I Am Supreme: End of this testimonial + report (1)

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　　 It took more than a month to finish the testimonials, it was a bit late.

　　 But there are some things, I want to give you an explanation.

　　 I wrote this book very passionately at the beginning.

　　 Defend the family and the country, nine heroes; I am also very excited to write.

　　 But since when... I feel something is wrong.

The book 　　, in a sense, is high and low.

　　The tone at the beginning is too high. Just as I said in the chapter one day arguing with a few book friends: You were a soldier yourself, but we were never. We read books to ask for happiness, but you have to pull us to chant slogans together, we are not happy.

　　 Yes, I don’t believe that there are people who are not patriotic. But the book friends are right. We are all patriotic, but we don't want to read the book and even shout a slogan... This is unhappy.

　　 And the subscription status is also reminding me that there must be some places where I did not select the right button.

　　 At that time, the entire book had already taken shape.

　　 Then I was thinking about changing.

　　 Then the website came to me and said, the contract is about to expire, but your word count is a lot worse.

　　 This makes me feel uncomfortable.

　　 The word count problem is a big problem.

　　 Then I started to bury the thread while changing, burying the line of the mysterious yellow world; then I intervened with the mysterious world. Pity me, I only made the outline of the Profound Sky Continent before I opened the book; no matter how hard it is, I can write three million... not enough.

　　 So the first half is the home country and the world; the second half is pure fantasy.

　　 But this change... I found that I made another mistake: Many readers who have been reading are not happy: The blood is boiling, you are going to upgrade and Daguai...

　　 I was in a daze.

　　 bite the bullet and keep writing.

　　 Finally, it's finished.

　　 But the real biggest mistake is not here yet.

　　 That's Yun Yang's identity.

　　 was revealed too early!

　　 Everyone, let me wipe it, Mo Tianji’s son... Then he can die? How could Mo Shen Gun let his son die?

　　 So, the biggest suspense, and the most worrying protagonist’s life-and-death crisis, was revealed by this identity and there was no sense of crisis at all!

　　 One month after I finished writing that paragraph, I woke up and slapped myself seven or eight: What do you think, you are stupid...

　　 Many readers reacted to me, saying: Some are not interesting.

　　 This is not boring, because Mo Tianji is so awesome.

　　These encounters, changing to any protagonist, are very disturbing. However, after revealing his identity, Yun Yang couldn't do it!

　　 is too safe!

　　 is so wrong.

　　 write it with the most serious attitude; however, the failure brought by Yunyang's identity can never be eliminated!

　　 This is the biggest failure of this book.

　　 has finished writing, and learned from it. In the next book, I can’t make such low-level mistakes again.

　　 Thank you all for your company all the way, all the way to be generous.

　　 I can’t finish writing free chapters, I will post first and then write.