Fantasy System Chapter 460: We are still good friends if we do n’t make trouble
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"The story is an author who once wrote manga plots. He transformed into a light novel writer. Although he started to write light novels with some achievements, he later failed and was accepted by his companions. Finally, he helped in the manga section. Companion won the first place and understood the direction of his writing? "
In the spacious and bright living room, Eriri sitting on the sofa holds the manuscript in hand and asks Kasumigaoka Utaha with a disdainful look: "Are you sure this is not a true portrayal of your heart?"
Kasumigaoka Utaha plucked his long hair and stood in front of Eriri, said indifferently: "Only Sawamura you brain circuit will think that it is my inner portrayal, the plot and reality of the anime are different, is it your long It ’s the same as Airi, are you really the Airi that is loved by your father all day long? "
"You!"
Eriri stood up with a flick of the table and grunted dissatisfiedly: "I thought what kind of plot you would write in Kasumi Utako, but I didn't expect such a simple plot? How could such a plot be comparable to Senju Muramasa? Short story? "
"It's better than someone who can't even write?" Kasumigaoka Utaha replied displeasurely.
"I have some research on original plots anyway. I can write out plots like yours!" Eriri also put his waist up.
This time Mu Fan did not refute Eriri, but put down the manuscript and said seriously: "Indeed, only such a plot seems a bit difficult to win Senju Muramasa."
If the story of manga can be made into a short story, Mu Fan has a lot of memories. For example, "Your Name" and "Form of Sound" in the previous life are very good plots, but this time he has no choice. To write these plots. "
Because the flow of book copying is not always the first, only the strong one is king.
It was true that the scripts of Shinkai and Hayao Miyazaki in that world were almost impeccable, and they made people unable to bear the tears and felt deeply, but they cannot be said to be very good. No one can surpass him in such a parallel world.
If you do n’t mention others, the bald Wu Ke who once knew the B1 production group might write a good script.
Like the "Accel World" and "Kono Subarashii Sekai ni Shukufuku wo" copied from the Mu Fan copybook stream, although the sales are good, there are still some difficulties to surpass Senju Muramasa.
Perhaps, in such a world, it is not impossible for Senju Muramasa to write a short storyline that becomes a script beyond Xinhaicheng.
But Kasumigaoka Utaha really came to this step with her own talent. If you say, Senpai has just entered the university, she is very Strength and has the potential to write novels.
So Mu Fan only planned that he would not participate in a little modification of the manga script, and the entire plot was solely responsible for Senpai.
After talking, Mu Fan smiled again, adding: "I guess Senpai's manga plot is not the only one?"
Kasumigaoka Utaha shined in front of Mu Fan, narrow and beautiful eyes squinted, hair hanging on shoulders, staring at Mu Fan ’s eyes, and said lightly: "Sure enough it is Kouhai-kun, you can see it, no Wrong. This is just an outline. The true plot needs to be filled by the outline. The simplicity of the short story is that it does not require so many sideline plots. As long as the main line is integrated, the thoughtful writing and sentences will make people feel moved. Okay. "
The gentle and elegant voice shocked the spirit of Mu Fan. He lifted his head and saw the face from Senpai. Mu Fan found that the face of Senpai was very delicate. The snowy face did not contain traces of impurities. It was fresh and refined, and was beautiful.
Because Senpai was looking down at her sitting in a chair, a few strands of compliant hair happened to fall on the tip of the nose of Mu Fan, and the fragrance of the girl mixed in the hair came from, making Mu Fan ’s heartbeat faster He looked up slightly red and lowered his head, but he happened to see the two peaks of Senpai tightly stretched out of his clothes. Even under the cover of underwear, he could still see the snow-white color of the corner of the perfect silhouette from the perspective of looking down. .
After seeing Mu Fan not speaking for a long time, Kasumigaoka Utaha blinked in amazement and lowered his head. Then he realized what Mu Fan had just seen, and his face was flushed with blush. He said strangely: "Kouhai-kun, lecherous ... ... "
Listen to this, Mu Fan coughed awkwardly and reasonably, the matter just now was completely force majeure, but he also read it anyway, and no matter how he explained it, he could not change this fact, he could only smile apologetically, Diverted the topic and said: "Senpai, we only have four days left, let's talk about the new plot! If this short manga won the first place, there is a chance to make a movie."
The Eriri, which was a little unhappy when I saw Kasumigaoka Utaha that was going to Mu Fan, immediately met with the urge to say: "Yes, let's take out the plot and tell us."
Seeing that Mu Fan is unwilling to continue on the topic just now, Kasumigaoka Utaha can only take out a pile of printed manuscripts from the cabinet and put them on the table: "This is the whole story about the short light novel manga."
Because time is tight, Mu Fan and Eriri read it carefully.
In the view of Mu Fan, the whole plot is much more exciting than the outline. After all, the outline is only an overview of the plot. The same outline is written in the hands of the great **** author and the ordinary author. Two completely different Style and charm, this is the gap between authors.
Kasumigaoka Utaha wrote the text author [Ichinose Yu] who contributed to the manga section together with a man and a woman [Mu Fan] and [Pear] who grew up together, and finally failed in the manga section selection finals and ended in second place. s story.
Because of the failure, the online manga readers who were originally looking forward to their trio, seeing a consistent discussion on the Internet is the problem with the text of the novel. Ichinose Yu, regardless of the retention of Mu Fan and Li Zi, left them. .
Half a month later, Ichinose Yu submitted E-Mule Library and became the author of E-Mule Library. Although the first book had some achievements, she could not understand the writing of the second book because the online expectations were too high the way.
Helpless, she met her former companion again, hoping that she could return to the studio to re-write manga, and told her that she had always believed in her text and never resented her for her last failure.
But Ichinose Rain did not plan to go back, intending to prove her talent with light novels and prove her Strength.
After the first book is over, she has been searching for the writing method of the second book. She looks at the comments on the Internet and sorts out the faults of the previous book. According to the way the reader thinks, others expect it The second book was written in a way that failed in the end, and even all readers who loved her changed from love to aversion, and even the editor did not bother her.
Ichinose Yu ’s heart fell from the highest expectation point to the greatest disappointment from the previous expectation of the second book.
At this moment, she remembered the failure of her companion manga festival a few years ago, and the irony on the Internet. She was discouraged and felt that she had betrayed her only for writing, and hid in the room for a few days. Decided to jump into the river to end his useless life, but at this moment the companion was going to find her. As a result, after seeing this scene, he jumped into the deep water and rescued her desperately.
The next is a very inspirational plot. After the companion ’s enlightenment and persuasion, as well as a lot of side stories and happy stories, Ichinose Yu decided to help his companions fulfill their wishes and began to write a careful one. The short text, because the manga section is about to begin, Ichinose Rain's sleepless text for three days, was finally written before the manga section, and the three people worked together for three days to finally complete the short section manga.
And they also defeated the team that defeated them to win the first place in one fell swoop, and finally got the best text. Ichinose Yu said in an interview that she wanted to get the first heart of the manga festival, and It is only now that I understand the importance of my partners. With the companionship of my partners, she has succeeded because she is no longer alone, and the whole story has changed from the original suppression to the companions. Inspiring stories that encourage each other.
Moreover, when interviewing the male companion, the male companion said that the reason why he helped Ichinose Yu was because his relatives and friends who wanted to become a manga family did not support him when he was a child. Encouragement only let him go to this step, and he also wants to complete the ideal of Ichinose Yu at this time.
Hearing here, Ichinose Yu shed tears, and finally found the courage to confess to her male companion who has been helping her in the interview.
The male companion also extended a hand to her: "I have loved you since I was a child ..."
Finally, the two came together because of love, and brought the longing love color, the story ends ...
"Wait!"
Looking at the whole story, a cry of dissatisfaction came, and Mu Fan and Kasumigaoka Utaha turned around. I saw that Eriri “snapped” and put the text on the table, gnashing his teeth and staring at Kasumigaoka Utaha Uncomfortable said: "Are you yy a bit too much, the three people in the studio, why Ichinose Yu who has been doing things can get love, the one who has always been obscured to help Mufan and Yizhi [Li Zi] of Seyu has few words! "