Immortal Becomes a Stay-at-home Dad After Return: Tell you something about the mistress! (This order
Since I am the author, not spoiling is my minimum morality.
So there is something about the plot, I am really inconvenient to tell you too much.
I hope you will see it yourself and find it yourself.
The following is a comment I saw in the chase book, forward it to For You Guys to see, I hope it can inspire you.
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The author has already said at the starting point, single female lead, Qin Ruoying.
In the book, Aunt Zhang said that Qin Ruoying left a message "If you come back and I have n’t come back, then do n’t go to me, let alone my house, because I ca n’t go home"
It can be seen that the heroine is not at home, but in a hidden world Sect, combined with the later heroine appearance "see: Chapter 31"
The mistress's pregnancy and childbirth should have caused Sect's anger. The mistress has been under house arrest since then.
In the article, the yellow skirt girl Hao Qing, although she seems to be willing to disclose the news with the hostess, is actually pregnant with ghosts.
Afterwards, the hostess pretended to have a grudge against the male host, and her hatred remained unabated to eliminate Sect's malice towards her daughter and her husband.
After the woman in the yellow skirt named Hao Qing left,
The author specifically described "Squeak! The door is closed again". It also points out the deep meaning of the housewife under house arrest.
After the woman in the yellow dress left, the article wrote, "There is still an angry look on her face, only an indescribable confusion and sorrow. Suddenly a drop of crystal clear tears fell from the corner of her eyes."
The heroine is confused as to why the male hero suddenly appeared after five years of disappearance, and where he went in the previous five years.
Sadly, I have n’t seen my daughter for 4 years, and I can deny myself when I do n’t know.
The last drop of tears really expresses the feelings of missing my daughter and Xiang Gong!
Here is the most controversial topic in the starting book review area, that is, the heroine is not worthy of being a mother, leaving her daughter to run away.
civilized reading ... rational thinking ...
The hostess of this book has a slightly deeper fortune, but the old bookworm should be easy to see. This book seems to me that the interaction between father and daughter is not as good as "Literary Dad", but the plot trend is indeed the same as that of Literary Dad. Not the same, and the book is too few, can not determine the details of the plot after the trend, so the two can not be compared, because the style is different.
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There are many writing techniques, such as flashbacks and remarks.
Maybe I am not strong enough to write that kind of taste, but I am still very eager for you to understand what I want to express.
Speaking of conscience, I really do n’t want to write anything that pretends to fight face routines, although I am very deep in this research.
If you are careful, you can find that there are some differences between the writing of the first forty chapters and the writing of the last forty chapters.
I am changing because I do not have my own fixed style and fixed readership like the great gods.
I want to keep every reader, so I can only try it constantly.
I buried a heroine pit, it seems that everyone is spraying the heroine, and when I spray it, I start to doubt my life.
ask yourself, I really do n’t think there ’s anything wrong with the hostess Ah?
The brother above basically pointed out the foreshadowing that I left behind. Although his guess was only for 6-7 points, at least he did n’t have a big brain hole, all kinds of random assumptions.
Everything must be reasonable, one sentence to say.
(what comes without giving birth to motherhood, I am not spraying you, but I really want to ask you not to be so straight!)
(Straight male cancer !!!)
(Some readers may be too young to understand the pain and suffering of a woman who is pregnant in October!)
(Pregnancy is when a woman is most weak and helpless ~IndoMTL.com~ At this time they especially need to be accompanied!)
(Chen Xi disappeared for five years. When you sprayed the heroine, did you ever think about how much she had paid?)
(As a mother, she left her child, do you think she is not in pain?)
【Niannian is a piece of meat falling from her body! ! ! ! ! 】
Do you really think that the Qin Ruoying's is a ten-7 or 8-year-old girl?
If that's the case, didn't she know to go to have a fetus when Chen Xi left! ! !
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You are readers, one-tenth of them will be my future food and clothing parents, so I ca n’t afford it,
How to make money and how to come, I'm not stupid, of course, I won't have trouble with money.
I explained the problem of the hostess. It ’s your business if you can listen in.
This is a serialization, so I can adjust the plot at any time.
Then I will adjust the plot selectively according to the data feedback.
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In addition, this book is the starting point, so the bosses support it anywhere except the starting point. For me, it is actually useless.
the starting point is my boss ...
Of course, I have thanked you for your support!
I was so happy to see that you were spraying pirated and spraying sprays ...
So, thank you for your support!
I do n’t dislike pirated readers, so I only put For You Guys ’s comments on it.
I really did n’t expect that when most of the starting point comment area was spraying the female host, the piracy comment area came out with a comment I thought was fair and objective.
Hey ...
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