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I have n’t been out this month. I have been staying at home honestly and coding seriously, but I still encountered something.
Last week, my eyes became a little inflamed, which caused the vitreous opacity to become a little bit worse. After dripping ordinary eye drops to no avail, I quickly registered to see a doctor. Before leaving, my wife, an ophthalmology graduate Say, it ’s nothing. As long as it ’s not a fundus lesion, it ’s nothing. I asked what is included in the fundus lesion. She said macular, and then I forgot,
When I arrived at the hospital, the doctor said that the vitreous body was turbid, but the black shadow was small, it could move, there was no flash, and the problem was not big, but your macular spots did not seem to be good. For two days, I was in a low mood at home. Fortunately, after the inspection, I said that there was no problem. I remember to do will be fine regularly.
Zhujun, if you have high myopia, please remember to take care of your eyes and use your eyes scientifically!
Well, this month finally pushed the plot to the beginning of the war, and connected a lot of reserved foresights, paving the way for a tense atmosphere, this part should be completed in November, at the latest at the beginning of 12.
Because considering that war is a continuous process, it is impossible to reach a climax like the Beckland smog. There are many foresights and many tragedies, so I did not use the end of the second part of the writing, only a little rendering A bit about the atmosphere of war and the reactions of different people.
This also leads to a lack of sufficient emotional preparation for the chapter of "Self-ask". Of course, I did not write that chapter as a climax. For me, it is just a more important point in the plot structure. It's not important to be sensational, it's not to shout in the heart, but to change the state of the fifth part from the beginning to the present Klein has no big purpose and no strong appeal, and stretches the tension of the plot behind.
So, what I need is clarity, with a certain explosive force, nailed into the plot like a nail, and tighten the story behind.
Considering such a purpose, I finally adopted the repeated questioning technique that I did n’t plan to use in this book, because if it is expressed in a subtle, or plain, and implicit way, the whole point needs to be raised. There is no way to be clear, which will cause the emotions conveyed to the following stories to be far from enough. If there is such a chapter as before, the hidden emotions and emotions in the dialogue with Bernadette cannot be presented so lightly, as for the use and I have written a version of the other item conversation method for others, which is very embarrassing, many times more embarrassing than asking myself.
Of course, because it is a temporary measure to change the writing temporarily, it caused a lot of detail in that part. At that time, it was because I wanted to let my emotions slowly unwind, and then tightened up. Well, now it seems that it is too much, sometimes, I have to repeatedly remind myself the word "restraint".
For the war, because of the entire style in front, Xiao Ke is unlikely to go directly to the battlefield, and I am not very likely to describe the specific war directly. At most, it highlights two or three battles to achieve the purpose of outline the situation. Next, The efforts of Xiaoke and Bernadette and the plot of Royal Court of Giants will be staggered and I hope to write it well.
The above is the summary of October. The first chapter has been updated today. Vote me vote me vote me!
Also, October is the first monthly ticket again. Thank you, this should be the first three consecutive times, um, add more to the middle and late, at the critical moment of the plot, then ask for the monthly ticket ~