Fantasy System Chapter 461: The essential transformation of the novel

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Glancing at Eriri, Kasumigaoka Utaha said disapprovingly: "Her character is obscured by obscurity. She does more work and talks less. There are more lines, but she can't show her spirit of selfless dedication."

"Even if she likes [Mu Fan], how could the ending become her heartfelt blessing Mu Fan?"

Eriri pointed to the person above and wrote: "Also, what is this look? The bangs of Twintail cover the eyes and face too long. Can you tell me what kind of fresh and refined face this is? Even if there are few lines in the drama, even if you do n’t have a cheeky face? Are you too shameless? "

Kasumigaoka Utaha raised his arms and said indifferently: "In the plot of the novel, showing no face can increase mystery. Some supporting actresses will meet the light and die."

Eriri despised: "Why don't you design such a hairstyle for Ichinose Yu? Let her be mysterious too!"

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Listening to the quarrel between the two women, Mu Fan put down the text. Although the story seems simple, it is full of many special meanings.

And it is restored with Kasumigaoka Utaha's delicate writing, and occasionally with some slightly beautiful sentences of the second grade, it is very poetic and has the realistic color of the previous generation Jing Ani.

Especially at the beginning, the mentality exploded regardless of [Mu Fan] to persuade the psychological description of Ichinose Yu, and later Ichinose Yu did not listen to Mufan ’s invitation, the kind of light novel talent who desperately wanted to prove his own, was determined according to Writing in the direction that the reader expects will certainly lead to a successful psychological attitude.

In the end, when it was hit, the attitude change with greater expectation and greater disappointment occurred, and finally Mu Mu, who jumped to save the rain of Ichinose, walked with her The words made people cry.

Because Mufan had always remembered the help of Ichinose Yu when he was a child, he helped Ichinose Yu, and the selfless pear for love has always been silently loving Mufan, and finally understood Ichinose Yu at the end. The love with Mu Fan, still did not say silently bless their psychology.

Transform this book from the original depression into a passionate friendship and love story.

If you use Eriri and his understanding of manga, and the performance of the split mirror, it is enough to make people inadvertently tearful.

"Senpai, I feel that at least I should show my face to Pear, because your book describes passers-by as having a face, but Pear has no face. As a female partner in the novel, it seems really a bit too mysterious. "Mu Fan agrees."

Eriri immediately met, staring at Kasumigaoka Utaha: "Yeah, how do I feel that you are targeting this supporting actress, there is no human rights for supporting actress!"

"Okay, let ’s turn her into a blue-haired single ponytail."

I heard Mu Fan said so, and the manga season is about to start. Kasumigaoka Utaha can only agree to it. Anyway, modifying a person ’s appearance does not have much impact on the story of the book. After the three people have studied the settings, It was Mu Fan and Eriri that started to draw manga.

Because Kasumigaoka Utaha does not have any talent for manga, I can only watch the paintings of two people aside, and occasionally pour water on the side to maintain the mental state of Mu Fan and Eriri.

Seeing the industrious Kasumigaoka Utaha, Eriri can be broken, and at this opportunity, he kept opening his mouth to call Senpai.

"Please help me get a drink."

"I'm hungry, I remember there is a supermarket near your house, buy some fries."

"Can you stare at him without standing beside Mu Fan, it will disturb him to draw."

The Kasumigaoka Utaha, who had just returned from outside with a bag of snacks, heard the call of Eriri, but was a little annoyed. She stuffed a fries in her mouth and said coldly: "I advise you to take You spend my time on drawing manga, otherwise you ca n’t catch up with the manga festival, I ca n’t spare you. ”

Looking at the frosty face of Kasumigaoka Utaha who gritted his teeth, Eriri remembered that there were less than four days left, and he understood the urgency of time in his heart, and he could only start to paint again intently.

For a whole day, Mu Fan and Eriri are both at Kasumigaoka Utaha ’s home, but it takes a lot of time to study the plot and personal settings. If you rush to draft, it may be too late tonight. Mu Fan can only hit Lily. A phone call to let her take care of Sagiri and decided to live with Eriri at Kasumigaoka Utaha tonight.

Mu Fan and Eriri, Kasumigaoka Utaha light novel authors and painters are long-term stay-up occupations, and it ’s okay to stay up all night.

In the evening, Mu Fan prepared some simple dishes, and after three people finished eating, they began to continue to code.

Just at ten o'clock, Mu Fan and Eriri felt that the whole room seemed much quieter than during the day.

"Strange, what about Senpai?"

The continuous silence makes Mu Fan a little strange. After thinking about this reason, I suddenly remembered the Senpai who has been serving him and Eriri. It seems that Senpai has not been here for a long time.

Mu Fan turned around in surprise, just turned his head and saw Senpai lying asleep on the table, suddenly crying and laughing.

It turned out that Senpai was too tired to sleep.

Mu Fan did n’t disturb Senpai. Instead, he took off his coat and walked over to cover Senpai. Normal people need to be covered with quilt to sleep at night, just like lying on the table and sleeping without wearing anything. She catches a cold and wakes up Senpai. She may not be able to fall asleep. It is no problem to put a dress on her.

After seeing Mu Fan leaving, Eriri turned back, seeing that Mu Fan put on clothes for Kasumigaoka Utaha, Eriri was a little envious, saying: "Mu Fan, you are still as gentle as in the past."

Mu Fan smiled faintly: "Senpai has been hit by fiction for the first seven days, resulting in not sleeping well. In the past few days, I have been thinking about the plot of the short story. Perhaps it is because we live here that she can sleep peacefully. Let her sleep in peace. "

In fact, Mu Fan has long seen that Senpai is a bit tired. After all, her dark circles are getting heavier, especially the natural beauty of Senpai. Once a little flaw appears on her face, you can see it at a glance.

It can be said that Senpai can fall asleep so much, Mu Fan feels relieved.

After hearing Mu Fan, Eriri froze for a moment, whispering secretly in her heart: "Although her novel was hit, but I was a little envious of her at this moment ..."

Since Eriri said this in his heart, Mu Fan did not hear it. The two are now sitting on a table, Mu Fan is on the left, and Eriri is drawing on the right.

Mu Fan and Eriri are drawn until 1 a.m., because drawing manga is a laborious and laborious physical activity. Even if I stayed up all night today, I still have no energy to draw tomorrow. Mu Fan and Eriri can only be decided at this time Take a rest and go to work tomorrow morning.

They slapped on the ground without paying much attention and fell asleep next to each other. The next day, Mu Fan woke up and moved his body, but he felt that his body seemed to be bound by something. Facing his quiet face.

At this time, Eriri unlocked Twintail when she slept last night, with long blond hair spread over her shoulders, and then combined with a soft and peaceful sleep, it looks like a sleeping beauty, very sweet Pretty.

I did n’t expect that Eriri was so soft.

Mu Fan could not help but smile and moved his body to find that Eriri kicked off the quilt when he slept last night. At this time, he was like an octopus, holding his body tightly.

Facing the quiet and pleasant sleeping position of Eriri at this time, Mu Fan could n’t bear to disturb her and could only decide to wait for her to greet and lie here and watch her quietly.

But Mu Fan ’s previous struggle has cleared the Eriri ’s mind a lot, opened his eyes, and just saw the angular face of Mu Fan, feeling his arms and hands are holding Mu Fan, and his face suddenly turned red Too.

"You wake up, Eriri."

When I saw Eriri, my fair face climbed with a blush, and Mu Fan's face could not help showing a smile.

"En."

Eriri shy nodded, and then quickly withdrew her hand, but there were some deer bumps in her heart. When sleeping at home, there was a big bear in her big bed that she could hold. Sex treats Mu Fan as a pillow.

And it happened to be seen by Mu Fan!

Too shameful!

But in fact, Eriri thinks a lot, Mu Fan can't detect the thoughts of Eriri, and stands up and said: "I just accidentally bumped into you and interrupted your rest. It's still too early and you sleep again Yes, I'll make some breakfast. After you and Senpai are finished, we will continue to work. "

After seeing the Mu Fan that offered to leave for breakfast, Eriri felt warm in his heart and smiled sweetly.

Mu Fan he is really a gentle boy!