.
Are they ignorant?
Of course not.
I have already written in the article, Xiao Sang is tangible, she can come out of form, and of course Ming Shu can also.
Think of Fang Xinyan in "Fairy", her body is just a blade of grass!
As for patching the sky and petrifying the spirit, do I need to tell you about a certain book called "The Story of the Stone"?
So, I really didn't expect that people would think this is a tragedy.
I imagined that after thousands of years, the new Jianmu finally got its shape and turned into the woman who looked like ice and snow.
And the first time she transformed into form, she would see Young Master Merry sitting on the sky-filling stone.
They have had endless years, and of course they will be together forever.
The ending couldn't be better.
Perhaps after many years, Jianmu will become the marriage tree of that world, with prayer cards hung on it.
And the sky-filling stone... Sorry, you will probably be covered with names on your body, with sour sentences like "I love you forever".
I was moved by myself and cried, but you said it was a tragedy? ?
As an author who is not understood, shall I make a fuss? !
That's the end of the explanation~IndoMTL.com~The last is a deep self-reflection.
For me, writing is to support the family, but it is definitely not just to support the family.
It is my spiritual world, my goal in life.
Over the years, I have been pushing myself to write better stories.
Thank you readers who have subscribed, so that I can continue to pursue this as a career.
Although it can't make me rich, but I am really lucky to be able to work with what I love.
Maybe we will not go to the end together, but hope that this part of the same journey can bring you spiritual enjoyment.
Treasure.
I hope I will see you in the next book.
The P.S. ending chapter missed a very important point. After Ming Shu is transformed into Jianmu, those who have died of the Heaven Wheel will be resurrected. It was written too hastily at the time, so I omitted it, and now it has been completed.