I Am Not Really Related: About the plot and some speculation and criticism from everyone

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Seriously, I'm a little lost right now.

When I was writing the outline, I thought, if I wrote it like this, it would be too procrastinated, so that the front is full of daily life, and the golden finger appears too late.

After that, I couldn't think of a good way, so I wrote it first.

As expected, some people think it's watery, some people think that the progress is too slow, how many chapters have passed, the protagonist will only play 13 with children, and some people think it's boring to watch too much every day.

No way, delete the plot and improve the rhythm.

A lot of the daily routines that have been designed are directly cut off, or they are taken away, and then transition to the Five Shadows War as soon as possible.

Originally, the outline was designed to focus on the daily life with Madara, the daily confrontation with Hei Jue, etc. after being taken away by Madara.

Then edit the notification, it's time to go live.

No.1 or No.5...

At that time, there were not many manuscripts in hand, and I was tossed to death every day by troubles, and then there was the afternoon flight on the 1st.

Forget it, what are you talking about.

In short, it was quite abrupt at the time. In addition, in the next few days, I couldn't calm down and code words, so I simply pushed it to the 5th, and there was a few more days of buffer time.

Someone said that everyone else's listing is a high-level C story, you are in transition, who likes to watch?

That's right. At the time, I had two options. Either I had to bite the bullet and write the daily routine according to the outline, or I could delete it all, continue to speed up the pace, and directly write the story of the protagonist when he became an adult.

I chose the latter, just because I didn't want to put it on the shelves and was told water.

The result still didn't run, because the transitional plot looked like water, but you can't write it yet.

For example, Madara's attitude has to be explained. It probably taught the protagonist what to explain, when Madara's reincarnation eyes should be explained, and how to solve the hidden dangers of the protagonist's body.

If you talk less, there will be a lot of people questioning you, what is going on here, you have a bug.

If I talk too much, I will become a sloppy one. It seems that there is no nutrition at all, which is commonly known as water.

After all these have passed, in order to continue the following plot, there must be a foreshadowing. From time to time, it is necessary to explain what has happened and what changes have been made in these years.

I don't want to write these things, but I can't do it, I don't explain anything, how do I write it later?

Then it became what it is now, writing daily life and talking about water. Don't write about daily life, it's also water.

Although I had a certain amount of mental preparation when I wrote the outline, it was still quite uncomfortable.

It's not your fault, it's my fault. I don't have enough writing power, I can't write some unimportant plots concisely and concisely, and I don't have enough control over the rhythm.

It's all my fault for being beaten up on this one.

But some people say that the water I wrote on purpose, I was ready to catch a wave and ran away, or it was written by someone else. Is it too vicious?

If you don't write well, your grades will be poor, and you've worked so hard to make a few meals?

This book is not a buyout, so what's the point of having a ghostwriter?

As an aside, I have been asked more than once to write buyout articles on other websites. It may not be a lot, but at least it is guaranteed.

However, the old faceless person can be regarded as a kind of pursuit person, plus the person himself is a little nostalgic and finds it troublesome, so let it go.

So if it's really bad money, why don't I write a buyout article? Why did you choose to finish the book instead of continuing to write it down when Qiqianjun was set in the previous book?

Speaking badly, just go to the world and write a few hundred chapters, why don't you have any money?

At that time, more than half of the book friends in the group supported Lao Wu Mian to continue writing and go to another world to die.

But at that time, Lao Wu Mian thought about it a lot, and felt that the direct ending in Naruto World was the best ending, and it was also the best explanation for myself and all readers.

So opinions can be raised, and I think water doesn't matter, but I really don't want to deliberately use the word water.

After that, let's talk about the plot.

Some people say that nothing has changed in the more than ten years of jumping in the middle, in order to force the protagonist to stick to the original plot, and also ask why not just fast-forward to Shippuden.

I want to say that when the protagonist was young, some people thought it was too small and didn't feel like a substitute.

Many people feel that the rhythm is slow and they are tired of watching the daily life, so they have deleted the daily life of about a few dozen pictures and Madara and others. This is the reason why you think it is fast.

If I wrote the deleted paragraph, I'd be sprayed in a different way, so it doesn't matter.

As for forcibly reverting to the original plot, and fast-forwarding to Shippuden, I don't know if I'm crazy or you're crazy.

Let's just tell you, there's no **** in my outline!

Tell me where did you post the original story?

I have already left a foreshadowing of the results of the whirlpool family, and there are even other foreshadowings that have not been revealed.

When the protagonist isn't out to do something, I can't force the plot to change too much, right?

Some people say that the above is to make the protagonist return to Konoha, and then what...

I'm also really...drunk.

Let people target them in various ways, and then lick their faces and return to Konoha to lead everyone to a well-off life. Is it cheap or not?

I'm still a Naruto...

From the moment the protagonist is taken away by Madara, the Hokage thing has nothing to do with the protagonist.

The only thing someone said is right is that Sarutobi Hijen is disgusting!

Because this is how I designed it.

Don't care what Kishimoto's definition of Sarutobi in the original book is, as far as I'm concerned, Sarutobi is a hypocritical, scheming guy.

It seems that the worst is Danzo, but how much of Danzo is actually a scapegoat for Sarutobi?

How many things Sarutobi could not do, expressly or implicitly handed over to Danzo, and then pretended to be very wronged and angry afterwards?

He kept talking for Konoha, and even died with honor.

Wow, that's it!

It's a miracle that Naruto didn't go black, it's all AB's fault!

So in this book, those who want to see Sarutobi as a good person can just click × and go.

The main characters must be Danzo and Sarutobi!

In addition to personal senses, this design is also to give the protagonist the choice behind, enough motivation and explanation.

There is also the part of going to the Land of Rain. Some people think that the protagonist did nothing, just glanced at Nagato, and then got two water.

I feel like I've been wronged.

This piece has several functions. One is to use the perspective of Nagato and several people to describe what stage the war has entered at this time.

The second is to let the protagonist Xiaolu do it and tell everyone that the protagonist is already very popular, and by the way, harvest the worship of Yilangmen and others.

In the original novel, Nagato and a few people decided to catch up and apprentice because they saw Jiraiya's battle.

So to design such a foreshadowing, it is also convenient for the protagonist to come back and accept his younger brother.

Third, all the descriptions of the current tragic state of the Kingdom of Rain, as well as those descriptions that the protagonist's water escape in the Kingdom of Rain can play a stronger role, are all foreshadowing!

This block will determine a subsequent choice for the protagonist.

Fourth, give Madara a reasonable time for trouble, so as to lead the mirror to the protagonist, and then notify Danzo at the same time, and start to intensify the conflict.

When I was designing this plot, I felt like I was quite a jerk. Many problems were solved at once, and by the way, I could let the protagonist pretend to be a B.

And then I took two water in order to see Nagato, I'm so special...

Forget it, I wrote such an old man at once, and I don't know if anyone has read it.

Now I don't know how to write it myself, so I don't know how to write it~IndoMTL.com~ What's more interesting is that now some people come out and say that it was well written before it was put on the shelves.

I just wanted to say what are you doing?

If you stood up earlier and said that the original writing was good and the rhythm was good, would I use a panicked batch to delete the outline and change the plot?

With that said, it seems like I'm throwing the blame again.

Really, I can't get rid of this problem. Every time I read the comments, I feel relieved, and I can't sleep.

Obviously every time I know that it is difficult to talk to one another, there are always two people who make opposite suggestions. Who should I listen to? I still can't help but doubt myself, thinking that it may be my own problem and I have to change it!

The last two are unfortunate, I'm the only one who deserves it!

Okay, the fast-forward is fast-forwarding, so let's just write it down, and then it's time for the plot where the protagonist really begins to rise and the golden finger who delays things to show his face.

Comments, I don't read either.

I've explained everything I can about the question of whether it's water or not, and I don't have much to say.

Then it's time to write, write. It is impossible to read the book ~IndoMTL.com~ Eunuch, at least these things designed in the outline will be written later.

It may have disappointed some book friends and did not meet expectations. If there is a chance, I hope to see you again.

The last sentence is to sum up, all the mistakes are my fault, I wrote the spicy chicken, I wrote the water, I am guilty.

Please be merciful, the comments section has been so smoky these days that it's hard to see.

It's been down for several days, now I have the head office deleted, right?

If you insist that I am accusing me, I will admit it.

Otherwise, when the newcomer saw how enthusiastic the big guy was, he didn't turn his head and ran away, for fear of being caught, ripping off his pants on the ground and giving injections.

2020.11.12

The humble old man was beaten and stood at attention