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In the past couple of days, I have been in a bad mood and depressed.

Of course, it’s not entirely a matter of book reviews, but I still can’t ignore book reviews.

To be honest, I feel that I am more serious about writing. My plot is not what everyone thinks it is. If you read my book carefully and clarify the context, I don’t know if you will think that way.

The main line is unclear, and the procrastination of the plot is probably the most criticism of this book.

In the first paragraph, there were indeed many such problems, but I think it should be smoother later.

But some people still say that the main line is blurred.

What is the main line? Is it necessary to give Ye Chong'an a goal of revenge and life experience to be the main line?

I don’t know who defines it this way, but I can’t agree. Indeed, this is indeed conducive to the shrinkage of articles, but should all articles follow this pattern?

Ye Zhong's life experience is indeed different from ordinary people, but I haven't lifted the corner of this veil. A lot of foreshadowings have already been laid before, and you may understand it when you see it later.

But I still wrote about Ye Zhong's experience before, and you can see that Ye Zhong has been passive in all his experiences so far.

This is different from my original plan. It should have been Ye Zhong's life experience and so on.

With the development of the plot, I gradually deepened my thinking about the character of Ye Zhong, thus negating my previous ideas.

Ye Chong should be confused now!

This is the main tone of the whole writing so far! This confusion will manifest itself in many ways. Things like life pursuits should belong to higher-level pursuits, which is not realistic for Ye Zhong now.

Instinct is never love, and love on the one hand is doomed to fail in front of people like Ye Zhong, unless, unless she can make Ye Zhong fall in love with her!

Organizational power, haha, with Ye Zhong's personality, the possibility of doing this is basically zero.

Fleeing is because the strength of the two sides is too far apart. I think this is undoubtedly the simplest and most reasonable choice, and Ye Zhong has always liked this choice.

Because I don't like a character in the book, it comes down to the book's mistakes, which is not very kind!

Slow plot development is actually good for me personally. I like the details, which is somewhat different from the requirements of the web. A friend used to say it was right~IndoMTL.com~ The details can make it easier for everyone, and more clearly build a new world in the brain.

I don’t like writing settings, and I am most tired of listing them. I think the setting should be gradually permeated in the article, so that it will not make people feel boring.

YY is not wrong, but it should be reasonable. This is my idea. The foreshadowing in the front will make the latter more enjoyable, haha, but there are still many readers who can't help but rush to come.

Last night, a friend said that my book is like travel notes, not like novels. I think this is a fair comment.

Writing always gives people some thinking and substitution, even if it is just a business novel. When I wrote about Sun Xuelin’s confusion, I was also confused! And Ye Zhong's drifting around is related to my experience during this time. The experience of life is wonderful and ruthless. During this time, I have experienced too many gatherings and dispersal. For a time, I can't find a sense of belonging! This is probably the root cause of my bad mood these past two days.

It’s a little difficult to write today. Writing such a random article is to explain some issues to everyone.

Everyone is welcome to discuss.

Fang Xiang wrote on September 15th