My Girlfriend has a System Chapter 227: Reminder Dangsu Xiaoyi

Su Hao is speaking with the apprentice.

"Na, teacher, I started to write you let me write some rebirth of an expert. "

"Oh, is that how it feels? "

"I feel... Is it a bit too big to hang up, can I write anything later?"

"Are you in control?"

“Eh... a little difficult. "

Su Hao Haha smiled: "neophyte stories is not as good as you think!"

"Yes..." Ai Xian admitted a bit embarrassed.

neophyte stories don’t look at writing style is simple, the routine is not complicated, but Su Hao previous life is almost all writing neophyte stories, how many really write?

A rhythm killed a group of people.

Then one controlled protagonist strength and killed a group of people.

"And teacher, although I used what you said, but is it really okay to write this?" Ai Xian couldn't help asking.

"What's the problem?" said Su Hao.

"You see, this kind of protagonist has a single character, straight face, and feels...too monotonous."

"Are you trying to say that there is no emotion, and the character is not three-dimensional? Or frankly, the character has no meaning?"

"Ha ha ha..." Ai Xian made an embarrassed voice.

When although saw Su Hao write Seven Weapons', she recognized the handwriting of Su Hao Great Master.

But now she writes web novel, the routine model makes her very uncomfortable.

However, she feels right. Most neophyte storiess have really few connotations. Even also's crudely fabricated neophyte stories doesn't even care about logic, but just pursues refreshment.

But the real neophyte stories is not that simple!

Su Hao thought about it and said, "What does protagonist look like in your article, do you know?"

"Well, he is overbearing, arrogant in heart, rich in combat experience, good to himself, strong to outsiders, soft and not hard..." Ai Xian said so.

This is a very standard Xuanhua neophyte stories protagonist.

"Do you think such a character has no meaning?" Su Hao asked.

“Eh... is a bit. "

"Then do you think the Battle Through the Heaven I wrote is meaningful?"

Ai Xian replied without hesitation: "Of course the teacher wrote it!"

although Battle Through the Heaven is also neophyte stories, but the ‘Mo bully young poor’ in the early stage makes the whole article very good.

"However, if you analyze it carefully, you know that my protagonist has a lot of overlap with your protagonist settings."

“Eh......"

"Ai Xian, the connotation is derived from the story, not from the protagonist setting." Su Hao chuckled and said: "So, I will give you a few classic examples of characters."

“Ah?" Ai Xian is a bit stunned.

However, Su Hao cleared his throat and coughed twice, with an arrogant meaning, directly to start to talk.

Voice is frustrated, with an unprecedented arrogance.

"People hold the sun and the moon to pick up stars, there is no one like me in the world!"

The singing of Su Hao has the addition of system. The singing of although is different from reading aloud, but it always has some things in common.

In just one line, he recites three points into the wood.

Ai Xian heard that as if he saw a supreme powerhouse, eyes was proud and independent.

Prideful...arrogant...even a little sad.

"Na, Ai Xian, when you said that when you write a character, he proudly uttered such lines in a certain environment, is the image still not full? "Su Hao smiled, and then awakened Ai Xian.

"Another example..."

The look of Su Hao changed and continued.

"a thousand tribulations, Hundreds of hardships, Henggu hurriedly, at your fingertips!"

"undying body, Inextinguishable soul, shining from ancient times to the present, no enemy!"

"When the yin and yang are in rebellion, I used the demon blood to dye the blue sky! Billions of souls are soldiers, millions of Gods and Demons are generals, worship will be released, and many Gods will be scared. subduing the demons stone stains the blood of the saints, and seals the world against all demons, dares to resist the world!"

As soon as the words fell, Ai Xian seemed to feel a monstrous magic power, heading straight to the sky.

Even without any description, Ai Xian can feel the image of ‘human’!

"Another example..."

The expression of Su Hao is correct, and again.

"The moral bodhi is not a positive result, now I know that I am me!"

The words although are extremely short, but Ai Xian seems to see a figure emerged from the moral karma.

His face is very real, very real, and has a sense of joy.

Image?

Is the image of these people not complete enough?

Connotation?

Even without other plots, Ai Xian can imagine their image, and even make up a series of details by themselves, and their past experience.

This is more intuitive than any text!

"Do you understand now? The image of protagonist has nothing to do with the subject matter, just the question of whether it will be written or not." Su Hao said with a smile.

"Yes, teacher!" Ai Xian was excited and responded.

Su Hao smiled slightly, and he was right.

Maybe neophyte stories cannot be inspired by positive energy like other articles, but the character creation is not inferior.

Especially those big shot of previous life...

"Right master."

"What's the matter?"

"What is the sound of dōng dōng boom in your room all the time?" Ai Xian finally couldn't help asking.

Su Hao turned his head and glanced at the door of the dōng dōng that was shot by the angered Su Xiaoyi.

The calm expression replied: "It’s okay, the cat of My family is playing the door."

"Teacher when do you have cats in your house? And can every cat make such a loud noise?"

This sentence Ai Xian did not say it, but only finally said: "That teacher, I will continue to code."

"Go."

As soon as the voice hung up, Su Xiaoyi shouted with anger.

"Onii... -sama! You come out to me!"

This product has been knocked for more than two hours, and during that period, it was punching and kicking the door...

Fortunately, Su Hao prepared the food and water in advance, otherwise, if you go out now, you will definitely be killed by the shameful Su Xiaoyi.

Su Hao just glanced at the door, shrugged, and put on headphones indifferently, playing music.

"Anyway, it’s not my fault. Who made you so confident that I learned to use swear words? What did I write after reading... My feeling after reading was to let me write After reading, big shot is really'big shot'."

Let Su Hao learn ‘sullen words’... This is also due to what she said.

Anyway, it’s not Su Hao. Su Hao listened to music for two hours leisurely, ate a bunch of sunflower seeds and peanuts, and watched a movie.

After Su Xiaoyi stopped knocking on the door, Su Hao opened the door.

"Why don't you tell me that you are slandering?" Su Xiaoyi gritted her teeth, and suddenly appeared in front of Su Hao.

"blame me." Su Hao shrugged: "What is my net name, you won't read it yourself."

"You--"

"What are you, do you want me to write you a post-reading feeling?"

Su Xiaoyi two rows of small teeth grinded up, leaving Su Hao a little bit fragile.

This girl will not bite it directly...

"What about the manuscript?"

"Huh?" Su Hao was shocked.

"I said the manuscript, the sword of longevity." Su Xiaoyi gritted his teeth and said: "Are there magazines after that?"

“Eh...Yes, yes. "

"Come here!"

"Why?" Su Hao asked in surprise.

Su Xiaoyi blushed~IndoMTL.com~ whispered a few vague words.

"What? I didn't hear it?" Su Hao froze.

"I said, I want to see!"

Su Xiaoyi's looks like he is talking.

If you ask again, I will kill you!

"also..."

"What?"

"Hurry up and write..."

　　

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