My Girlfriend has a System Chapter 150: Angry little girl

　　 "Kiss one, kiss one..."

　　 It's never too big to be coaxing, nor is it their business anyway.

　　 But it is Su Hao and Su Xiaoyi's thing!

　　 "What should I do now? What should I do? Damn Su Hao, I also put all my strength on my sister..." Su Xiaoyi suddenly panicked. How could she kiss Su Hao?

　　 But the cry of surroundings people...

　　 Inevitably, she could not help complaining.

　　 Eun, it's really Su Hao's fault.

　　although makes Su Hao do its best...it is myself.

　　Su Hao also sighed. I was a little childish just now.

　　 It's just a joke, why be serious.

　　 But it doesn’t matter, kiss it or not, it’s just a joke between teenagers and girls, Su Hao said two good words, for example, I just wanted to treat Ouyang’s long legs...

　　cough cough, to Ouyang Yan’s saying ‘this is just a joke, don’t take it seriously’, anyway, everyone knows that this kind of ‘pro kiss’ promise is just a joke-like joke.

　　Of course, the everybody were disappointed, but what about it, what to do with Su Hao.

　　 So Su Hao thought about start to talk: "Xiaoyi, I--"

　　Su Xiaoyi's on the face suddenly blushed, then turned around and ran.

　　 slender long legs ran to the door of Dojo within a few steps, changed shoes at the fastest speed, and suddenly disappeared.

　　Su Xiaoyi, escaped...

　　 "Hey, brother, it's a pity, then girl although is younger, but people are pretty!"

　　 "After all, young age, also is a little bit shy."

　　 "Brothers, don't stun, chase, maybe you can still encounter a good encounter!"

　　The crowd of onlookers talked a lot.

　　Su Hao is stiff there, mouth like a goldfish, one in one.

　　 "I haven't finished speaking yet..."

　　......

　　When Su Hao came home, Su Xiaoyi had already returned home, shut himself in the room and never came out.

　　 Cousin Su Qianxin seems to have gone out to buy food. She is trying to move towards the image of a housewife.

　　 Su Qianxin goes shopping every day, and once you buy it is a whole lot, then basically the ingredients will be consumed in less than 24 hours.

　　although so far Su Hao has not eaten a bite of her cooking...

　　 waste!

　　Su Hao's heart hurts a little.

　　 He suddenly felt that it was a wrong decision to allow his cousin to cook.

　　Washing food money alone can make Su Hao feel distressed for a long time, which definitely affects the review.

　　 "Forget it, first write the writing style instruction that Feng Shu said." Su Hao took a deep breath and sat in front of the computer.

　　neophyte stories's writing style actually says that that's all is the bright spot, one is small and the other is white.

　　 Small is cool, white is fast, of course, it’s just a little together, cool.

　　 A ‘cool’ character summarizes all of neophyte stories, just like a ‘handsome’ character, summarizes the life of Su Hao.

　　En, Su Hao thinks so.

　　 Of course, such a simple writing is definitely not acceptable. This is no different from the outline. You have to pour water into it to make the outline plump to become a text.

　　 So I wrote Su Hao's hard-working book, centered on the word "shuang", and wrote more than two thousand words in a chic style.

　　although can still have more water, but who made this time free of manuscript fees.

If you don’t make money, why do you have so much water?

After writing, Su Hao sent it to Feng Shu.

　　 Editor people have been waiting for their eyes, if they are not ‘subscribed' (pay for the manuscript), they all want to go to Su Hao’s home with a knife to rush!

　　 The author can not understand the writing skills of neophyte stories, because the current authors are all born in literary, continue to write literary, can also feed themselves.

　　 But Editor doesn't work!

　　As Editor, you will not finish the main points, how to review? How to be smart with your eyes?

　　 "The Little White writing technique has been sent!" Feng Shu immediately shouted after receiving the file.

　　Brief, Editors are all around.

　　"Where and where?"

　　"How to write, why do the authors under my hands feel the same way, so they completely thrash the street?"

　　 "Is there any way to succeed here?"

　　 They are surrounded by Feng Shu computers, and in the eyes is full of curiosity and excitement.

　　 Even Zi Ye Editor, which is not very good with Su Hao, also got together.

　　 No way, this is their job.

　　 Finally, Editor Lan Zao coughed: "Feng Shu, first put the courses in the author's area, and then send it to us by mail."

　　 "Okay, Editor." Feng Shu quickly manipulated it, and he added a title to the Su Hao lecture.

　　——"Speech Great God finger pointing, on neophyte stories writing skills"

　　 Then I sent another copy to each Editor before I saw it myself.

　　Su Hao begins with:

　　 "The so-called neophyte stories is actually the abbreviation of Shuangwen. It is a commercial writing technique with the core of how to refresh the reader. It is not the literary writing style..."

　　 "The essence of Shuangwen lies in anticipation, slaps and ambiguity."

　　 "Expectation. For example, in the Battle Through the Heaven I wrote, I press first and then raise. After the protagonist is divorced, readers will suppress an anger in their hearts. I hope to see protagonist retaliate back all this anger. When it comes to third year After the appointment, everyone knows that protagonist can beat the fiancee, which is a good expectation point..."

　　 "But please pay attention to one point, that is, the suppression should not be too much. For example, I once saw a book that tried to learn me, called Dou Shou Tian Qiong, and the author wrote protagonist. The IndoMTL.com~ family The door was not destroyed, the fiancee was killed, protagonist was chased and killed..."

　　 "He is a stupid fork. The reader brings you your protagonist. You let the reader experience this experience once. It’s strange that people don’t want to kill you!"

　　 "Therefore, there should not be too much depression, let the reader look forward to the face hitting, and can not suppress the reader to abandon the book..."

　　 "Then we will talk about slapping..."

　　Su Hao's writing style is very white, so is this neophyte stories writing technique, but it is really easy to understand.

　　 "It turns out so!"

　　 "This is neophyte stories, no wonder my author failed to write neophyte stories."

　　 "What he said really makes sense. After he said it, I found out that most of the previous fire literary texts did not have any overly depressing plots."

　　 "It is true that our group of Editor actually lost to an author... No wonder he can maintain the top selling list!"

　　Editor is a lot of reading, they naturally understand the instructions of Su Hao, and they have a deep experience.

　　 But the problem is...

　　everybody’s sight is very weird. Su Hao is already a bit arrogant with his own novel as an example, and actually used the battle to cut the sky as a counterexample...

　　 This is a naked face!

　　Feng Shu twitched her lips: "Mine is so big, do you feel uncomfortable if you don't do things in one day?"

　　 They were quite right. In a remote rental house, Feng Yun, the author of "Dou Shou Tian Qiong", dropped the mouse directly.

　　 "bastard! I remember you!"

　　......

　　 And in fact, not far from Su Hao, also an angry little girl is falling on the pillow.

　　 "Damn Su Hao! He definitely wants me to kiss him!"