Otaku Engineer in Great Tang Dynasty Chapter 267: Teach you how to water!

After putting away the mess of thoughts, Li Zexuan began to read the news seriously.

Of course, it is undeniable that the headline of this news article by Li Yu was very good. Compared with the later dynasties, the folk customs of the Tang Dynasty were more open. The folks were very interested in the love stories of these men and women, gifted men and beautiful women. He likes to listen. With this title alone, Li Yu can attract people to continue reading.

After a while, Li Zexuan finished reading the first news. He nodded, then shook his head again. Li Yuben came to see Li Zexuan and nodded, but he was happy, but Li Zexuan shook his head again, and Li Yu's face The smile that hadn't broken up suddenly froze.

"Uh, boss, what do you think? Why do you nod and shake your head?"

Li Yu asked aloud.

Li Zexuan took a look at Li Yu and said, "I nod, because I think the title of your news is very good, and the content is pretty good!"

"Not bad? The owner just thinks I can write better content?"

Li Yu immediately found the crux of the problem from the two adjectives used by Li Zexuan.

"Hey, smart!"

Li Zexuan exclaimed, and then explained: "It's undeniable that the story you chose, Xiao Yuer, is very attractive, and the story is clear, but in my opinion, this is not enough." /

When Li Yu heard the words, he cast a curious look at Li Zexuan, Li Zexuan smiled, took Li Yu to the pavilion, and said as he walked:

"Hehe, Xiao Yu'er, don't be convinced. I say this for a reason. First of all, the whole article of your news gives people a feeling of joking. Your description of the incident is very general and very broad. It is also very boring, which directly leads to the lack of substitution in your entire story. You have a good subject, but you have not described a complete story with full characters and feelings. Readers will only read it with the same taste."

Li Yu held the stone table, bowed his head and mumbled dejectedly: "Is it so bad?"

Li Zexuan sat down and said with a chuckle: "It's not so bad. The reason why I told you so much today is for your good. Of course, to be more precise, I want you to make more money. Do you still want to listen?"

"Want to hear and want to hear! Owner, say it!"

Hearing about the money, Li Yu instantly became interested, and the depression that Li Zexuan had just hit was wiped out.

"Hehe, you girl!"

Li Zexuan laughed and said: "On your subject, let me write. I can write at least 30,000 or 40 thousand characters. I can serialize five or six issues in the newspaper. You see, rich family son Mo Wuque and farmer girl Shu Yinglian When you encounter this passage, you can describe more about Shu Yinglian when she was at home and was bullied by the village tyrant. How desperate and helpless she was, and how shocked Mo Wuque was when she saw Shu Yinglian's peerless appearance. Of.

Of course the most important thing is that the part of Mo Wuwei who stood up to save Shu Yinglian must be described in detail. How can you finish writing such an important scene in two sentences? The foreshadowing in front of you is all for the sake of being here to pretend to be forced to slap in the face, ah yeah, it is the heroes who are preparing to save the beauty!

Also, Mo Wuque’s father, when Mo Yunshan opposed his son’s relationship with Shu Yinglian, Mo Wuque’s contradictions, self-blame, and helplessness at the time, why didn’t you write it down? Shu Yinglian couldn't be with her beloved, and jumped into the river in anger. Why don't you put yourself in and think about Shu Yinglian's despair, perseverance, and tragic? This place can hit the tears of readers the most! You have to describe it well.

Also, after Mo Wuque learned that his beloved person jumped into the river, his loneliness, sadness, and anger, and finally grief, went to the temple, shaved his hair as a monk, this place, you We must also focus on rendering, these are words, all money! As a reporter, if you don’t know how to count words, bah, if you don’t start writing about one thing, then you won’t make much money..."

Li Zexuan talked to Li Yu about how to fill the news and how to write a piece of news as five pieces of news. This guy completely forgot that he was the boss of "Datang Daily" and Li Yu wanted to be true In doing this, his own money was pitted.

Li Yu was aside, she was dumbfounded. She was really going to kneel for Li Zexuan. How can the boss personally teach employees how to find ways to cheat the boss's money! Also, the "irrigation" Li Zexuan gave her, ah, is a way to unfold the plot, it really opened her eyes, as if the door to a new world (the road of the water god) was slowly opening to her.

"Ahem!"

At this moment, there was a soft cough next to him. It turned out that it was Ma Zhou. He just came out to breathe. He did not expect to meet Li Zexuan giving Li Yu "teaching". The more he listened, the more he felt wrong, and he hurriedly said. interrupt.

"Um, Brother Ma, are you here?"

Looking at Ma Zhou's expression, Li Zexuan knew that he had heard the words he had just said, and his expression was a little embarrassed for a while.

"Hello, Uncle Ma~!"

Li Yu remembered what Li Zexuan had said to her earlier, "If you have anything to do, your Uncle Ma can still give you a care", she stepped forward and shouted sweetly.

"Damn~! When did I become an uncle? Yesterday I was called to be a steward!"

Ma Zhou just walked two steps~IndoMTL.com~ Hearing Li Yu's words, he suddenly stumbled. If Li Zexuan hadn't reacted quickly, he raised his hand and estimated that he would fall into a dog gnawing shit.

"What's the matter? Isn't the girl called right? Brother Ma, why do you react so much?"

Li Zexuan teased with a smirk.

Ma Zhouyi's face was speechless, what else could he say, he could only secretly scold Li Zexuan for teaching bad children, he was sure that this must have been taught to Li Yu by Li Zexuan.

" Sir Sir Alex is here today, is there anything important?"

Ma Zhouping calmed down and asked.

"Um, don’t worry, wait until I finish reading Xiao Yu’er’s news. I haven’t read another one! Oh, brother Ma, you just came here. Come and see what Xiao Yu’er wrote about this piece of news. Do it!"

Li Zexuan handed Ma Zhou the article he had just finished reading "Rich slumber, but escaped into the empty door for his lover", and he picked up another news article and began to read it.

Ma Zhou had no choice but to be patient, sat down, and started watching the news.

"Fuck, fuck! This little girl is doing things!"

Li Zexuan almost screamed when he saw the second news headline. Without him, this headline is really too strong. It said: "A woman is in the field and her clothes are stolen by a man. ....."

Li Zexuan touched his nose. It seems that Li Yu is going to carry the title party to the end. Hey, I don't know whether it is a blessing or a curse.

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Thank you for being so proud, half-hearted, fate, luck, the world is scorching, I love you, and the pseudo-you change (brother is back!) for the reward!

Thank you for luck, Wang Zhijian,..., the pseudo-you change, Zhenzhen, there is always a monthly pass that the people want to harm me!

(End of this chapter)