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Liu Shengnan was eating breakfast made by his mother, reading a book in front of him, and looking up at the computer screen from time to time.
What is displayed on the computer screen is Wang Qian’s Weibo page!
Buzz
A new Weibo message appears.
Liu Shengnan glanced lightly, his eyes gradually brightened, he threw aside the book open in front of him, took the computer over, and looked at it carefully.
"Two orioles sing in the green willows, and a row of egrets ascends to the blue sky."
"The window contains the snow of thousands of years in Xiling, and the door holds the ship thousands of miles away from Dongwu."
Liu Shengnan smiled at the corner of his mouth, and the admiration in his eyes grew brighter, and he said softly: "It's such a good poem."
A genius who graduated from graduate school in literature.
Liu Shengnan quickly understood a lot of things from this poem.
Even compared with those seven-character quatrains of classic ancient poems that have been incorporated into textbooks, it is not bad at all.
Especially!
The last few words Wang Qian asked Tang Hepeng for advice made her very happy.
He hasn't changed.
Still moving forward boldly!
Just.
It looks more strategic.
Interesting.
Liu Shengnan didn’t care whether Tang Hepeng was his graduate tutor or not. He quickly liked and retweeted it, and said: "Good poem. This is the best seven-character quatrain ancient poem written in modern times that I have seen since I was a student. Professor Wang , It’s really amazing. Although the works of my teacher Professor Tang can be considered good works now, there is obviously a huge gap between them and Professor Wang!”
Tell the truth and send it.
Liu Shengnan recited these four lines of poetry several times, and the more he read it, the more wonderful it became.
Especially the last two sentences!
She thought it was comparable to those famous sayings throughout the ages!
As soon as this Weibo post was posted, it was immediately liked and forwarded by many of her fans, and there were countless comments.
"Katsuo is indeed an upright girl who shows no respect to her teacher and is ruthless! However, I have one thing to say: I, a person who doesn't understand anything, can also see the huge gap between the two poems. Wang The professor’s work is obviously better than Professor Tang’s, but I don’t know what is better.”
"I felt very happy after reading this poem by Professor Wang, and I support Shengnan."
"Shengnan, do you really want to study poetry writing with Professor Wang? Why? Please release new songs as soon as possible. My roommate has one week left to live. In the last week, he wants to listen to your new songs, otherwise he will die in peace. ”
"The window contains the snow of thousands of years in Xiling, and the door is docked with ships thousands of miles away from Dongwu! What a wonderful poem, absolutely amazing! Professor Wang is really amazing."
"The two are obviously not on the same level, Professor Wang wins."
Tang Hepeng and Bai Hua were sitting in front of the computer.
The moment I saw Wang Qian’s message.
The two of them read it quickly.
Then.
Both of them stared at the screen in silence.
Bai Hua muttered in a low voice.
"The window contains the snow of thousands of years in Xiling, and the door is docked with ships thousands of miles away from Dongwu. This sentence is really well written."
Bai Hua couldn't help but admire.
This is the integrity of a literati.
Tang Hepeng's hand holding the mouse trembled.
Bai Hua was startled, knowing that he might have irritated Professor Tang, and hurriedly whispered: "Professor Tang, this may be a poem written by Wang Qian a long time ago. It may have been carefully crafted by him for a long time, so it is Such sentences."
Tang Hepeng's eyes were still staring at the screen, and he said in a difficult tone: "Even if it took him ten years to write it, it would be dozens of times better than mine! This seven-character quatrain ancient poem is really great! ”
With his knowledge, he can realize the excellence of this poem even more.
It is not an exaggeration to say that it can be passed down for thousands of years!
Especially in modern society, it is as stunning as a standout.
Don't talk about it.
In the past fifty years.
One thing to say.
All the ancient poems that have been created seem very ordinary when compared to this poem, and there is no possibility that they can be equal to it.
These four simple sentences made him feel that they were of great importance.
Bai Hua comforted: "Professor, maybe Wang Qian's family comes from a scholarly family, so he has a deep foundation. In addition, he may have a special talent in ancient poetry, so he can write such a masterpiece. It is possible that his modern poetry It’s just ordinary. Can you try posting a modern poem?”
Bai Hua knows that Tang Hepeng is a good-looking and stubborn person!
If Wang Qian was ridiculed and slapped in the face in public, he would definitely be angry for a long time, even depressed.
So, he made a suggestion to let Tang Hepeng use modern poetry to regain a little face!
Publish a good modern poem to win once, and then it can be said to be a draw, shake hands and make peace, exchange ideas, give and take!
Zhejiang University is also in Xihu City, and is also a sister institution to Zhejiang Music School. Professors from the two schools competed in poetry, and each had his own victory or defeat, which can be passed down as a good story
Tang Hepeng's eyes lit up, and he quickly rummaged through his notebook. Within a minute, he found a page of paper, and said with some confidence: "Okay, then this is it. First! ”
Bai Hua looked at Tang Hepeng's notebook curiously and said softly: "Professor, let's be polite when talking to Wang Qian, he is also a professor of Zhejiang Yin!"
Tang Hepeng nodded and seriously began to type this modern poem called Missed Love!
"The love I missed is like a forgotten toy in my childhood."
"The sweetness of love has been buried in memories"
More than a dozen lines of modern poetry were quickly input by Tang Hepeng.
Then, check that there are no errors and send!
Go on.
He considered his tone again and typed: "Professor Wang's literary talent is as surprising as his musical talent. This seven-character quatrain is a little better than my work, but there are still some flaws in it. If we have a chance to meet next time, we will discuss it in detail."
"Recently, I wrote a modern poem, and I asked Professor Wang to taste it and make progress together."
I looked at it carefully again. I was neither humble nor arrogant. I praised Wang Qian's work and said that the flaws in his work showed his own standards. I was very satisfied.
Tang Hepeng clicked send!
As soon as it was sent out, Tang Hepeng's Weibo was immediately forwarded by many onlookers watching the excitement, and most of them were forwarded to Wang Qian.
Wang Qian, on the other hand, went out to buy breakfast.
So, no reply.
Wait a while!
Wang Qian’s Weibo is extremely quiet.
A smile appeared on Tang Hepeng's face and he said to Bai Hua: "It seems that Wang Qian really has no talent or research on modern poetry. After all, he is not a student of literature, but an actor studying acting."
In words, he didn't like the so-called actors very much, with some disdain.
Bai Hua also nodded: "Maybe, yes, a person's talent and energy are limited. Liu Shengnan is such a genius, but he is not interested in science at all."
Tang Hepeng waited for more than ten minutes and saw that Wang Qian had not replied yet. He couldn't help but typed: "Professor Wang, if you don't understand anything about my work, you can ask me and I will explain it to you. ”
Send!
Bai Hua just wanted to stop Tang Hepeng from saying this, but when he saw the proud look on Tang Hepeng's face, he knew that it was useless to stop him.
When Liu Shengnan saw what Tang Hepeng posted, he pouted and whispered: "Professor Tang really hasn't changed at all. He feels so good about himself. Wang Qian must have been delayed because of other things, not I can’t understand your simple modern poem!”
After being disappointed and doubtful about Wang Qian just now, he was finally broken.
Liu Shengnan has more trust and expectations for Wang Qian.
She didn't believe that Wang Qian was stumped or defeated when the ostrich didn't speak.
There must be other things that have delayed it, otherwise even if it fails, I will face it calmly.
Ding!
Wang Qian’s Weibo has been updated.
Liu Shengnan's eyes instantly lit up, and he hurriedly clicked on it with great anticipation.
Li Qingyao and Yang Yu were also sitting on the sofa in the living room, looking at Wang Qian's Weibo.
Yang Yu whispered: "Yaoyao, when did Wang Qian become so talented? Why didn't you notice it before? You have been married to him for so many years, have you noticed it?"
Li Qingyao thought for a moment and shook his head sadly: "He used to be a bit repulsive to the entertainment industry, and I didn't care too much about him. Then he said he wanted to start a business, so I didn't care about him."
Yang Yu asked curiously: "So, he opened Haidilao? With an annual income of hundreds of millions? Didn't Liu Lihua tell you that at the beginning? He just opened two ordinary hot pot restaurants, making as much money as you make in a year. Not enough cosmetics? ”
Li Qingyao shook his head: "I don't know. I divorced him not because of how much money he made. I just feel that we can't go on anymore. Why bother dragging each other down? Wouldn't it be better to end it as soon as possible and liberate each other?"
Yang Yu gave a thumbs up: "You are all free and easy. Eh? Why is Wang Qian so quiet now? Is he stumped by that Professor Tang? This modern poem looks very powerful. It writes about love. Yes, it’s quite interesting to read.”
Li Qingyao said softly: "Just average!"
Buzz
The computer beeps.
Wang Qian’s Weibo posted new information.
The two hurriedly lowered their heads and looked over!
Wang Qian went downstairs and bought breakfast.
When he came back, Qin Xuerong had already gotten up and was washing up. When he saw Wang Qian coming back after buying breakfast, he smiled happily and narrowed his eyes into two lines.
After hurriedly washing up, Qin Xuerong ran over, leaned on Wang Qian with a smile, picked up the meat buns and ate them: "You got up so early today?"
After getting acquainted with Wang Qian, she knew that Wang Qian usually loved to sleep in.
So, she hoped that she could stay with Wang Qian and help him deal with things, so that Wang Qian could have time to sleep in.
However, I still get up early recently.
Today, the earliest.
Wang Qian also looked at the computer while eating: "I have invested tens of millions, so I have to show that I care, otherwise others will think that I have too much money to spend."
Qin Xuerong laughed when Wang Qian said: "Isn't this a good start?"
She also read the report for the first time just now and is very satisfied with the current data!
The next step is to see if we can keep this data.
Seeing Wang Qian operating on Weibo, Qin Xuerong looked at it carefully with curiosity and widened his eyes: "Who is this professor from Zhejiang University? Writing poems with you? Why?"
Wang Qian explained a little bit.
Qin Xuerong's face was full of shock, feeling like he had missed twenty episodes: "Liu Shengnan wants to learn poetry from you as her teacher? So, her teacher is unwilling? She wants to teach you poetry? Are you fighting?"
Wang Qian smiled and said: "It doesn't count as a battle. He thinks he is very powerful. I just let him recognize the reality."
Qin Xuerong looked at the seven-character ancient poem that Wang Qian posted just now, and said in surprise: "Your poem is too good, everyone must recognize the reality! However, he seems to have changed his strategy. Can you play modern poetry with you? ”
Qin Xuerong looked at Wang Qian proudly, curious and expectant.
Wang Qian touched his chin, thought for a second, and then started typing.
"Love is an eternal artistic topic in poetry. I won't say how good your work is, Professor Tang."
"Professor Tang, how about taking a look at this piece of mine?"
"Error"
"I have traveled through Jiangnan"
"The face that waits for the seasons is like the blooming and falling of lotus flowers"
"If the east wind does not come, the catkins in March will not fly"
"Your heart is like a small lonely city"
"Just like the bluestone street facing the evening"
"If the tillers do not sound, the spring curtain of March will not be lifted"
"Your heart is like a small window tightly closed"
"My dada's horse hooves are beautiful mistakes"
"I am not a returnee"
"It's a passer-by."
Above!
"This poem was written on a whim. Professor Tang, please give me some pointers. By the way, point out the flaws in my last seven-character quatrain poem so that I can improve! I think Professor Tang will satisfy me. This is a small request.”
Send!
Wang Qian was about to see everyone’s reaction.
But.
A hot red lip with a meaty bun has been pressed against the cheek, breathing rapidly: "This poem is really great. Me"
Qin Xuerong's eyes became misty when he looked at Wang Qian.
Wang Qian held him in his arms and kissed him on the forehead: "Be good, have a good breakfast. This is the office."
Office?
For some reason, Qin Xuerong's eyes flashed with excitement and eagerness to try, and he immediately laughed and got under the desk.
Wang Qian hurriedly pulled him up: "Let's go back and play again. We work here. Xu Zhongfei will come over at any time, so be good!"
Qin Xuerong looked a little disappointed, said oh, then continued to eat breakfast on Wang Qian, and praised: "Your poem is really beautiful."
After all, ancient poetry requires appreciation!
No matter how good the ancient poetry is, if ordinary people read it, it is actually difficult for them to see its beauty in a short time.
So, most people know some of the inherent beauty expressed in them only after reading the translation and appreciation of ancient poems.
But.
Modern poetry is different.
Compared with ancient poetry, modern poetry is very straightforward.
When poets write modern poems, many of them are very unrestrained and straightforward, even testing wildly on the edge of harmony, or going deep into harmony!
So, anyone who knows Chinese characters and reads a modern poem once or twice will be able to roughly understand its meaning and understand the good and bad aspects of this modern poem!
This song is wrong.
Obviously.
Qin Xuerong felt very good after reading it.
Especially the last two sentences, I felt like crying inexplicably after reading it.
I want to cry!
So sad.
That misunderstood Jiangnan woman must be very disappointed!
When Wang Qian saw his Weibo, it exploded instantly.
Many people actually don’t understand much about the ancient poem just now. They just have a vague feeling of being powerful and obviously much better than Tang Hepeng’s works. Then they brag with everyone to show that they understand it very well. , and many people simply remained silent and said nothing.
And this modern poem.
Everyone understands it!
Unless you are illiterate.
"Wow, wow, I actually cried."
"So touched, so sad, so disappointed! I was completely involved in this poem, and I can imagine how disappointed and sad the protagonist is."
"Professor Wang, this poem is much better than Professor Tang's poem. I don't feel much after reading Professor Tang's modern poems. It's like I'm just moaning and pretending. Professor Wang's poem feels so refreshing. Naturally, it’s full of sadness and emotion! ”
"Good poetry, good poetry, good poetry! Professor Wang's literary talent is so awesome."
"Where is Professor Tang? Come and comment!"
Except these fans and fans are talking like crazy.
Some celebrities and artists watching the excitement couldn't help but interact with Wang Qian.
Liu Jifeng: "Brother, these two works of yours have directly established your position in the Chinese literary world. To be honest, I didn't understand the ancient poem just now, but it must be a good work. I understand this modern poem. , It’s really great. Brother is awesome.”
Liu Jifeng is also an upright boy, and he openly calls him "senior brother" and seems very close to him.
Sophie: "Professor, boss, I love this poem "Error" so much. Next time I see you, can I get the autograph of this poem?"
There are several other small star artists interacting with Wang Qian!
Even!
Among them was a big name that Wang Qian could not even imagine.
Li Qingyao.
Li Qingyao also reposted and liked Wang Qian’s poem and posted two words: “Good poem!”
This is the first public interaction between Li Qingyao and Wang Qian since they registered on Weibo respectively.
Of course, Wang Qian hasn't replied yet, and only after he replies does it count as mutual action.
For the time being, Li Qingyao can only do it on his own.
Wang Qian was a little surprised when he saw that Li Qingyao had sent him a message. He immediately replied to Li Qingyao with only two words: "Thank you."
The interaction is completed, and it is over simply by one person moving.
Replied to Liu Jifeng again: "Junior brother, thank you, thank you, keep a low profile, keep a low profile."
Liu Jifeng immediately replied: "I understand, I understand, then let me put it another way, senior brother is awesome!"
Wang Qian was speechless to Liu Jifeng.
Liu Shengnan also sent a message requesting interaction: "What a beautiful, sad poem! Professor, I also secretly wrote some modern poems myself, but compared with your mistake, they are all **** and unsightly. ”
Wang Qian replied to Liu Shengnan: "It's a fair award, so-so. There should be flaws. I'm still waiting for Professor Tang's guidance to make progress."
On Tang Hepeng’s Weibo, the scene was unprecedentedly lively.
He has a total of tens of thousands of followers, which has never been so lively before. More than 100,000 people have left messages below, which is many times more than the total number of his comments in the past few years.
"Professor Tang, please give some advice to Professor Wang. Professor Wang wants to make progress!"
"Professor Tang, please comment professionally on Professor Wang's poem and point out the flaws."
"Professor Tang, why don't you speak?"
"Professor Tang, I personally think that your work is several grades worse than Professor Wang's."
"Professor Tang, please point out the flaws in Professor Wang's two works."
After Tang Hepeng and Bai Hua finished reading Wang Qian's poem, they remained silent for more than a minute, with no one speaking.
In the office, it was eerily quiet.
Tang Hepeng's eyes were round and staring at the computer screen, with some disbelief in his eyes.
He didn't believe that Wang Qian could write such a good modern poem!
Okay, it made him want to shred the notebooks he had accumulated over more than ten years.
But.
He couldn't say it.
Because.
Speak out.
He lost.
So.
He closed his mouth tightly and said nothing.
He stared closely at Wang Qian's poems, trying to find some flaws.
Bai Hua didn't know how to comfort Tang Hepeng now, so he could only remain silent and watch the situation as an audience for the time being.
Tang Hepeng slowly tapped the keyboard with both hands and replied to Wang Qian: "It's okay. It's a little better than this modern poem of mine, but there are still some flaws, but the flaws can't be concealed. It's still a good poem. A good work. Let me sort out the flaws in your two works and discuss them with you next time. It may be helpful to you."
Send.
Professor Tang still refuses to admit defeat.
No matter how good or beautiful your writing is.
I just said it was flawed!
What can you do!
There is no absolute good or bad in words.
So, since ancient times, there has been a saying that literature is the best.
No matter how good your work is, I just don’t recognize it.
I just think your work is flawed.
What can you do?
Admitting that your work is a little better than mine is a huge favor!
Tang Hepeng looked serious and was about to turn off the computer and leave the office. He didn't want to read or play on Weibo.
These people on Weibo are so bad.
But!
A message jumped out immediately.
Wang Qian’s latest news has been sent over again.
"Oh? Professor Tang thinks there are flaws in this piece of mine? So, what are the flaws? Please teach me now, Professor Tang. I want to make progress quickly."
"I had another idea just now, also about love."
"Professor Tang, take a look at this piece of mine. Are there any flaws? Please tell me clearly!"
When Bai Hua saw this, he stood up quickly and said, "Professor Tang, why don't we go for a walk first?"
Although he hasn't seen any works written by Wang Qian, he is afraid that Tang Hepeng will be stimulated by Wang Qian again.