Becoming a Saint by Leisure Reading: 2023, I continue to tell the story.
January 1, 2023, 5.08am.
Sit up startled in the dream, and come to the desk again.
Regarding the plot controversy, I think it is better to talk to everyone.
First of all, Bawan really didn't expect such a reaction, which would attract such a great hostility. What the friends in the group know is that yesterday someone in the group has exceeded the limit of @八万 and made direct personal attacks. What they don’t know is that there are dozens of private chats and private messages of insults...
Eighty thousand want to say, but not.
Of course, since someone has started a controversy, Bawan knows that there are still many friends who are not used to speaking out, and they must be uncomfortable, so I will communicate with everyone from the bottom of my heart.
Let's talk about attitude first. Those who celebrate the Chinese New Year are scolded as soon as they come up, and of course 80,000 feels uncomfortable. But after I calmed down, I realized that someone had read the book and got into it, and my thoughts were not clear, and I could understand it after venting it.
Let's talk about this controversial plot.
In fact, the further the story goes, the less the author can do. Because the stage has already been set, as long as the characters proceed according to their role logic, the story will develop naturally.
Let's take a look at the plot of the birth of Xiao Aowu. When Feng Nanzhi gave birth to the child, there are only two paths in the plot——
First: Born, no one notices, Feng Nanzhi proudly raised little Aowu while being her empress;
Second: The current plot, born, was discovered.
If it is the former choice, then what we see is a wave of daily writing, and in the end, we will still return to the second choice.
It's very simple, the Tiger Clan is the nail that the Human Clan must pull out. But with Feng Nanzhi as the patriarch, the human race, that is, Chen Luo, couldn't find a suitable reason to start this war.
Because Feng Nanzhi's role is a fire extinguisher. Only with this character logic can the logic of the previous stories in this book be reasonable. But as the story progresses, she needs to temporarily leave that "fire fighting" position.
And the birth of Xiao Aowu provided a plot opportunity for her to leave this position.
Of course, there is also a way of writing that does not follow the above plot selection. Anyway, the tiger clan can always cause troubles, forcing the human clan to do it...
Full of intrigue and plot, intertwined with misunderstanding and emotion.
But, if you write it like this... Feng Nanzhi is so cruel!
Bawan reiterated once again, Bawan is not Wenqing, and he will not abuse for the sake of abuse.
Therefore, this way of writing was ruled out by 80,000 people from the very beginning.
Okay, the logic of the plot is straightened out, let's look at the specific plot expression.
"Idle Book" is the first book of 80,000. It is the 574th day since it was written. I have stepped on a lot of pitfalls along the way. Thank you very much for your patience and tolerance, but today's situation makes me think I have The 80,000 who had grown up a bit felt a little confused again.
"Feng Nanzhi gave birth to Xiao Aowu, and was discovered by Feng Bugui who came here. Feng Bugui decided to imprison Feng Nanzhi in anger, establish himself as the patriarch, and start the death cause of the new generation of the Tiger Clan..."
Is this a poison point?
Bawan was really sincere and rushed to let Xiao Aowu be born on the last day, but he didn't expect that he seemed to be stepped on by thunder.
I read it over and over again. In the story, firstly, no one was greened, and secondly, no one died; Did not start.
So where are some people angry?
I thought about it for a long time, and after much deliberation, there may be two reasons.
First, the wicked gain power.
In the plot, the overwhelming strength shown by Feng Bugui makes people feel depressing.
Let me say one more thing here, in the setting, the Qiongqi bloodline of the winged tiger is originally the best fighting lineage in the tiger clan. In addition, the reason why Feng Bugui is valued by the Tiger Clan elders naturally has his special reasons. This will be revealed later.
Feng Feifei also said that he hid his strength before the wind returned. Only this time under the anger, it was exposed.
Second, everyone loves Xiao Aowu too much.
I can't see Xiao Aowu being wronged.
What everyone wants to see is that when little Aowu was born, the stars held the moon, the Qilin King sent a barbecue set meal, the Qinglong Emperor personally recognized the princess of the Southern Wilderness, the temple came to congratulate him, and Ye Heng frantically knocked on the stamp.
In this way, it is probably cool.
But the story... can't be written like this.
Just like the plot of Huafan, of course I know that everyone wants to watch Wanli, Fengshen, and Chen Luo suppress the barbarians and kill the sky, but still the same sentence, the story is a process.
As readers, you can skip reading; but as a writer, Bawan cannot skip writing.
As of today, "Idle Book" has 3.5 million characters. Some other authors asked me, how should I write Confucian and Taoist books? In his opinion, Confucianism and Daoist books hold out the freshness of a million words, and after that, they just repeat themselves...
My answer is: don't care about the three words Confucianism and Taoism, what you write is a story.
For example, that pioneering work, in fact, regardless of the setting of the poem, if you just look at his world building and plot promotion, it is also a first-class story.
A truly responsible author cannot rely on emotional hotspots to pile up plots one by one, otherwise the readers will be very happy in the short term, but such a story will end up being a piece of chicken feathers, consuming everyone's enthusiasm and ruining the author's quality.
Sometimes, I would rather my readers tell me that I want to raise it for a while. In my opinion, this is the patience he gave to 80,000. Of course, I have been following up, I can only say that I am full of love...
Having said this, what Bawan actually wants to say is that no matter what the grades are or how Bawan updates, Bawan's original intention of writing a good story for you to read has never changed. As for stories, there are always climaxes and transitions, and there must be some unsatisfactory places. Bawan will still study hard to improve his abilities.
Speaking of the plot itself, like what Bawan just said, I don't know how to write abuse.
Therefore, what has already happened should be the worst case. In fact, in the latest chapter, everyone has also seen that whether it is Niu Dafa or Yun Siyao, these are actually eighty thousand pre-arranged means to break the game.
Please believe me, I also love Xiao Aowu very much.
Then, let's talk about Huafan.
After seeing the long passages expressed by some readers in the chapter reviews, I did read them carefully.
The plot of Huafan was actually decided during the National Day last year.
Speaking of which, writing Huafan will never avoid the ear root. Back then, I had written the outline of the adaptation, the better I had time to talk about the script adaptation of that book, but Accountant Jia ran too fast...
Closer to home.
Explain a few questions.
One, the protagonist knows that his identity is Wang Yun and Wang Bo'an, how could he not know that his soul is wearing Wang Yangming?
This is the trap of preconceived empiricism, just like in a detective drama, the world you see will always only have those few people.
Most of the characters of the ancients corresponded to the names, such as Chen Luo, the word Dongliu, which means "Luoshui Dongliu"; for example, Zhao Yun, the word Zilong, which is the allusion of "Yun Conglong". .
Confucian successors mostly choose characters from ancient books and classics, especially the Four Books and Five Classics, so the rate of duplication of names is very high.
Small knowledge, the Four Books and Five Classics combined, less than 630,000 words.
The two names Wang Shouren and Wang Yangming are well known to later generations. Shouren is the name changed by Wang Yangming's grandfather under the guidance of an expert; and Yangming is the later name.
So the protagonist didn't notice it, so it's not considered a bug.
Another question, this kind of deceitful corpse is very conspicuous, wouldn't it be enough for the enemy to directly kill people with this characteristic in the future?
Well, how should I say it? According to the setting, I set the land area of Daxuan roughly according to the size of Asia. Considering the supernatural power, even if it is a feudal society, the total population of Daxuan is about 2 billion.
In the setting of 80,000, there are people who can reach the step of transforming martial arts every year, but even in the peak period of later generations, there will never be more than 1,000 people every year.
Among the thousand people, the ones who really have the courage to step into this place are a little higher, about two-thirds, that is, six or seven hundred people.
Taking the 2021 census of our country as an example, the number of people who die every day is 27,781, which is 10.14 million people a year.
Randomly sprinkle six or seven hundred people into a huge base, who can say that I will kill all the fraudsters?
Finally, there are the so-called ethical issues.
Some readers said, wouldn't it be good to transform into an independent person again? Why do we have to use the means of possession?
Hmm...Should I say it or not, isn't the soul of the Internet now all possessing a body?
Seriously, it would be strange if a new person came out of illusion. Inexplicably, there is one more person in the world, and it is easy to be targeted.
After all, in the settings, only Chen Luo has memories, and the others appear with sealed memories.
Here, you can explain the ethical issues by the way.
Let's talk about the future Huafan warriors first.
Because Huafan's setting is to close memory, so for future warriors, whether it is reincarnation or rebirth, those people think that they are the identity of the flesh. The difference in treatment is that the Martial Dao will connect with the Dao of Heaven and provide some guidance from the world of mortals. This is also the internal logic of why Chen Luo must first drive thousands of miles before they can start to transform into ordinary people.
Therefore, for these people, even if Daocheng regained his memory, the bond between him and the people around him still exists.
This is also the key to Hongchen's setting - never leave Hongchen for thousands of miles!
As for the cause and effect of the physical body, in the future, the two worlds will be unified, and reincarnation will be rebuilt. Whether you want to compensate for the gift of opportunity, or you want to accept it as a disciple, it all depends on the warrior's own thoughts. Anyway, how can this karma be fulfilled? .
Okay, let's talk about the main character.
The protagonist's memory is not sealed (objectively speaking, if the protagonist's memory is sealed, then the previous plot is no different from the new book), some people find it awkward.
One of the most interesting comments I saw was: I thought it was the plot of the sweeping monk, how cool it is!
But big brother, the protagonist has his own memory, so he went according to the setting of the sweeping monk!
Didn't it say in the latest chapter that Chen Luo's current combat power, relying on his soul, is a little more stable, and he can fight for the first rank!
This is not a trumpet rehearsal!
Chen Luo's way of thinking is still the original colorful way.
It's just that Chen Luo changed his vest again!
Yes ~IndoMTL.com~ Just treat this body as a high-end vest!
Huafan is just a gimmick...
————Separation line————
Tell me about Huafan's arrangement.
In fact, as soon as Wang Yangming's identity came out, everyone should know that I have to study hard.
The study of the mind has been shouted out by readers since the book was hundreds of thousands of words. Until now, the time is ripe.
In the book, in the name of Wang Yangming, I think it is more appropriate to start the study of mind.
Logically, the study of the mind is a study of "doing things with the mind of being out of the world", which just matches the purpose of practice at this stage of martial arts.
However, the fundamental purpose of writing Huafan in 80,000 is just to pave the way for thousands of miles in a more reasonable way, so it will not be written as a popular science article, and the plot of Huafan will not be too long.
It's just because there are other things, such as the plot of Tiger Clan, which will be interspersed, so there will be a process of several days. In short, before the Spring Festival, it will definitely drive thousands of miles.
Spoiler alert: The reason why Wang Yangming was congenitally disabled in the book is because the power of the Heavenly Dao here is limited, and such a character cannot be born!
———— is the dividing line again———
Well, having said so much, I don't know if Bawan has explained some of the controversies clearly.
I am not afraid of abandoning the book, nor afraid of slander, but what I am afraid of is that you recognize me, but read the book with regret.
I'm just a storyteller, if you like to hear it, I'm happy.
I just want to tell the story well, if I can't tell it well, then I will do my best. No one wants to throw pots and bowls on purpose.
The elders of Jiangshan can tolerate me and don't make money in the world!
The last sentence: There is one more chapter today!
Let's catch up on sleep first!