Martial Arts Master: Part 4 summary and request for leave and monthly pass
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In this summary, I wanted to praise myself at the beginning. Since everyone didn’t see it, I could only break it by myself and praise myself. Starting from the third part, I tried a new technique, writing The new technique of the character's heart is that most of the time, not to do inner monologues, not to do direct emotional expressions, but to express the heart through pure actions, expressions, language, environment and atmosphere. Let the character's psychological drama be left blank, making it more tense.
You can read the last chapter of the third book, Lou Cheng’s description when he left school. I didn’t write about what he recalled at all. How sad and sad and embarrassed. There is no such word in the whole article, just It was just what he saw and his actions were written, but just like this, that kind of deep, implicit feelings naturally accumulate, until the words "Goodbye Songcheng" burst out at once.
I’m not from a major, and I’m semi-literate in writing. I can only rely on reading some books and thinking about it by myself. Anyway, I may have used this technique before, but I don’t have such a clear understanding. I think it is most suitable for deep and restrained The sentimental psychological drama, until the final burst of monologue, will appear very powerful, because joy is exploding, and depression is continuous.
So, in the low part of Lou Cheng, before the chapter "For Me", I only wrote a few sentences from beginning to end of the psychological activities between him and Ke Ke, all of which were promoted by actions, words, expressions, etc. , To render, the most satisfying scene is probably the picture of Lou Cheng, who is unable to lean back and closes his eyes after posting Weibo, without other, without any description of mental activities, all feelings are on paper.
However, due to the lack of direct psychological drama in this way of writing, the transition of scenes will appear abrupt, intermittent, and not smooth enough, so that there is no sense of transition and paving in the middle.
I haven't thought of how to solve this problem in the future, so I can only continue to ponder (scratching my head).
Well, going back to the fourth part, this is an important process of Lou Cheng's psychological transformation to a master, and it is also the turning point of the whole book that I preset. It is the second part that connects the past and the future. It is not long, but it is important enough.
For this story, I am ready to make a 24-hour follow-up order. Fortunately, everyone still believes in me more. Maybe it is also more numb to my willfulness. Most of the time, it has not declined. Yes, and in that small part, it is rising, rising...
In addition, this paragraph is also an in-depth exploration and fullness of the characters of Orange and Keke. Their thoughts, their three views, and their personalities should be more three-dimensional than the previous three. I feel that I have written well. .
To tell you the truth, I thought so before opening the book. If the martial arts performance is not good, then here, even if it comes to an end, although Lou Cheng has not yet become a master, but the psychology and the road are ready. , The end is okay.
However, I sometimes dislike integrity in my mouth. I think so, but when I was a person designing, more than 60% of the people designing were strong in Waigang, a top professional tournament. I think I will write it down no matter whether my grades are good or not. Of course, I’m very satisfied with the good grades now.
Old rules, take a day off on August 1st. This writing is very stressful and tiring. I have to organize the third and final part of the martial arts in the follow-up. Let’s see you at 12:30 on August 2 , The fifth part "The original dream will definitely arrive"!
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