Long Live The Emperor!: Take a day off tomorrow to think about the plot and fix the previous text
Take a day off tomorrow to think about the plot and fix the previous text
Modifications include: word optimization, plot logic repairs, character repairs, plot foreshadowing additions, hot-blooded plot additions, and more.
Because Xiao Shui's qualifications are indeed limited, and online articles are required to be written quickly, and there is not much time to think, so he pays attention to one thing and loses the other, resulting in many plots not touching the cool point, there are problems in logic, and the characters are not full.
Revised tomorrow.
Afterwards, depending on the situation, outline the changes.
Well, come on.
By the way, the current plot has not collapsed, it may have gone through a lengthy transition and started a new chapter.
Sitting in the galaxy of the universe, transmuting the souls of grievances of billions and billions of years....emmm, doesn't it feel good?
Please continue to support Xiaoshui~~~
(End of this chapter)