Long Live The Emperor!: End this testimonial

Xiao Shui's self-feeling is that he reluctantly wrote something with a "complete world view" and a "named protagonist".

First, there is the worldview.

This worldview is a little deformed.

The universe the protagonist travels to is divided into several stages:

Phase 1: The pre-death culture, including the existence of "Void Worms".

Phase 2: Reaper Culture.

The third stage: Kuroshio culture.

Taiyuan and Daji both existed at the beginning of the Kuroshio culture.

And the appearance of the protagonist is already the end of the Kuroshio culture.

But by this time, the universe has been completely finalized, and it has almost come to an end.

The particularity of the protagonist brings a subversion.

And this universe is also a little deformed at the end, that is, the top-level power and the bottom-level power are completely disconnected, but the protagonist has to overcome this disconnect, and then gradually uncover the real mystery.

The structure is quite strange, but Xiao Shui wrote it in a stumble, and did not follow this structure to write the taste it should have. I will improve it next time.

Secondly, it is the character of the protagonist.

This character has also gone through several stages.

The first stage: rebellious.

The second stage: Push yourself and others, educate the world, and everyone is like a dragon.

Stage 3: Awareness that this belief cannot be realized, because the universe simply does not have such an environment to realize it, so become enchanted.

Stage 4: Make a great vow, may the living be like dragons, may the dead rest in peace, may this heart be bright.

The fifth stage: It is to prove this dream, and from beginning to end, the protagonist has not changed, no matter how many temptations and seemingly better choices, he will not change until he enters the Dao .

This character process, Xiao Shui himself still thinks it's pretty good, especially a protagonist who has persistence, won't change easily, and doesn't live just to be boring and pretend.

However, something went wrong, because the character was somewhat out of touch with the original "unruly".

Although it can be said that this is a growth, it is not good.

In the online article, you can grow, but you can't change. Xiao Shui has changed the protagonist, making this kind of "unruly" temperament a little more "mature". This is not good. .

Again, the plot.

The common problem of Wudiwen is actually a dilemma.

Go forward, go forward, solve the problem, and the story will become boring.

From now on, the protagonist will appear incompetent.

It is this kind of invincibility that leads to the book's unique and somewhat deformed worldview, and the key Xiao Shui has written it down...

The structure of the plot is not complicated. There are several turning points. The benevolent sees the benevolent and the wise sees the wisdom. It may be quite interesting, or it may feel like pulling the hips.

First, the first appearance of the ancestor of the Su family and his attitude towards Xia Ji.

(Normally, the protagonist should continue to kill, but you will find that in this universe, just kill... The most reasonable ending is that the protagonist is killed; in addition, the later plot is also about this part With sufficient explanations and explanations, the motives of the ancestors of the Su family are very clear and there is no loophole)

Second, the appearance of Taishang, and the loss of both sides, and then the protagonist and Xiaosu go to the north

(Normally speaking, the protagonist should kill too high, and then completely shock the eight ancestors... but this is extremely unreasonable...)

Third, the protagonist goes to the land of fire and returns again

(After fighting with the ancestors, won't readers get tired?)

Fourth, slaughter traversers

(Even if you cross the line, you still need to have a bottom line, right?)

Fifth, quickly improve the realm, use the spring and autumn brushwork for thousands of years, until the way, and then the protagonist is affected by the Dao war and returns to the blue star before the crossing

(It is still determined by the world structure, otherwise it can only be set suddenly, and a group of people who are more powerful than the ancestors will appear.)

Sixth, two contests with Heaven after the cosmic box was closed.

(It has a certain rationality~IndoMTL.com~ but because it is out of the original big story, it leads to the suspicion that it should be finished or not, it is not good)

Seventh, closing.

(You can also write about battles. As you can see from the last few paragraphs, there are a lot of things to write about, such as "Observer", "Cause and Effect Line", "Dao Yun Scout", and the protagonist digs deep into the book Some special products such as "Void Worm" obtained by the universe should be able to collide with more interesting things, but they are really far away from the original story of this book... This little water may end in the end. After this book, I will add it as a sideshow)

Overall, although this book is still a crooked "graffiti", it is really complete.

Whether it is the story, world view, characters, the overall structure is complete, there are some loopholes and flaws, but not many, it is Xiao Shui's first time.

These mistakes will be improved in the new book "Bai Yan Tian Zi".

Thank you for your company.

After the book is finished, there may be another episode as a supplement.

Again, thank you.