Nightwatcher: Reflections from the end!

The third volume is over. A new year, a new beginning. The fourth volume is called "Competing for the Central Plains". The background of this volume is relatively grand. Many early characters will reappear, and many forces and characters that have been overwhelmed for a long time will also make their appearance. At the same time in the fourth volume, I will take back many of the previous foreshadowings and fill in some of the holes. Returning to the topic, let’s review the whole of the third volume of "Juvenile Journey", both good and bad, a single chapter is a rare opportunity for readers and authors to communicate. I will talk frankly with you about the troubles and problems encountered in writing, so that everyone can get a preliminary understanding of the author's mental state, inner changes, and so on. . When I first prepared the structure of this volume, I was going to write it in the style of travel notes, and then slowly pave the way and unfold the characters slowly. After writing more than a dozen chapters, I realized that the mode of changing the map was not liked by everyone, and the readers did not like the setting of Xu Bai's seal. But the main tone has been set, and I can't "change it day and night." At that time, I was particularly confused, and my writing state became very exhausted. I hurriedly revised the outline of Volume Three, adjusted the framework structure, and even posted a single chapter to seek your opinions. While keeping up to date, while revising the outline, after a long period of downturn, my aunt finally came. Data skyrocketing From Shuangxiu to returning to Beijing, and then to leaving Beijing, the peak of the book is even comparable to the chapter of the father-son showdown in the second volume. Where is the problem in the first half of this volume? I have summarized it before, but the characters and maps have no sense of substitution. Any map change will encounter this kind of problem, but I have worked out a way to crack it, and I have the opportunity to try it out in the future. Next, let’s talk about the issue of rhythm. I have carefully studied the changes in retrofitting. Any chapters that are slowly laid out will suffer a sharp drop in retrofitting, and then readers will scold it. The author is anxious and quickly speeds up the rhythm, and then the reader scolds that the rhythm is too fast and the writing is not good. This forms a vicious circle. In this regard, I came to two conclusions. First, I may be too young, not stable enough, and easily affected by data. Second, probably the celebrity effect is not enough. If you are a long-established platinum author, readers may be more patient and can tolerate a dozen chapters and dozens of chapters. But for a Xiaopujie (such as me), I am not so patient. In addition to the problems summarized above, I am more concerned about a "not good enough" problem recently mentioned by readers. If you are also a writing friend, you can think about what I said next. Sometimes, we have to make a trade-off between logic and coolness. Books that pay too much attention to logic are often uncomfortable, so online writing must be "no brain". But if it is too brainless, it will appear too white. The brainless little white text in the reader's mouth often refers to such books. Take the story of the Martial Arts League at the end of the scroll as an example. I actually have a cooler way of writing, which is very cool and cool. But as a result of that, Xu Pingfeng’s people collapsed. One book is written in the middle and late period, which is different from the previous period. The first premise of my current writing is to maintain the main tone of the entire book, which includes the character, plot, situation in Kyushu and so on. Then, think about being cool. Xu Pingfeng is one of the important figures, and his person is set here, even if death is imminent, he will calmly face it calmly. For Xu Qi'an's face slap, his unhappiness is already at the limit, and it is impossible to make him angry. But then the reader is unhappy. So I just said that logic and coolness sometimes cannot have both. If you want him to go back empty-handed, and stealing chickens will not lose your rice, you will think that this is the big villain? What about the characters? Here is a little trick. It’s more important to maintain a strong character than being cool. Even if you discard some of the cool points, you must maintain the character's compelling style. Two books with similar grades, one may be considered a brainless text, and the other may be a brainless book. Why? Because the former only cares about being cool, while the latter will maintain the compelling character of the characters in the book. You will scold me because a short plot is not good enough, but you will not abandon the book. But if people collapse, a lot of talents abandon their books. Am I right? Bring the topic back, updating has always been my anxiety and headache. I often sit in front of the computer for a long time because a period of daily life is not interesting enough, and often because I have not fully understood a case, I cannot write for most of the day. But I was anxious because the update time was approaching and I couldn't deliver the paper. It often causes procrastination. Speed ​​and quality can’t be achieved at the same time. Sometimes the state is not right and the brain is confused, which can also cause the quality of the update to decline. Inevitable. Then, every time I see readers say in the chapter review that they should take a break when they are tired, don't update it. I take it seriously. I woke up the next day and found that the chapter review was such a stubborn slot. This was forced to expand. The monthly pass was torn. Hahahaha, slot! The stumbling and stumbling written in this volume makes everyone swear, but the data is not bad. They are all ordered for 90,000. The rise is extremely fast, which is my only comfort. It means that although there are minor flaws in my writing, it is relatively stable overall. The thread that should be buried is buried, the characters that should be portrayed ~ IndoMTL.com ~ broke 100,000 during the serialization period, so the problem shouldn't be too big. Well, I hope I didn't plant the flag. Starting from the fourth volume, the biggest and biggest pit of the book will kick off. I will try to lay the groundwork slowly, instead of looking at the follow-up, I will slowly portray some supporting roles. For me, it's a whole new challenge. The greatest charm of writing a book lies in this. It is constantly seeking breakthroughs, even if the direction is wrong, the hip is pulled, the follow-up order falls, at least I have tried it, and I will learn some new things. I always hope that this book will bring you joy, happiness, at least most of the time. This is my greatest motivation for writing a book, and my greatest sense of accomplishment. A day off, make a detailed outline! . Remember the website of this site, www. biquxu. Com, easy to read next time, or enter "" on Baidu to enter this site

The third volume is over.

A new year, a new beginning.

The fourth volume is called "Competing for the Central Plains".

The background of this volume is relatively grand. Many early characters will reappear, and many forces and characters that have been overwhelmed for a long time will also make their appearance.

At the same time in the fourth volume, I will take back many of the previous foreshadowings and fill in some of the holes.

Returning to the topic, let’s review the whole of the third volume of "Juvenile Journey", both good and bad, a single chapter is a rare opportunity for readers and authors to communicate.

I will talk frankly with you about the troubles and problems encountered in writing, so that everyone can get a preliminary understanding of the author's mental state, inner changes, and so on. .

When I first prepared the structure of this volume, I was going to write it in the style of travel notes, and then slowly pave the way and unfold the characters slowly.

After writing more than a dozen chapters, I realized that the mode of changing the map was not liked by everyone, and the readers did not like the setting of Xu Bai's seal. But the main tone has been set, and I can't "change it day and night." At that time, I was particularly confused, and my writing state became very exhausted.

I hurriedly revised the outline of Volume Three, adjusted the framework structure, and even posted a single chapter to seek your opinions.

While keeping up to date, while revising the outline, after a long period of downturn, my aunt finally came.

Data skyrocketing

From Shuangxiu to returning to Beijing, and then to leaving Beijing, the peak of the book is even comparable to the chapter of the father-son showdown in the second volume.

Where is the problem in the first half of this volume? I have summarized it before, but the characters and maps have no sense of substitution.

Any map change will encounter this kind of problem, but I have worked out a way to crack it, and I have the opportunity to try it out in the future.

Next, let’s talk about the issue of rhythm. I have carefully studied the changes in retrofitting. Any chapters that are slowly laid out will suffer a sharp drop in retrofitting, and then readers will scold it.

The author is anxious and quickly speeds up the rhythm, and then the reader scolds that the rhythm is too fast and the writing is not good.

This forms a vicious circle.

In this regard, I came to two conclusions. First, I may be too young, not stable enough, and easily affected by data. Second, probably the celebrity effect is not enough.

If you are a long-established platinum author, readers may be more patient and can tolerate a dozen chapters and dozens of chapters.

But for a Xiaopujie (such as me), I am not so patient.

In addition to the problems summarized above, I am more concerned about a "not good enough" problem recently mentioned by readers.

If you are also a writing friend, you can think about what I said next.

Sometimes, we have to make a trade-off between logic and coolness. Books that pay too much attention to logic are often uncomfortable, so online writing must be "no brain".

But if it is too brainless, it will appear too white. The brainless little white text in the reader's mouth often refers to such books.

Take the story of the Martial Arts League at the end of the scroll as an example. I actually have a cooler way of writing, which is very cool and cool.

But as a result of that, Xu Pingfeng’s people collapsed.

One book is written in the middle and late period, which is different from the previous period. The first premise of my current writing is to maintain the main tone of the entire book, which includes the character, plot, situation in Kyushu and so on.

Then, think about being cool.

Xu Pingfeng is one of the important figures, and his person is set here, even if death is imminent, he will calmly face it calmly.

For Xu Qi'an's face slap, his unhappiness is already at the limit, and it is impossible to make him angry.

But then the reader is unhappy.

So I just said that logic and coolness sometimes cannot have both.

If you want him to go back empty-handed, and stealing chickens will not lose your rice, you will think that this is the big villain?

What about the characters?

Here is a little trick. It’s more important to maintain a strong character than being cool. Even if you discard some of the cool points, you must maintain the character's compelling style.

Two books with similar grades, one may be considered a brainless text, and the other may be a brainless book.

Why?

Because the former only cares about being cool, while the latter will maintain the compelling character of the characters in the book.

You will scold me because a short plot is not good enough, but you will not abandon the book. But if people collapse, a lot of talents abandon their books.

Am I right?

Bring the topic back, updating has always been my anxiety and headache.

I often sit in front of the computer for a long time because a period of daily life is not interesting enough, and often because I have not fully understood a case, I cannot write for most of the day.

But I was anxious because the update time was approaching and I couldn't deliver the paper.

It often causes procrastination.

Speed ​​and quality can’t be achieved at the same time. Sometimes the state is not right and the brain is confused, which can also cause the quality of the update to decline.

Inevitable.

Then, every time I see readers say in the chapter review that they should take a break when they are tired, don't update it.

I take it seriously.

I woke up the next day and found that the chapter review was such a stubborn slot. This was forced to expand. The monthly pass was torn.

Hahahaha, slot!

The stumbling and stumbling written in this volume makes everyone swear, but the data is not bad.

They are all ordered for 90,000.

The rise is extremely fast, which is my only comfort.

It means that although there are minor flaws in my writing, it is relatively stable overall. The thread that should be buried is buried, the characters that should be portrayed ~ IndoMTL.com ~ broke 100,000 during the serialization period, so the problem shouldn't be too big. Well, I hope I didn't plant the flag.

Starting from the fourth volume, the biggest and biggest pit of the book will kick off.

I will try to lay the groundwork slowly, instead of looking at the follow-up, I will slowly portray some supporting roles.

For me, it's a whole new challenge.

The greatest charm of writing a book lies in this. It is constantly seeking breakthroughs, even if the direction is wrong, the hip is pulled, the follow-up order falls, at least I have tried it, and I will learn some new things.

I always hope that this book will bring you joy, happiness, at least most of the time.

This is my greatest motivation for writing a book, and my greatest sense of accomplishment.

A day off, make a detailed outline!

. Remember the website of this site, www. biquxu. Com, easy to read next time, or enter "" on Baidu to enter this site