Fantasy System Chapter 453: The Love Guide to the Magic Academy, which was put on the discussion

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When I saw that Kasumigaoka Utaha was in tears, Eriri immediately regretted it and waved his hand in a hurry. He said incoherently: "You ... do n’t cry, I ’m just talking about the first sales of the book, we can slow Slowly modify the plot to the next volume and try harder ... "

"It ’s no use trying, because I ca n’t find a way for the reader to write."

Kasumigaoka Utaha raised his head to look at Eriri, and said in a low tone: "In this light novel, I clearly wrote everything in the normal way, obviously no mistakes were made, but the sales volume proved that everything I was Readers deny that this kind of thing is not as easy as you think ... "

Speaking of which, the tears of Kasumigaoka Utaha have already wet the table in front of her. She picked up the bag on the table and left Cafe with her head down.

Looking at the leaving Kasumigaoka Utaha, Mu Fan and Eriri all fell silent, sitting in their seats, nobody said anything.

At this time, Kasumigaoka Utaha can't listen to anyone's persuasion. At this time, let her be quieter and better.

The meals ordered by Kasumigaoka Utaha, Mu Fan and Eriri were all served by Maid. However, after such a Kasumigaoka Utaha, even the original hungry Eriri had no appetite, but just drank a few sips of ice water. Mu Fan reproachfully said, "Mu Fan, did I just overdo it ..."

Mu Fan shook his head, a smile on his face, comforted: "Senpai is not such a stingy person, this thing does not blame you, of course not Senpai, but the problem lies in the book score Senpai is different from your author Silver Master who surpassed her. Your Silver Master belongs to the accumulation and growth of a book and a book. He finds his own weaknesses to make up for the gods. Practice that extraordinary person. "

"In theory, a book that has become a **** of millions of books sold is much more firm than a book of gods, regardless of the heart, or the understanding of light novels. But Senpai does not In the same way, she stumbled on the book and passed on the name of [Kasumi Utako]. How could it be regarded as a book fame, but because of the fame of a book, the pressure of the new book is greater, the heart is not firm, and she has never understood the What form is presented to everyone, and what to do if the second book hits the street. "

"Sometimes I came up with a new theme, and I sorted out the mistakes of the previous book, and presented it to everyone ’s favorite things. In the end, it was exchanged by a reader who did not understand it. After the publication, no one bought the result of sales violent death. The sales volume denied her such an effort to the readers, so that her heart was more uncomfortable than directly hitting the street. "

Mu Fan knows that Eriri is a good girl, and although she often quarrels with Kasumigaoka Utaha, but because of the quarrel, the relationship between the two people is very good. Kasumigaoka Utaha is not a stingy person. Like Eriri, it is impossible to be because of the other ’s Angrily left in a few words.

So in Mu Fan's opinion, what really makes Senpai care has always been the problem of her new book.

In the final analysis, Kasumigaoka Utaha is too concerned about the readers' views and new books.

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When I heard Mu Fan say this, Eriri did not have any surprise expression on his face, but disappointedly said: "This is the first time I saw Kasumi Utako. I wish she could cheer up sooner."

"Relax, Senpai is not such a violent person, let's eat first."

Mu Fan laughed lightly and motioned to Eriri for dinner. After all, Eriri came to Cafe to prove that she was hungry. Looking back to the brigade that lined up to buy games, Mu Fan understood that Eriri might not have eaten breakfast.

Senpai is sad and does not eat or drink, but Eriri cannot always be taken.

Of course, although Mu Fan comforts Eriri so much, Mu Fan understands that Kasumigaoka Utaha has always been much stronger than others, but this time Senpai is really sad, and it is the kind of heart death, I am afraid this matter It will pass easily.

But Mu Fan has forgotten a little, even he knows that Kasumigaoka Utaha will not recover so easily. How can Eriri who has been dealing with Kasumigaoka Utaha not understand the character of Kasumigaoka Utaha?

In Cafe, both of them were in a bad mood. They just ate a little bit and left most of the food and went to checkout. Because Mu Fan and Eriri's homes are in the way, Mu Fan proposed to help Eriri carry the game temporarily Device went home together.

Half way, Eriri's mobile phone suddenly rang.

Eriri took out the phone and looked at it, then quickly responded with a few words on the screen and then retracted the phone.

"Is there anything?"

From Akihabara, there was no way back. Mu Fan couldn't help but feel a little embarrassed. It happened that this time Eriri took out his mobile phone, so he first found a topic and asked Eriri.

Eriri put the mobile phone back in the pocket of his clothes and said softly: "It is not an important thing. Half a month later, the manga Festival held in Japan, I hope that all well-known manga in the industry can create a short story manga At the manga festival, the first place will get the trophy sent by the manga community. Although I have been drawing books and can communicate with each other, I am also a little famous in the manga community, so the person in charge of the manga community has always wanted me to participate , But the manga festival requires an original short manga. You also know that I do n’t understand the original plot. I plan to get familiar with the original plot and participate again. Do n’t worry for a while. "

"This way."

Mu Fan nodded and Eriri as fan artists have always been unfamiliar with the original plot. Even if "Father Loves Mountain" also seeks his help, it is also a good thing to be able to understand their shortcomings and find a way to make up for it.

It ’s just that Senpai is not the same ...

Because of the Cafe, Mu Fan has been thinking about Kasumigaoka Utaha. On the first night, he went to sleep after finishing the code. On the second day, he logged in to the official website of E-Mule Library and took a look at Kasumigaoka Utaha's "Academy of Magic Love" Online version, he was surprised to find that Kasumigaoka Utaha was not updated last night.

From "Love Metronome" to "Magic School Love Guide", Kasumi Utako is broken for the first time.

Seeing some information in the book review area that confuses the author to make more changes, of course many people do n’t care, and the author needs to take a break, and occasionally they do n’t care.

Mu Fan may also feel that Senpai was in a bad mood yesterday, and broke the day.

It should be updated the next day?

But the next day, when Mu Fan opened E-Mule Library and clicked on the "Magic School Love Guide", it was found that Senpai had not been updated.

Wait for another day. On the third day, Senpai was finally updated, but Mu Fan clicked to see the story inside but stunned.

Senpai ’s heart felt like a big blow. There were typos in the new chapter, and the plot was even more worrying. He wrote Heroine because he did n’t trust the man and left. Drunk on the low-end plot of Nv3.

You know, Mu Fan has seen the "Magic School Love Guide", even if Heroine created by Kasumigaoka Utaha joined Bai Xue, it is also clever and wise. The IQ problem of low-end games like Heroine is impossible to commit, male The Lord is not stupid, how could it be possible to go to the female third?

But it was indeed such a heart-wrenching plot that attracted countless readers of tsukkomi, and the book review area almost scolded.

There are also a few authors who are not used to him and Kasumigaoka Utaha at such a young age and have become great god-level authors. They also took the opportunity to eliminate the Kasumigaoka Utaha's dignity. They deliberately invited the water army to comment.

Online reviews are most afraid of someone taking the lead. Once they take the lead, someone will scold them. Because of the advent of the navy, the curse in the book review area can't be controlled immediately. There are hundreds of comments once refreshed.

Because Kasumigaoka Utaha is getting more and more troublesome, in the end, Mu Fan accidentally saw some comments from station C, and clicked to find that the latest chapter of this book was even taken by the host of station C and other websites Comments, titled "The most intellectually retarded light novel in history Heroine", "The Magical School Love Guide once again refreshed the lower limit of IQ" "The most fascinating light novel in history"

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One of the series titles is endless, and Senpai is also known as the most intellectually dissatisfied author of the E-Mule Library within a day. Some authors even claim that Kasumi Utako writes light novels at will, and is not worthy of signing a great treaty.

"Senpai is not worthy. You, a jealous author like you, are worthy. Instead of discussing others, it is better to use those times to develop yourself."

Mu Fan turned off the computer in annoyance after the author group recovered the author.

Thinking about the crying Senpai that day, he lay a little tired on the bed and looked at Bai Sensen ’s ceiling and sighed. Although this world is the hottest era of ACG culture.

Because it is too hot, E-Mule Library well-known writers such as Kasumi Utako once even wrote the "Love Metronome" that made anime. Once they write intellectual disability, they will be instantly enlightened by readers, masters and those who are jealous. Of the authors put on the hot comment.

In this era, cyber violence exists, and it is more terrible than theirs. I do n’t know if Senpai can withstand this blow.

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Time rushed by, and Mu Fan opened the online version of the "Magic Academy Love Guide" on the fourth day.

Not only Mu Fan, but at the same time many readers and online up and authors are ready to take a new chapter or the author ’s explanation and they are eager to find that the "Magic Academy Love Guide" has no change today.

On the fifth day, the "Magic Academy Love Guide" has no changes.

On the sixth day, the "Magic Academy Love Guide" has no changes.

In the blink of an eye, it is now the seventh day. Mu Fan looks at the online version of the "Magic Academy Love Guide" deeply, and the latest chapter of the book still has no movement ....