Automotive Black Technology Chapter 1049: : He’s actually a jerk!
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In the original plot of "Big Hero Marines", there are indeed a few things that are not very reasonable; for example, when Hiro uses tricks to win prizes in the underground robot arena at the beginning, the micro robot he uses uses a handle. The way of operation. But when I participated in the entrance design competition, it became clear that I already had equipment for brainwave-controlled robots.
This is also the case in the micro-robot combination that Xiaohong later designed and was finally captured by the professor, which also used brainwave control. This seems to have a sense of technological disconnection.
There are many similar scenes, such as when Baymax used his fist cannon to send Hiro and the professor's daughter out of the portal in the final stage, it also seemed to be plot for the sake of plot.
Because in the setting of the movie, Baymax's body is very light. Its huge shape is actually made of a lightweight carbon fiber skeleton and an inflated polyethylene skin. When Dabai uses the hand cannon to send the two of them out, he can completely discard the professor's daughter's time-travel cabin and rely on the thrust generated by the hand cannon to send himself out.
But according to Li Fanyu's description, which is also the way it was presented in the original movie, Dabai's sacrifice seems too pale.
The plot of the micro-robot combination is made using the principles created by the professor, but the professor is not willing to destroy the entire exhibition hall to steal the robot combination, which is also quite abrupt.
Qiao Ai, who is quite accomplished in plot arrangement for movies, easily discovered these two points beyond resonance.
After entering his professional field, Qiao Ai changed from his previous reticence. Opening up the conversation, he began to refute and criticize Li Fanyu's story from all aspects, focusing on the plot to better highlight the plot.
While Li Fanyu was speechless by this little girl, Ma Rao and Zhou Qingyu looked at each other.
As the little girl talked more and more enthusiastically, Ma Rao's eyes became brighter and brighter.
"Based on the story you described, I suggest that you strengthen Xiao Hong's design ability in the beginning, and directly appear a robot similar to the brain wave control method. Maybe you can let Xiao Hong fake this brain wave remote control into A headset, using different levels of technology to defeat the bullies in the arena.
As for the professor, the villain is too pale and his methods of revenge are a bit low. It is recommended that you enrich the depth of the character before and after you unravel the villain's face. At least at the end of the film, the father and daughter are given the opportunity to reunite and apologize to the protagonist and others, completing the character's self-salvation and making the overall plot more profound.
Also, the most important thing is the last. Benben's sacrifice must be meaningful, so as to make the plot more tense. According to your description, the time-travel portal has a huge appeal. Why not change it to Benben throwing away all the heavy-duty items, including his own armor and the professor's daughter's time-travel cabin, and then relying on a hand cannon to send himself and the two of them there? Pass through the door.
But due to the attraction and the exhaustion of fuel for the hand cannon, Benben used the debris from the ruins to poke a hole in his butt, and used all the electricity to inflate it to create thrust.
In the end, Benben used all his strength to send the two protagonists out of the time-travel gate, but he was sucked back because the battery was exhausted. Such a suspense setting, I think, will make the plot richer and increase suspense. Well, that’s all I found. ”
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When Qiao Ai finished speaking, Ma Rao couldn't help but applauded, "Great suggestion! Such modifications can indeed make the audience's emotions better. Qingyu is indeed right, you are a capable person. A gifted and talented child."
Li Fanyu also smacked his lips. When he was watching a movie before, he was completely fascinated by the cute character Dabai. As for the plot, he really didn't pay much attention to it.
After Qiao Ai said this, he thought about it for a moment. It feels like...there are indeed some rather blunt places.
He raised his eyebrows and put his hand on Qiao Ai's slightly curled head, "Hey, I can't tell you still have a few moments."
Originally, after entering the movie field, Qiao Ai's face had regained that cool dark girl feel.
But when Li Fanyu looked like this, panic instantly appeared in her eyes. He wanted to struggle, but he lowered his hand that had been raised halfway. His body seemed to have been affixed with a talisman. He was shaking as he stood there, with an unknown blush on his face.
"Hey...what a shame! Who wants...who wants your praise!?"
This arrogant look on his face made Li Fanyu amused. He rubbed Qiao Ai's head vigorously as if he was being mischievous. When the latter was shaking all over and crying, he smiled and said, "Hey, what's wrong? Are you shy?"
"No, no, no, no, no, no!"
"Okay." Zhou Qingyu looked at Qiao Ai's abnormal expression and quickly stepped forward to open Li Fanyu's hand and took Qiao Ai into his arms, "Stop teasing her."
"Humph," Li Fanyu rubbed his nose vigorously with his fingers, made a Bruce Lee-style demonstration expression to Qiao Ai, and then walked to Ma Rao's side.
"How about Director Ma, will this script be successful?"
Ma Rao nodded with a haha, "Although I have never been exposed to this kind of all-ages animation movie, and in my opinion this script lacks depth. But I have to say that this is a very interesting story. And through you The description of the scene is very interesting. In short... I think it works!"
"Just think it will work!" Li Fanyu patted Ma Rao on the shoulder, "The first batch of investments in the American branch have been made. Just lead your team and do it! Money is not an issue, I just want a good movie. ."
"You can't talk to me about this," Ma Rao said with a bad smile: "What I can do is help you with the work of director production. Coordination, team deployment, and rhythm control of the entire film , I definitely didn’t say that. I can do that for you, but the specific directing work..."
He pursed his lips at Qiao Ai, "I'm afraid you have to have a good communication with this lady."
Li Fanyu raised his eyebrows, stood up and came to Qiao Ai, who was still hiding behind Zhou Qingyu with his face buried in a complicated expression.
He made a reassuring gesture to Zhou Qingyu, and Zhou Qingyu turned away with a smile.
Seeing Qiao Ai with a blush on her pale face, Li Fan said with a silly smile: "Hey, I just saw that you are quite interested in this movie. How about joining us and making this movie?" ”
"I'm annoyed... I'm annoyed... I'm dead!" Qiao Ai was a little incoherent, neither agreeing nor rejecting.
But she seemed to want to anger Li Fanyu, with an impatient look on her face, but her body, especially her head, could not help but move closer to Li Fanyu.
Seeing this girl like this, Li Fanyu smiled slightly. He stretched out his big hand and covered Qiao Ai's head again.
Seeing Qiao Ai acting like a cat under his caress, with an expression that made her feel so comfortable that she was about to cry, Li Fanyu secretly smiled in his heart.
The soul is light,
It turns out to be a TikTok!