Lord of the Mysteries: The fourth part summarizes and asks for leave and monthly ticket

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Undead, a gift, or a curse, this is the theme of the fourth part, in fact, it is reflected in many people, such as Ards, Anderson, Leonard, etc., and finally Xiaoke saw those silkworm cocoons , Seeing the earth man wrapped in silkworm cocoons and dressed in modern clothes, seeing three of the silkworm cocoons have broken, the question of the gift or the curse, I do n’t think I need to point it out anymore, the horror horror suspense crazy dark of the whole world The tone appeared again.

This is one of the most impactful pictures I expected before opening the book. Now it looks good, laugh.

The entire fourth part, progressing layer by layer, recovering the forehead, including the line Anderson buried from the middle of the third part, and finally there was a strong explosion and reverberation. I am still quite satisfied. The remaining lines, We will also do some recycling in the fifth part.

However, there are still some problems in the fourth part. One is that the rich lack daily conflicts. Once stretched, they do n’t know how to build tension, and many points have to explain and have to mention it. Before Chanis Gate, I was a little anxious. The turning point was not soft enough, and the last pad was missing. As I said before, I wo n’t say much.

Second, the plot is too long, and there is something wrong with the rhythm.

From the end of June to the middle of July, my writing status was a bit scorched. I got formula from Klein, and the Leonard grave digging ended. The tension of the whole plot fell from the peak. I tried to make up for it To find new stimulation points, but the effect is not very good. As for the reason, I later figured it out roughly, lacking changes.

Popularly speaking, it is too long to upgrade, from the middle part of the third part to the Secret Puppeteer, to the second and middle parts after the two or three hundred chapters, the aesthetic begins to fatigue, the tension begins to decline, and the essential change is urgently needed.

So, I adjusted the next rhythm, pushed everything that can be put to the back, and all that can be described side by side, very clearly aiming at the two lines of upgrade and revenge. From the perspective of self-feel and specific data, The effect is good.

Of course, this also caused some problems. There are a few places that are relatively fast, such as the Kedelon section, which should be more stretched and twisted.

Well, for me, upgrading is not only a refreshing point, but also an expectation point, or a tool for controlling the rhythm. The former is easy to understand. Even in the real world, the upgrade is everywhere. The staff has the path of promotion. The businessman Both officials and officials, the reality of not upgrading does not exist, but some are not obvious.

The latter one is more complicated. I simplified it into the pursuit of change. Even the daily books also need to change, and the stimulation of new things is needed. One upgrade can bring many changes, so it can be used to control rhythm and measure problems.

Speed ​​up the rhythm and come to the final climax plot. For an author, the most important thing is to straighten out emotions, straighten out the emotions you want to express, and remove harmful and unnecessary things to ensure the emotional layer. Progression, accumulation, and explosion of layers are not disturbed, interrupted, or diluted.

So, in the last part, I gave up a little sense of urgency. First of all, after pulling out the line Adam, unless the Rose School is pulled in again, it will naturally lack a sense of urgency, and if you do that, the scene will be Too chaotic to put emotions on revenge and sentimentality.

Secondly, this scene is directed by Xiao Ke. Roughly, it is necessary to keep things under control. Too many accidents and urgency will cause digestion and upgrade to be unreasonable, and divide revenge and upgrade into two lines. After procrastination, there must be something wrong with the rhythm and there is no tension.

Also, the existence of the evil spirits of the Red Angel at the beginning will also make the sense of urgency unattractive. This is a little sacrifice to shape the character.

Well, let's intersperse the memories of Ince. The plump characters are actually not helpful for emotions, so I was sacrificed.

In fact, it is not impossible to create a sense of urgency in the middle, for example, to advance the death of Daly and detonate that emotion in the middle, creating a sense of urgency that Ince can kill everyone and escape. In the end, the ending rhyme and the poignant ending can't guarantee that the emotions are in place. After measuring, I can only make such a choice.

For Daly, the earliest persona, I put her in the line of Goddess of the Night to pursue Death God authority, and later gave up this idea, let her be a common genius, and captain this common common Together in the middle of Night Watcher, there is a story with a less protagonist template, which is very unique and rare in the context of the entire story and the tone of the atmosphere.

Yeah, yes, I often use words that are a little bit irregular. It ’s strange, so is the word order. I'm doing some experiments. I hope to convey the pictures in my mind and emotions in my heart to you in the most vivid way. At this time, I will not consider whether to use adjectives, verbs, or nouns, but which word to consider. Or which words can better show the key of the picture, more intuitive and more intuitive.

Many authors have similar problems. I remember many books behind Wen Ruian. Some places seem to be filled with water. For example, a bunch of "knife" characters surround a person ’s name, but they are actually trying to shape it better. The picture can better convey the feeling and break through the limitation of the text. At this point, the text is always not like the picture.

This is the technical summary of the fourth part. As for who is the third or first transmigrator, you can guess, hehe.

Um, as usual, the first part ends rest, and the ideal method, although there are weekends, it is still only Quinn for three days, and the update will resume at half past 12 at noon next Tuesday.

Part 5, Red Priest, everyone can do reading comprehension, laugh.

Finally, I pushed two books, one of them is the "Dragon System of the Ten Thousand Realms". The story I cut is rare. What is **** romance and the name of the people is still very new.

One is "Say to the Sword", a new work by the old great **** Lan Di.

Finally, at the end, the fourth part ends with monthly tickets ~