I’m Really Not Targeting the Mages: Part 1? Closing testimonials and June summary (3,700 words of nonsense warning)
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Hello everyone.
I am a barbarian trainee "Lori Zhan" who has been practicing for half a month.
As the one destined to save Quinan.
Today I'm going to take Xiaobo SS Weilan's lair!
Hmm.
After all, it is the SS of the first chapter.
It won't be too difficult.
My martial arts.
It's not for nothing!
Eat my axe!
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twothousandyealater.
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I'll go check out the guide!
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"Narrator: Timeline closed successfully! A new story is about to begin... LOADING..."
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Call.
The first part is finally finished.
This is a foreshadowing from the first chapter.
Finally closed.
This feeling is really cool.
It's just that the process is a bit torturous.
On the one hand, it has to be hidden and tucked away.
On the other hand, something has to be carefully buried.
Buy something.
Not too obvious.
Otherwise it is too easy to expose.
It can't be too subtle either.
That would be awkward
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Speaking of this.
When writing early.
Many brothers pointed out that I was a little abrupt in the connection of the plot.
Because of this.
I only later changed the script for Legacy of Time.
The original script was not like this.
That's also a neat structure.
But it's very different from the current version.
This is done as a hint in advance.
The advantage is.
Everything is more logical.
The articulation is smoother.
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The downside is.
In fact, some book lovers should have guessed it in advance.
Like book friend Kai Shakai.
It seems that he has a similar chapter to say about Legacy of Time.
It's just that I didn't think of any means to achieve it.
This lacks shock.
If you don't write the Legacy of Time section.
Maybe the shock would be more violent.
But this is an ideal result after weighing the pros and cons.
And to echo this result.
Like a jigsaw puzzle.
You can find clues in the book for the following but not limited to the following
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"1. Lolita was repeatedly killed 99 times by Guan Dibo SS in the first stage, which is unreasonable in itself, and in this book, there may be 1/2/3 or more behind all unreasonableness internal reasons"
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"2. Roger once recalled that Veran had many specialties, and was skilled in combat skills and varied in style"
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"3. When going back and forth between Mi Xing and Quinan, Roger has already touched himself in different time periods because of the 'unknown hand'. This is actually a hint that he may have a formal meeting with Rumo in the future. As noted on the Ring of Bius, time is a ring, and so is history..."
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"4. Legacy of Time. Dear Sir Ranwell. Hints of a possibility"
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"5. When the 13 items were fished out of the sea, the mold of the puppet's body was mentioned, and Roger once fell into deep thought when copying who..."
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"6. Some little easter eggs about Asgard"
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Actually.
If you look at it in hindsight.
It's not a big deal either.
It couldn't be easier to add some foreshadowing to the crazy stuff.
The main thing is persistence and patience.
But I'm still pretty proud.
The ability to grasp the structure and the big picture.
It proves that the existence of five major documents of my general outline, division outline, volume outline, plot deduction, and daily detailed outline is meaningful.
As for settings, monster illustrations, attribute summary, character card, specialty table, occupation tree, calculation formula, two-dimensional world setting, wave SS level library...
Should also make sense.
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Ah.
I wish someone would say something in my ear right now.
Ten years one key is really powerful!
Not.
Ten years one key is really fine!
As I replied in the book group in the morning
There is no author who is born to be fine.
Only diligence can make up for clumsy ears.
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Because I usually write very honestly.
Today's summary does not want to be so rigid.
Write wherever you want.
Don't take offense if the foreword doesn't match the afterword.
Let me go.
Just said "hard work can make up for one's weakness."
I think I'm a really hardworking writer.
Of course.
Some of my brothers may have the impression that I often take time off work.
That's right.
A leave of absence.
But it doesn't affect diligence.
I can swear by the name "Lori War".
Every time off work.
It's not because of my laziness.
It's for better creation.
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For example.
The mid-June situation is worrying.
I took a total of 4 days off.
But still updated 19W words after a month.
That's not lazy, at least.
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Mention about my codeword status here.
I work at least 10 hours a day.
It may be up to 12 hours when the big chapter appears.
Half of the time was spent detailing, setting, and conceptualizing.
And my typing speed is slow.
It's really slow.
The initial average was 1,000 words an hour.
I can barely reach the 1500 threshold now.
So on days when I don't ask for leave.
The average daily update word count of nearly 7K is really stressful for me.
Of course.
I know this is a profession.
Readers will only see what you write.
No one cares if the outline and the like are sent out.
So I'm just saying this to justify myself.
A leave of absence.
Really for better creation.
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Especially.
I'm the type of person who doesn't keep manuscripts when they're up there.
For example, this morning.
I know everyone is the most uncomfortable.
You have to find a way to make everyone happy in one go.
The consequence of this is.
After passion.
Also prone to the bottleneck of a downturn.
This is often the case when asking for leave.
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Someone said.
You can save the manuscript.
No.
Can't save.
At least not yet.
If I have good health, I will definitely write it for everyone.
Not to mention that trying to save the manuscript will inevitably slow down the update.
And when the update slows down, it will drop a lot.
This is deadly for serial books.
Many people say raising books.
If you keep it, you will disappear.
From the opening of the book to the present.
I have responded to many people in this chapter.
To the end of the first part.
I don't know how many people are there.
Speaking of which.
I suddenly wanted to do a little research.
When did you start reading this book?
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So much to say.
It's not really a complaint.
In my opinion.
This is web text.
Superior instant feedback coupled with super update pressure force authors to write passionate works.
But corresponding to it.
The pressure of daily change of word count also limits further development.
I reread many chapters today.
There are many regrets in my heart.
There are many places.
I can write better!
Many scenes.
I can write more cool!
Many plots.
I can think of more ingeniously.
Unfortunately there is no if.
The plots in this book.
Can I write better in other books?
I don't know myself.
A lot of times it's really a stroke from God.
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For example, the hug and fall of Taikoo Ssangyong.
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For example, the echo of Legacy of Time.
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For example, The King of Whale Shark's Touch Porcelain.
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I don't think I can write these stories in the future.
Compared to the level of brilliance.
I don't think I'm handling it optimally.
Although these plots are all foreshadowing.
Take the example of the king of whale sharks.
To make him touch porcelain Roger.
I designed the clue chain like this
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"Harpy"/"Sky Nest"/"Sky Cable Car"/"Astral Beluga"/"Whale Leap Event"/"Beluga Dream"/"The King of Whale Sharks Touched Porcelain Successfully!"
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One ring after another.
The structure is really fine.
What's worse is details and textual presentation.
This is also impossible.
All I can say is that my writing still needs rapid evolution.
I hope to express what I want to express in a more transparent and powerful way in the future!
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Review the first part.
I'll give myself a 6.
Out of 10.
Passing because the structure is in place.
Sweet enough.
There is no better reason than mentioned above.
As for character building and scene description, I also know the shortcomings.
Actually, I've been experimenting a little.
Like the recent little Beja.
Speaking of Beatrice.
I can't help but think about the rest of the last two volumes.
O white wolf.
Demon Lord.
I have a backstory for almost all the supporting characters.
But while writing I found out that it doesn't work at all!
In the end, only the majority can be chopped off.
And the previous Vera line.
As Veran's daughter.
She should have had more appearances.
But a variety of factors are considered.
She's still marginalized by me.
Ahhhhh.
This is the reason for the lack of pen power!
It's also because of my lack of background
I don't dare to start the description slowly one by one.
I don't yet have the qualifications for readers to be extremely patient.
I just keep making tradeoffs.
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Speaking of which, let's take a break.
Yesterday's chapter talked about Veran's harem.
In fact, that paragraph is not to make up the word count.
In order to echo some of the clues mentioned earlier, and add a little more detail to the line:
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"Vera has many children/Vera tried to kill her father"
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There are many similar things.
It just doesn't seem convincing that these things never come out of their mouths.
So I rarely mention it.
I really want to be a god.
Every foreshadowing written has been interpreted or even over-interpreted.
Every time someone sees the little easter egg I've racked my brains for.
That feeling is really enjoyable.
That's one of my two favorite bonds between author and reader.
As for the other one.
It is companionship.
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The book has been serialized for a long time.
The purpose of storytelling and storytelling is no longer pure.
I read everyone's chapters every day.
You can get a feeling of companionship.
Sometimes it's like an old friend.
This feeling.
For me who is now 0 social in real life.
Very important.
Thank you all.
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Anything else to say?
It seems that there is nothing else I want to talk about except "it's really hard to write online articles / these 1.6 million words are exhausting me / it's almost 9 months, when will the book be on vacation?" .
But our story ended up being just a stopover.
The first tribe has come to an end.
Lori Battle...
No.
Roger's journey through the Nine Planets has only just begun.
Of course.
Don't worry, everyone, I'm going to be a crazy water king.
Although there are 4 books in total.
The number of words in the first part is equal to the sum of the three parts of 234.
That is to say.
The next three films are almost all around 60W~70W.
The total number of words is controlled between 3 million and 3.3 million words.
Not too much.
Not too little.
As for the completion time.
Similar to what I wrote in my last summary of the first five volumes.
Around March to June next year.
That is to say.
This book will last you at least 9 months.
I hope you can support genuine subscriptions.
Open a custom order with conditions, I really won't lie to you for money~
The author lives on this.
I also hope that you will cast more monthly votes.
Our recommendations for this book are all gone.
The future exposure is only the monthly ticket list.
Hot sales are hard to come by.
It's still too niche.
So the monthly ticket list is the only exposure channel.
It is also the only source of new subscriptions.
This is an important reason why I have the cheek to ask for tickets even if I owe more time off.
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Let's talk about something else.
That's right.
The character of "Beatrix" is available today.
Like everyone.
Also "Sandy" and "Qin".
After reading the book, click on the character list and like it.
We also don't ask for how many stars.
What's the matter with the number of likes of a few girls who are not as high as the magic frog?
Don't really think that Roger is relying on the magic frog in C?
It doesn't matter what the star value is.
But can you give me a Sandy character vest!
Additionally.
Xiandi Li's sketches have been posted to the group before.
It is estimated that the map will be available in a while.
It's still pretty good.
If there is a chance.
I will buy other people's portraits out of my own pocket.
A picture is always different!
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Finally.
Let's talk a little bit about the follow-up.
The journey to the planet that some book lovers are looking forward to can only start with the third book.
The main content of the second part still revolves around the double star of Kui Mi, multiple histories and the forbidden curse.
Next I may make some changes and try.
Try to write something new.
Of course.
The role of good brothers is essential.
After all, Double Star still has a lot of maps waiting for Loli to fight...Bah!
Wait for Roger to drive.
There is also a new map: Sea of Ruins.
The whale shark is also a vengeful guy.
And with the return of history and the stage of the Abyss of Destruction.
The Secret of the Qi Trainer~IndoMTL.com~ The whereabouts of the Hei Qu two.
The strategy of the gods.
It will also surface one by one.
Those scenes that have been conceived in my mind.
Thinking about it makes my blood boil!
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"Tip: Found a pre-updated game version, do you want to download it?"
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"Pre-update completed: The second historical dust No. 7.5 is officially implemented, so stay tuned!"
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Finally, I would like to thank the leader of the [Unheard Qin Yu].
Or ask for a monthly pass!
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