The Throne Under the Starry Sky: Written at the end of the first volume

Unconsciously, he wrote 400,000 words, which ended the first volume of this book. Looking back, there are many unsatisfactory places, which are still a bit rough compared to Lao Zhu's expectations. Later, I thought about it, let it be like this, after all, it is a net article, writing 6,000 words a day is a test for Lao Zhu, even though in the team of writers, this kind of speed is not even considered low.

Even if you can't infuse all the spirit to create like a short story, Lao Zhu still hopes that the text can have a vivid beauty and a chewy texture, which is more time-consuming than simply pushing the plot.

For example, if a character has a pronoun, Lao Zhu generally likes to alternate between the character name and the pronoun. Two names are used in turn, and three names are used in cycles. This is not only for the clarity and fluency of the writing, but also a certain quirk of Lao Zhu. Seeing the name of the protagonist in some small white texts appear five times in a short sentence, Lao Zhu will feel his hair horrified.

For example:

At this moment, the head of the guard regiment decided to face his fate.

"Are you ready, buddy?" Qiaopu snapped his mask on with a click, and raised his gun and shield.

"Come again!" The dragon knight launched another charge, rushing towards the enigmatic alien king.

As for the many names that appear in the book, even if it is a dragon-set character, Lao Zhu has a huge database of categorized names as a backing, because the name is an important part of the character's personality.

For example: Qiaopu, the head of the Guards, Adrian, the Golden Dragon Knight, and the two scum supporting Dragoons Bizier and Marshall in Chapter 46. These names are more typical of the British Isles. When naming, I hope to show the traditionality and obedience of the golden hammer.

Returning to the text itself, Lao Zhu himself likes musical language very much. The text with a sense of beautiful rhythm is pleasing to the eye. See the works of the master Wang Zengqi; Lao Zhu's things are very different, but I try to adjust them as much as possible. The suffix of each sentence and paragraph is flat, trying to create a sense of harmony in rhythm.

For example, this sentence that does not appear in the main text: Friends are waiting in the pattering rain with their suitcases on their backs. The cherry crossing covered by the light rain looks a bit gloomy. Jonah took the luggage in Sibi’s hands and understood that it was not. It will be an easy journey.

I have said so much, but I just want to beg you not to glance at the ten lines like reading a small white article when reading. You can find many small interesting details when you read it slowly. It is also a confession in response to the slow update speed. Lao Zhu spends a lot of time on books every day, and the output is very low, because Lao Zhu doesn't want to pursue certain things excessively, and has lost his devotion to himself. Is it bitter? bitter. But seeing the slowly increasing number of favorites and subscriptions, I can't help but feel comforted.

Those who can see here are all real scholars. Thank you for your continued support! Your subscription and various tickets are the greatest encouragement to Lao Zhu. With your support, Lao Zhu can continue to walk on the tangled road of alternative web writing, thank you!

In the second volume, a grand stage will unfold in front of Jonah, but Gu Tie will get deeper and deeper in the mystery. There will be more and more negotiations between the two worlds. Please pay attention to the second volume of "Star Throne": Sonata ? A gust of wind to the south!