Fantasy System Chapter 16: Aki Lun Ye who entered the pit

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"Okay, I will send it to you now."

Because the codeword software mobile phone and computer are interconnected, there are also yesterday's manuscripts stored on the mobile phone, which is very convenient. Mu Fan poured out the 40,000-character novels from the mobile phone yesterday, all of which were sent to Aki Lunya.

Anyway, Mu Fan did n’t come to this world anytime soon. As Aki Lun is also a world-famous blogger, it should be possible to see the pros and cons of a book and whether it is in line with the market.

Aki Lun also is a standard otaku family. I usually like to read some novels and anime and play youth love games. Every month I will make some comments on the light novels and animations released, and I have also received a lot of fan. The support has become a well-known popular blogger famous for ACG information. It can be said that he has read countless light novels and has a profound understanding of light novels.

Today he happened to listen to Mu Fan, a close friend who worked in a restaurant and was a fellow student of the same school, and began writing light novels.

In his opinion, Mu Fan belongs to a newcomer who has just entered the pit. Newcomers to light novels need to pay attention to many problems. He needs to list them to Mu Fan one by one and give him some pointers, but just saw Mu Fan light novels. Brief introduction to the plot, Aki Lun was shocked.

"The story of" Accel World "occurs when everyone uses a terminal Device connected with a neural connection device called" neurallinker "and lives in the future of the online world? Become an overclocking linker with a thousand times the speed of thinking?"

Although the introduction of the story is simple, from the perspective of this kind of brain hole, it is likely that a newcomer will not be able to control this theme.

As soon as I saw the introduction, Aki Lun could n’t help but feel interested. This should be a subject of science fiction. Although the light novels now also have the theme of science fiction in the future, but only from the neural connection device. From a point of view, setting should be a very novel theme.

But looking down, Aki Lun Ye frowned.

With a fat, weak, and bullied student, Arita Haruyuki, who lived while cursing reality while hiding in the corner of the school network to improve his highest score in squash games, only happy and confident teenagers can be found in the game. beginning?

In today ’s novels and animations, it ’s definitely a taboo to start as a fat man. After all, people who like to read novels can roughly fantasize their favorite characters, but if they start with a fat man, I am afraid that many people will not be able to persevere?

Not to mention, this fat man is relatively weak and incapable of being bullied every day.

.....

But it is precisely because of the weakness of the male host that he wants to see how the male host can fight back to resolve the incident. Aki Lun also continued to watch. He did not find that he had been completely substituted into this novel unconsciously.

Although the male lead is weak, he has his personality. The greatest advantage of this novel is especially obvious for his personality.

The next day, the admired student union deputy President Kuroyukihime broke into the world of Arita Haruyuki, allowing him to join the ranks of overclocking linkers whose "burstlinker" can increase the speed of thinking to a thousand times. It is also with this speed of thinking that Kuroyukihime helps Arita Haruyuki get rid of this squeezed life.

But also because of this program, he was also involved in the battle between "overclocking connectors". In order to repay the favor of Kuroyukihime, Chunxue voluntarily rebuilt the story of the Black Army for the loyalty of the Black King Kuroyukihime ... ..

The story is over here, and the plot of more than 40,000 words is over.

After watching all the current plots, Aki is completely stunned. The Accel World on the subject alone is very novel in today ’s light novels. It can be said that the battle of Arita Haruyuki can completely affect reality, and he is urgent I want to see what the next story is, Arita Haruyuki has become an overclocking connector's efforts to progress and what kind of development will Kuroyukihime's feelings.

As a well-known popular blogger, he has read countless light novels. From the previous plot alone, he can see that "Accel World" is definitely a masterpiece, because a qualified masterpiece is the first novel theme, It means more than half of the success.

"Mu Fan, I didn't expect you to be just a newcomer. The light novel was so well written, which really opened my eyes. What is the next plot?"

Aki Lun also admired Mu Fan unpretentiously. After reading it, he could not bear his own temperament, and hurriedly returned a message to Mu Fan.

Sitting on the Mu Fan of the Food Department codeword, I saw Aki Leng Ye's reply, and I had an expected smile.

Speaking of all, Accel World set aside all the settings, this novel is in his eyes a weak knight, in order to protect his beloved princess, and continue to grow and improve the inspirational story.

Besides, he belongs to the light novel that carried the fire of the previous life, and Accel World is in line with the current market in the world, which will naturally attract many favorite readers.

As for originality, wait for some popularity before you start.

Rookie light novel?

Mu Fan raised an eyebrow. He wrote novels for four or five years, but he was not in this world.

"Is it not boring to spoil without writing? A qualified author will not spoil."

Mu Fan smiled and returned a message to Aki Lun.

"Oh, I took the liberty."

Aki Lun was just too anxious about the following plot. He was reminded by Mu Fan. Then he thought of the most annoying spoiler of his novel and anime. Then he thought of what Mu Fan started to say and asked: "Mu Fan, you Ready to submit E-Mule Library? I ’m sure I know an editor there. If you want, we can go together on Saturday. I will introduce it to you. "

"Okay, I am actually preparing to participate in the E-Mule Library Newcomer Award. Since you have a familiar editor, let ’s go on Saturday."

"Well, the follow-up plot should be written quickly. I do n’t have to watch me but I will die!"

"Relax, I wo n’t let you die."

......

Mu Fan turned off the phone and began to continue to code. At this time, Yuuki Asuna came over and glanced at the rapidly changing text on the phone, as well as the above chapter information, and asked in surprise: "Mu Fan, you ... . Is this writing a novel? "

"Yeah, yeah."

Mu Fan nodded, suddenly remembered the op of "Love Metronome" sung by Yuuki Asuna, could not help but ask: "Does Yuuki-san also like light novels?"

"My family has always bought me some classics and business books. I ’m getting tired of reading! So I ’m bored and I have a little free time. I will read light novels to relax, just like" Love " The light novel "The Metronome" was only recently discovered. "

Yuuki Asuna threw out his tongue in displeasure, then walked over and sat on the chair opposite Mu Fan, holding his chin in one hand, a pair of full peaks rested on the side of the table, letting the table bear the ground Gravity of the heart.

It is reasonable to say that Yuuki Asuna is a recognized beauty in the school. It is not only good-looking, but also has a very hot body. The Mu Fan can't help but swallow.

"Mu Fan, what is the name of your light novel?" Yuuki Asuna asked curiously.

Hearing the problem of Yuuki Asuna, Mu Fan quickly took back his eyes and said the truth: "Called" Accel World "."

"Can you show me first?"

"This book has too few words now, wait for me to write more and show it to Yuuki-san!"

Actually, Accel World is no problem for Yuuki Asuna, but now the number of words is too small, "Accel World" is relatively slow and hot. Mu Fan decided to give Yuuki Asuna a little more.

After all, there was already a reminder Aki Lun. Fortunately, Aki Lun also had a lower chance of meeting him in class B in the second year, but Yuuki Asuna is different. Every day is in Food Department, he does not want to side Running Food Department, when cooking, he was constantly urged to change by this beauty minister.

"Okay, then you must show me when Mu Fan is on sale!" See Mu Fan said, Yuuki Asuna can only be nodded knife.

"Well, good." Mu Fan nodded.

At this time, Mu Fan heard a commotion from the door of Food Department behind him, and Mu Fan and Yuuki Asuna turned their attention one after another,

A petite figure at the door, dressed in a brown jacket, a plaid skirt, short burgundy hair, and a black bat-shaped hairpin pinned to her hair, with a small tiger tooth in the corner of her mouth, looks very The playful girl of cute came in and sat on the first table with a big swing, looking at Mu Fan with a smile on her head with pride:

"I am the great demon Sataniya, the man who united hell, human beings, come and have a bowl of Yangchun noodles marked on the outside sign!"

"Poof!"

Hearing this Chuunibyou boiling, Mu Fan couldn't help but squirt a sip of water that had just been drunk into his mouth, and turned back to find that Yuuki Asuna was also staring at him.

The two of them looked at each other, and they both saw the helpless and caring for the mentally retarded from their eyes .....