Creating a Sandbox World Chapter 11: Month summary

At the end of November, this month's update is still hips (when it seems that you haven't risen). A total of nearly 200,000 words have been updated, and the average day is six thousand six...slightly higher than last month.

In terms of the plot, I wrote three copies, corresponding to the three worlds. The earth line opens up the nationwide martial arts. The chapters at the end of the month shake out the setting of the spiritual world. By the way, I have a distant look at the traces of the empires. May the candle be reactivated.

When I summarized last month, I said that this month I will start to solve the problem of "break one and throw one". Looking back now, I basically achieved this goal. In fact, it can be said that most of the plot of the whole November , All serve this core purpose.

Through the dungeon, I stopped the time of the second, third, fourth, several worlds, and stopped jumping, just like stopping three parallel cars slowly...In order to achieve this goal, I sacrificed reading The continuity of the game, but only in this way can there be a point in the follow-up plot, and the front is stable, and then can there be more energy to open new ones.

As a price, it is the sense of fragmentation in reading caused by continuous map changes.

Moreover, due to the short length of the copies and their very different styles, this sense of fragmentation is magnified. Among the three copies, the plot structure of the Moon Sea Continent is the most complete, but several mistakes have been made.

The first is the decline in the sense of substitution caused by changing the status of "Shanhai". Initially set the "Resurrection" ability, there are two purposes, one is that the follow-up Empire line may be needed, and the other is to solve the jerky problem of cutting into the new world... Try a new method of cutting, now looking back, some The gain is not worth the loss.

Secondly, the plot was not tightened. The sinking effect is not obvious enough in the front, and it seems to be loose, especially the celebration plot gives people the feeling that it deviates from the main line... But in fact, the purpose of writing the celebration plot is to keep the moon clan in the ten chapters. The world is depicted as much as possible.

Stop the world, not just stop accelerating, but write clearly the shapes of different worlds, improve the recognition, let people have a more certain prototype of the sandbox inside, and then rewrite a few The character... is connected with the protagonist, and all of this needs to be completed within ten chapters, it needs an event to bring... When writing, I refer to the writing of the farming essay, and I want to highlight the cool feeling, but the grafting of different themes seems inappropriate. This is the second time I have committed this problem, so pay attention to it.

Thirdly, there is still the old problem of changing the map. After entering the Moon Sea Continent, the environment is unfamiliar. The only memory point that Moon Tree did not raise the sense of expectation, caused the experience to decline.

Referring to the above questions, I tried to modify the copy of the Southern Continent... Originally, Ningli’s plot was arranged for the Hongchen experience, which was a temporary change. The problem was that some settings seemed a little blunt, such as Lin The identity of Tuo's psychology teacher, such as Huaxi going to school... Oh, yes, the story of the meteor shower was originally in this part, but because of the changes, it was put behind.

But the better part of this passage is that it has learned a lesson.

By bringing Huaxi and Hathaway into the dungeon, the sense of fragmentation in changing the map is reduced, and the connection with the earth is strengthened through the update of the "Daily" short film... The existence of the monocular giant also makes the plot stretch... It is a comprehensive reflection on the copy of Moon Sea.

In addition, here, I also finally decided on the method of cutting into the new scene...After trying four different methods, I reluctantly found that the most suitable one might be the fifth: Hard cut... (sigh)

In short, introspection still has a little effect.

So when we waited for the Tianyuan Continent, Hongchen experienced the dungeon, the protagonist brought Huaxi into it again, but this dungeon had no enemies, so the plot couldn’t be stretched...I can’t arrange for spiritual invasions frequently, which would cause reading fatigue. So after thinking about it, I decided to use "fun" to dilute the slack of the plot.

And based on the interesting plot comes from my personal point of view of interesting characters, so Tianyuan copy focuses on the characters.

I think it can be interesting to write.

Then there was Yaoyao, and there was a dog-licking show with Pei Ming... Even though I am not good at writing characters, I still have to try my best to write.

But the data feedback is not good. According to the background data trend, I think the main problem is caused by frequent map changes.

You know, my original plan was to write a longer copy of the experience, about twenty chapters, after all, the best way to solve the problem of changing the map is not to change...

But there was no way. In the end, I chose to cut off half of the plot. In fact, there was a foreshadowing of a sentence in the front, and the second half of the plot was written about "Ask the Conference".

As a result, it was chopped, which resulted in the lack of explosive power at the end of the Tianyuan copy.

Like the Moon Sea dungeon, there was a climax at the end. The Southern Continent dungeon defeated the lord of the spirit world was also a climax, but the climax of the Tianyuan Continent was originally planned to be at the "Question Conference", so it did not explode.

As for the rest of the plot, because of the lack of space, there is really not much to say. The only idea is to try to avoid this in the future. Fortunately, it should not be used next month.

All three sandboxes have stopped successfully, and finally they are not used to run the graph...Next month, that is, December, the tentative plot is that the No. 5 sandbox will be opened, and then the role of the earth will gradually If the number of empires increases, the appearance of empires depends on the specific situation. In addition, we must gradually connect several worlds with each other, hoping to pass the year of 2020 smoothly.

That’s it, let’s cook instant noodles, good night everyone.

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