House Dad’s Literary Life Chapter 1046: The disaster of others, her troubles (1/3)

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Although Xi Xi was only in the first grade of elementary school, after the end of the spring tour, the diary of the spring tour, which made countless children hate, or the so-called experience still came one after another! Of course, when Li Ruolan communicated with the parents, he still revealed that he used this as a foreshadowing, and in the future, he would start asking the children to start a plan to write a diary.

This two-hundred-character homework after the spring tour is a disaster for many children, such as Lan Xin, Chen Yuxuan, etc. But for Xi Xi, or at home like Wang Leilei and Cao Ruolin For children who started asking them to learn to write a diary, this is really not a big problem.

Especially Xi Xi, the little girl who just finished taking a bath is sitting at the desk with her cheeks on her cheeks, but she is worried, but she is not worried about writing questions about the spring tour ...

"Teacher Li said that he would write two hundred words, but I think there are a lot of words to write, but I ca n’t finish it. What should I do?" Xi Xi saw his father walk in and raised his little head, unable to wait. Asked.

Yang Yi smiled slightly, stood beside her desk, looked at her sideways, and asked, "How much do you plan to write?"

Xi Xi grabbed her pen and turned her head to look at her homework book. After thinking for a while, she turned her head back in confusion and said, "I don't know, but, but I think there is There are a lot of stories to tell, and I do n’t know how much to write. "

I want to finish all the interesting things and write only two hundred words, which is naturally impossible!

Yang Yi thinks about it and thinks it is a good opportunity for Xixi to make progress.

So, he said with a smile: "Xixi, let ’s not write this composition first, you take out your diary, and in addition, take out a draft paper."

Xi Xi is a little puzzled, but still cleverly according to what his father said, buckle up the workbook and press it neatly under his other stack of workbooks, then open the drawer and put his own beautiful and beautiful appearance The diary was carefully taken out.

The scratch paper is on the table.

"What do you think, if you were asked to write a diary? What would you write at the beginning?" Yang Yi asked.

The little girl looked at her father in confusion. She looked down at her diary, thought for a while, and replied a little uncertainly: "Write the date and the weather?"

Yang Yi found that he had to be more targeted. He smiled and said: "So, you think about it, when we were on the bus on the way to the spring tour, what wonderful things were there? What happened? "

I asked this earlier!

Xi Xi ’s eyes lit up at once, and the little girl with a good memory did n’t even think about it. She smiled and broke her finger and said: "There are many, Baba sent us buns and delicious soft. Sugar, and Baba also takes us to sing together ... "

"Then you write on the draft paper in two lines, with the words" Daddy's snacks "written on it, and the following writes about us performing singing and teaching classmates to sing." Yang Yi said to Xixi.

The little girl obediently did what her father said. She wrote two words, then lifted her little head and stared at her father: "Baba, I won't write snacks."

"The characters that ca n’t be written are still the same as before, first replace with pinyin, and then look up the dictionary to change it."

Yang Yi did this by teaching Xixi to design a simple outline of a "long story," so after Xixi finished writing, he leaned over and pointed his finger at these two lines of writing, Said: "Have you seen these two subheadings? Are their structures doing something?"

The little girl blinked her eyes. It was not easy for her to understand the concept. After thinking for a while, she nodded.

"This is our summary of one thing. We can expand on these words when we write a diary in detail later." Yang Yi said, "Then join you to write the teacher's spring tour experience , We need to streamline some content, so which of the two content do you think is more exciting? Would you like to keep it? "

Xixi probably understands what Dad meant. She hesitated and pointed to the back, saying, "I think, I think singing is more fun."

"That's right!" Yang Yi smiled and patted Xixi's little head, saying, "When we write a diary, it seems like we are building blocks, think about it first, what pieces are we going to write? Content, then a block, a block to build up. "

"But the teacher told you to write a composition of only two hundred words. At this time, you have to think about how to streamline, keep the parts that you think are most interesting, and save the parts that may not be so important, just like demolishing blocks In the same way, remove them piece by piece. In this way, you know what should be written in the last two hundred words! "

Taking building blocks as an example, obviously there are many images, and the little girl understood.

"Baba, but I still want to write a lot of things? Because I think a lot of things are fun!" Xi Xi finally twisted her thin waist on the chair, a little reluctantly Talk to dad.

"So Dad asked you to write a diary first!" Yang Yi laughed and said, "Your diary is not limited. You can write as many as you want, and wait until you finish writing your diary. Satisfied, let's go back and look at how to condense this diary into a two-hundred-word article, so that you will have no regrets. "

"Yeah!" Xi Xi's eyes lit up, and he smiled with his father, "I want to write a diary, I want to write a lot of things!"

"Yes, you can write a diary first tonight, and you ca n’t finish it. Let ’s continue tomorrow, wait for tomorrow, let ’s read it together, how to streamline the experience of the two hundred-word spring tour, write it, OK? "Yang Yi looked at the little girl happy, and she was in a good mood, her tone increased a lot."

"Okay!" the little girl responded crisply.

......

On Sunday, Yang Yi accidentally received a call from Fu Jun while instructing her daughter in writing.

Yang Yi was not surprised to receive a call from Fu Jun. After all, his personal relationship with Fu Jun is also very good. He usually goes to Yangcheng to eat with Fu Jun and his family, but this time, Fu Jun It was because of Sahara Online Shop's official business that I came to Yang Yi.

Now Sahara Online Shop is basically on the right track. Fu Jun rarely calls Yang Yi about work. After all, a mature enterprise has a rich talent pool and a complete enterprise structure. Anecdotal dependence!

This time, it's about the future direction of the group company and online store. Not to mention the management of Sahara Online Shop, even Fu Jun couldn't grasp his idea.

So, he can only turn to Yang Yi, who has always been far-sighted.

"It's not convenient to talk on the phone. Are you free tomorrow? I plan to come to Jiangcheng tomorrow. I will discuss it with you and Brother Lan." Fu Jun's behavior style has become more and more popular in recent years. Yes, but he still kept a respect for Yang Yi, first asked.

"Yes, such a big thing, we really have to sit down and talk with some of our shareholders." Yang Yi smiled and said, "However, I don't think you have to worry about this. It's still a good thing to say that ! "