Above The Sky (Yin Tianshen Yin): End of Volume Remarks Lord of Steel
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On August 16, 2023, Lord of Steel was completed. It took more than eleven months and 2.2 million words were updated, with an average of 6,300 words per day, which is considered an average starting point. The main reason is that the plot in the middle and later stages of the book involves too much, and the writing is not as clean and neat as the beginning, but there are occasional outbursts, mainly because of poor health in the past few months.
The second volume of Above the Sky ended, making me let out a long sigh. Many foreshadowings were recycled, the final result of the echo, the obsession of Inaga II and the Setar royal family, and the long-awaited research on alien species. Although some plots such as the Academy and the Forerunners were written in a hurry due to the daily update of the online novel, I look back and feel that it could have been written better, but overall, it is not bad.
There are a total of three volumes in Above the Sky and extra chapters besides the ending. Actually, we can leave aside the extra chapters for the time being. The three volumes of this article have already ended in 2 volumes, and the plot has reached its final stage. According to the convention of this book, let’s summarize this volume. The general plot of the film can be regarded as a review for myself.
[Steel Lord] is the second volume among the three volumes. As the name suggests, the purpose of this volume is for the protagonist to gain territory, gradually expand his influence, develop some key technologies, and finally gradually become full-fledged and grow stronger. , the process of becoming someone who can influence the world pattern.
Prologue 'The Messenger of the Dragon God', Ian, who returned to Nanling for the first time, immediately noticed that the situation in Nanling was unstable. Due to the war with Feiyandi, the entire Nanling entered a wartime state, and the territory he had just acquired But it was occupied by the rebellious mountain people - just in time, he just struck hard to clean up the local forces of the originally deeply entrenched Lean Territory and completely control it in his own hands.
By gaining prestige by defeating Fei Yandi, the mastermind behind the scenes, and relying on the ether crystals in his body to simulate dragon blood, Ian successfully spread the news that he was the messenger of the Dragon God throughout the Baisen Mountains through publicity, and then developed himself into the original dragon. The territory of the sacred land was gradually claimed by the mountain people, and their actual control territory was expanded from the small Xiahui Territory to the entire mountain people gathering area.
At the same time, Ian is developing his territory, building technology parks, and attracting investment from all over the world. He is also building his own sect to replace the ancient and primitive Dragon God belief. He is also planning to return to Harrison Port and join forces with his old superiors to build trade routes. , and also hatched Qingtong by the way, allowing a new generation of etheric crystal dragons to be born.
In the process, Axel's purpose gradually revealed. Although Ian can't guess the other party's real purpose now, he can also see that it is definitely a big plan.
The communication with the spirit of the sea of trees, as well as the actions of Shengguang and his team, revealed the situation of the lost era and the disaster of fire, and the deduction of the spirit of the sea of trees also allowed Ian to see another world With the possibility of the thread and the power of the guiding star of his own mind-light body, Ian began to gradually discover all kinds of things about himself in parallel time and space.
It was during this process that Ian obtained another possibility, the 'electromagnetic power' possessed by the real Dragon God envoy. At this point, he had made the fake come true and became the real one. A well-deserved messenger of the Dragon God.
It was precisely with these gains that Ian gradually developed more abilities of the silver chip, as well as the prototype of the [Arcane Path].
Next, the second act, 'The Last Echo', is the process of the territory's development being on the right track, and when Ian does not need his constant attention, he is invited to Canaan Moore and explores the Xenogeneic Research Institute.
The situation in Canaan Moore is complicated, and the two factions of the Ten Kings are fighting among themselves. Ian takes advantage of the situation to hide himself, and uses his vest, the Knight of the Glen, to fight for his own interests.
He revealed his identity as the second-generation Fudo Castle, attracting everyone's attention. After knowing the complete form of the silver chip 'Gift of the Star God' and obtaining the second component, he met the Last Echo After the decisive battle, I got the complete version of the Star God's Gift.
In the process, Ian met the younger generations of various countries and defeated them all, saw many studies of pre-era civilizations, saw the echo of the ancient mentor True Dragon, and the secrets buried in ancient history were gradually revealed , many foreshadowings were recovered, the truth about the sky falling, the star **** and the end, and the way to extinguish the stars completely revealed everything.
Updated to the main plot, the Heavenly Hell is not a Heavenly Hell, but a cradle that protects all living beings. This gentle embrace is indeed the Star God’s love for all living beings, but in the end it lingers outside. Although it has not taken action for some reason, this It is the biggest threat, and you must find an opportunity to leave.
Otherwise, destruction will come at any time and all development will be meaningless.
With the gift of the Star God, Ian split himself into two. One went to Dragon Island to recuperate and continue to deduce his Steel Pioneer inheritance, while the other became a goblin and returned to the territory. He was awarded the title of earl and prepared to welcome the healing. turbulent world situation.
The third act, 'The Lord of Steel', tells the story of Lord Ian, who is preparing to fight against the demon army of the Flying Flame Land. At the same time, he uses his most important gains in the Alien Research Institute to develop the Heart of Terra and build the Chongling Sect. , the process of letting the entire Nanling gradually come under his control.
The demonic technology of the Flying Flame Land and many subsequent psychic transformation techniques prove that the research on the way of sublimation by the countries of Terra has gradually advanced to the next era. The plans of the countries, such as the heavenly beings of the Cangtian Royal Court, The Eternal Elves of Canaan Moore, etc. all show that the kingdoms of Terra have not closed themselves off and solidified, but are still looking for a way forward, but they are too unscrupulous.
Relying on the various earth technologies and pre-era technologies that had been prepared long ago, Ian built the Iron Legion and orbital weapons. With the help of his friend Adebert and the support of many other travelers, Ian defeated them head-on. He defeated the invasion of the fourth-level demon lord and the demon legion and almost wiped them out on the golden plain. This was the first time that Ian alone left his name in a major event that could be recorded in the annals of history, "the first time the extraordinary legion was used in war." And turn it into a stepping stone.
But what follows is another foreshadowing of Axel’s plan: the floating city and the supporting shield network make everyone doubt each other’s purpose. The nobles are worried about their own power, but the common people are happy to see the results. , but I don’t know why the emperor takes care of them so much.
Everything is progressing steadily. Ian successfully mastered the entire South Ridge and became the well-deserved Lord of Steel. And Ian's other side, the Immovable Castle Ian, also obtained the Capital of Knowledge together with Isengard. invitation.
This is the opening of the fourth act, "Eternal Road."
The famous Ian and Mahdi attracted the attention of the world, and his friend Isengard was also noticed, and his own specialness was discovered - the awakening of the Sun Bird bloodline had already been revealed, and as a Experimental subject, Isengard also wants to understand the purpose of Axel's experiment on him.
Together with Ian, who transformed into a dark gold dragon, they came to the Capital of Knowledge and participated in the great meeting of Corizon. In the process, they discovered the truth about Ian's inner light body, which was forged by his countless reincarnations. The guiding star was finally revealed.
The following details, as well as the many specific details of the fifth act 'King of the New World' and the final act 'Front of the Falling Sun', are too spoilery to mention, and even mentioning them will affect the perception. Although Most of the people who will read this speech are friends who are studying, but we cannot ignore the possibility of fattening the party, so I will not mention it for the time being.
The true usefulness of Echo, which has been laid for a long time, and the crazy dream of the strong men of Terra to change the world are all revealed in the second volume.
As a follow-up to the first volume, which is mostly foreshadowing and development, the second volume mainly focuses on recycling the foreshadowing, expanding the world view, and affecting the world situation.
As for the farming part, I have to be honest: Haha, I can’t write at all! But this process must be tried. Only by writing and discovering that you are not good at it can you better summarize your mistakes and use your strengths and avoid weaknesses.
Lord of Steel, although this title does not appear from beginning to end, Ian's determination and will, as well as his actual actions, the transformation and reshaping of the new order, are all confirmed.
Most of the foreshadowings have been recycled, most of the crises have been resolved, and now the story has entered a new chapter.
That is the story of the Lord of the Arcane Path facing the mighty torrent of generations, using the light condensed by his countless reincarnations to turn into the sun, illuminating the world and pointing the way to the distant stars in the future.
The new volume is called [Beyond the Star Sea], so stay tuned.
I need to take some time off because I feel unwell. I want to take more rest to recuperate my health. I will update next Monday.
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What follows is a pure testimonial. There is no charge for it anyway, so if you don’t want to read it, just skip it.
When I was twenty years old, teacher Liu Cixin’s The Three-Body Problem was nominated for the American Nebula Award, and then the Hugo Award for Best Novel. That year, I casually browsed on the Internet, and there was an overwhelming amount of science fiction. The Stars, the Sea, and the Fantasy of the Far Beyond are all personal favorites of Asimov, Dan Simmons, and Arthur C. Clarke. This immediately made me feel ashamed, because I only read books by these well-known science fiction authors. Most of the time, I haven’t even read all of Liu Cixin’s books. I have only read The Three-Body Problem and a few well-known short stories.
Four years later, The Wandering Earth 1 appeared, and this blockbuster exploded into a huge wave. Since then, science fiction seems to have become no longer a niche, at least when it comes to Chinese science fiction on the Internet, everyone has it in their heads. Now that there is a picture, more and more fans are joining in and writing.
And I am one of them, and "Above the Sky" embodies my love for science fiction and fantasy (actually, most of them are science fiction and fantasy. I will write a pure sword and magic book in the future. I have made up my mind. This book Just write a story about Xianxia).
Although I have been obsessed with reading various science fiction novels since junior high school, I have never thought about writing a novel with science fiction elements. I admire every science fiction author. Their imagination, professional ability and imagination of the future world can be said to be deeply respected and impressed. So even if I don’t write science fiction novels, I can’t help but think about some things. Issues that other types of novels do not discuss are the 'changes in the social structure and ethics of fantasy worlds'.
Fantasy worlds are impossible and can never be reasonable. I knew this when I started writing, because creating a story does not need to start with the virtual Big Bang space-time expansion. Deducing the characteristics of six or twenty-seven kinds of quarks can also be the beginning of the creation of the world. There is light, which defines earth, water, fire and wind. The fantasy world represents only a possibility, a vision, a deduction of the world with some new elements added. This is actually the same as "If Guan Yu had not defeated Maicheng" Zhuge Liang "What if" The fantasy of winning the Northern Expedition and reviving the Han Dynasty is the same, but even the latter can't deduce a reasonable possibility, let alone a science fiction fantasy that is a hundred times more complicated?
So I never care about some errors or omissions in details, but more about a special imagination.
When I was reading, I always thought about how people would build their houses in a world where there were frequent wars between strong men and natural disasters. Will people give up the plains where life is easy and choose to live near mountains and hills, relying on the natural shield of rock? Are there two types of buildings in that world? One is extremely tall and towers into the sky, where the strong live. The other is low and submerged into the ground. They look like bungalows on the ground, which are where ordinary people protect themselves. houses?
I always wonder, if a race does not rely on the union of the sexes to produce offspring, how will their morality be different from ours? Are ethics as we know them as boring as dust to them?
A civilization, assuming it does not have two hands, relies on mechanical waves to observe the world, and its silicon-based body and metal-based cells are driven by chemical electrical energy. It is not an artificial robot, but a pure alien civilization individual. If they really Does the existence of human beings really have the same emotions as us humans (not that they don’t have it, but that they have different emotions when dealing with the same things)? The carbon-based biosphere that we value, the seas, forests and societies that we think are beautiful, are they **** or a boring thing?
When individuals from completely different civilizations meet, how will they view each other? What will happen to the communication and civilized interaction between them? Not just boring - I mean, boring to me - looking at the other party's oil (just an analogy), or eating the other party to absorb genes (I didn't specifically refer to the Zerg, to be honest) I actually like the theme of fighting bugs, thanks to Starship Troopers and StarCraft), and then plundering and war scenes.
The aliens at that time were too similar to humans, and could even be said to be just humans with different skins, so I always thought about an elf like some novels (which did not rely on sexual reproduction, but If a race that relies on the fruits of the World Tree to be born) really exist, will they really establish a civilization that we humans can understand? They have no meaning of gender and no difference in strength. What kind of unique society have they built around their mother tree?
What kind of conflicts will arise if they take risks with humans?
Of course, it is too difficult to write like this. I can't write it. And I have waited for so many years and no one has written it. This shows the difficulty of this idea.
However, if we look at us humans from this perspective, we can find many things that are 'taken for granted' and have always been the case. Those things have nothing to do with pure civilization and only appear because we are human beings. by-product.
I’m not saying that this kind of thing is bad, but that when I learned to think like this, I discovered that we humans cannot be described by pure blood. Our spirit, morality, ethics, these intangible things The inheritance of objects is also an extremely special inheritance of memes.
Of course, it would be too profound to say that. Generally speaking, there is an inspiration in the sky that comes from these fantasies, but it is not an explanation of 'why', but a narration of 'how'.
How a world becomes a fantasy world.
Yes, that's my thing.
An eternal elf who will be born from the World Tree, composed of machines, and is immortal and almost eternal. Self-cultivation improves power. It does not rely on external objects and only requires the arcane path of wisdom and calculation power to refine the power of one's own life. Dangerous and powerful fighting spirit originates from pure goodness, the power of holy light given by the 'Star God', and the possible birth of 'gods' and divine power transmission systems...
The origin of Dragon Island (the first time I saw this setting was the Lost Continent), the origin of ancient ruins, and my personal favorite series of armor and ethereal weapons... When I write it, I feel like I am creating it in my work. A fantasy world of fun.
Next, it’s time to describe why dwarves are dwarves, why orcs are orcs, and other issues.
What will the world look like after Ian's story ends? This can be regarded as a topic that I set for myself. It is the fun of me who only likes to daydream. Maybe there will be Gao Tian 2 in the future, which is the story of the original feature film "Universe Chapter"? (Anyway, I have to put it very late in the queue, there are too many things I want to write)
I always love this feeling of fantasy and creation, which is why I like the song "Ordinary Road". Writing is the only way I want to go, and I may do other jobs in the future. , but if I didn’t experience a life related to writing, I might never forgive myself in this life.
As I write this, my body is a little unbearable. I have gastric ulcers and gastric bleeding, insomnia and mental weakness. There are also some scattered minor problems, such as rhinitis and pharyngitis. It is too complicated to mention them. I have been I thought 'I'll take a good rest after writing this book', but in fact, I will start taking a rest from now on. This is not to make excuses. In fact, my updates will not be reduced, but I do need to take a few days off. God, completely correct your work and rest, and develop a good fitness habit.
This is not to be lazy, but to recuperate and prepare for better creation in the future. (You don’t want me to suddenly go to the hospital for a month. To be honest, I don’t want to, but I almost did it last time. I was hospitalized (fortunately the result of the examination was not very serious), at least I can’t take a handful of medicine every day. I really have had enough of living with this kind of medicine.
I will welcome the creation of the third volume with my most fulfilling spirit and state, please believe me.
In short, that’s it, my friends, whether you have read all the way to this point or read it all in one go, the second volume has completely ended, and Ian’s story continues. As for the next volume The three volumes of [Beyond the Star Sea] will be updated starting next Monday.
The sea of stars is something distant and has disappeared, while the other shore is the realm that people long for, the realm beyond distant time and space.
In the world shrouded by the Cradle, there is no star sea or the other side. This is a desperate rift with no way out, but it is not without hope. In any case, as the core of the Cradle Project, in the perpetual motion machine The power contained may bring new hope.
In order to gain support from the referendum, Ian will create a new society, but unlike a purely harmonious world, what he wants to create is always an order that is in line with Terra's actual situation.
In the process, he will have to deal with various crises and challenges, pressure from many powerful enemies and countries, as well as the doubts and thoughts of the people within his own territory.
In this volume, all conflicts and crises will break out, one decision after another or passionate dreams will collide, erupting into brilliant fireworks, and the story that happened in this little cradle will usher in a new era. Come to an end, or a new beginning.
But to Ian, none of this mattered.
No matter what the dream or ambition is, whether it is the illusion of happiness or the desperate struggle, he will crush it.
He who looks up to the stars will conquer the world and take back his stars.
That's all.
Hope you guys like it.
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