Legend of Fu Yao: Long comment on Guan Canghai

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I hardly write reviews, but seeing what you guys say, writing reviews is also a kind of support, so I will verbose the following sentences

Longan, your "Shuyao" is really good-looking. The characterization is very detailed, vivid, humorous, and the plot is unsteady. You are so diligent, you are deeply loved by all of us. Compared with "Emperor Phoenix", the facial makeup of the people is more profound. Although I like Su Xuan very much in terms of character, there is no special favorite in Fuyao. "Yan Qing" is relatively young (romantic + martial arts). All three books are very beautiful. But there are also regrets. Regrettably, the protagonists are all gods, not humans, and the story becomes a myth if everything goes smoothly.

Next, please forgive me, forgive me for comparing your text with Donger's. I know this kind of comparison is very offensive. Your characteristics are different from Dong'er, and we don't want the same. The same is meaningless. I am chasing Donger's article and saw that it hasn't been updated for a long time, and I have seen everyone's recommendations for you from other people's comments. Your plot is more life-like, Dong'er 9 is too illusory, and the munitions really seem to be abandoning the story. You are simple, majestic, grandiose, and meticulous, sensational and gorgeous.

There are some things you can learn from each other:

You can learn from 9 detailed emotional descriptions, such as letting go: "Finally I have to face it!

Chu Li looked down at her. She is really beautiful today. Although we have seen each other a long time ago, she can only look at her seriously until this moment. Her eyes are curved, and she is smiling happily, no My brows are always frowning when I am by my side. She wore a gorgeous palace costume, dazzling and dazzling, unlike when she was by her side, she was always in a military uniform. She either wanted to deceive herself or others. She can marry that person openly in front of the whole world; she enjoys the worship of the people and the congratulations of the whole family. It is not like when she is by her side, she quietly enters through the back door, stays in the palace desertedly, and even returns To live in the cold dilapidated palace under the name of Dangfei.

She should be happy indeed, that person is doing better than him!"

Nostalgia of Ru Zhiyan: Many times, he thought, maybe, nothing happened, just like the six years he left, only he can see the smile that he wants to see when he goes out.

There are many empathetic psychological monologues like these that are meticulous and empathetic, which deepens the impression of readers. The whole story is flawed in 9 places, but there are many moving descriptions of feelings. If Feihuan in "Emperor Phoenix" allows readers to see his heart more, I believe he will greatly increase the number of votes he is the dream lover in many women's hearts.

I can learn from 11 beautiful shots. The chapter that I like Li Ce missed by Chu Qiao when he died, "The Begonia Is Still" The whole chapter is like film-like long and short shots, reminiscent of the status quo, and warm the flowers The sadness of the kingdom reappeared.

You can learn from the "human" spirit in 11 places. Chu Qiao is not smooth sailing and is always invincible. She is constantly frustrated, and often hides alone for healing and pain relief. But we feel cordial, and her performances are more like our lives. We will not always go unfavorable, we will always lick and move forward. This arrangement makes it easier for readers to empathize.

This is just a personal opinion. I hope our longan will become perfect every day