Martial Arts Master Chapter 1: Find the feeling
Since winning the championship in the youth competition, the sense of rhythm is a bit bad. To be precise, the sense of expectation cannot match the plot. This is not a question of spreading dog food, laugh, on the contrary, the two dog food of photos and questions Da Zhang, on the contrary, I feel very satisfied, the details are full, the character response is in line with the personality, and it also deepens the characteristics, although it may not be liked by some people.
The problem with the sense of rhythm is that after winning the youth championship, even if the peak of the summer vacation plot is over, the latter should be finished with a relatively short length. Sprinkle a few chapters of dog food and quickly move to the next big plot, but leave it in front There are too many tails, and many things have to be explained. You have to write, interviews, apprentices, sect figures, special training, etc., except for the master’s pretense and fullness of his personality, there is a kind of strong end in other places. It didn’t create a good sense of expectation, and it was a bit less interesting to see in the plain. This is a plot arrangement that needs to be reviewed. Fortunately, relying on a relatively good foundation (boasting), it is also It is more interesting to write, and it will not fall below the standard.
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This month’s rankings love you addicted: ex-husband is gentle, the chief wife is too sultry, first marriage and then love: husband lightly pet "flash marriage honey love" Believe love does not say marriage You are in your heart, love is so long and beautiful you accident The love wife is difficult to tease: the president’s brother is good or bad, the president teases Amore, etc. Huakai falls in revenge, three thousand gold flashes, and marriage becomes love: the fierce husband stops the cute wife for a while, the boss please accept the trick. Husband, addicted to petting his wife fiercely: Husband, don't move! Happy wife: bullying the president will be addicted to bone poisoning Concubine: evil king, lightly pet the cute wife is too delicious: President, please refrain from the almighty soldiers report to the devil: the princess is poisoned again, ignorant youth love me, please don’t leave me. Official career: close to female leaders, bans, pet rights, less forced marriage: husband is too fierce, and wife is sultry: domineering husband, love so much, love daughter, rebirth: well-known, rich, young, and pet wife
The Master of Budo-Leave a Leave Chapter to Find Feelings, Red Curtain Novel
Since winning the championship in the youth competition, the sense of rhythm is a bit bad. To be precise, the sense of expectation cannot match the plot. This is not a question of spreading dog food, laugh, on the contrary, the two dog food of photos and questions Da Zhang, on the contrary, I feel very satisfied, the details are full, the character response is in line with the personality, and it also deepens the characteristics, although it may not be liked by some people.
The problem with the sense of rhythm is that after winning the youth championship, even if the peak of the summer vacation plot is over, the latter should be finished with a relatively short length. Sprinkle a few chapters of dog food and quickly move to the next big plot, but leave it in front There are too many tails, and many things have to be explained. You have to write, interviews, apprentices, sect figures, special training, etc., except for the master’s pretense and fullness of his personality, there is a kind of strong end in other places. It didn’t create a good sense of expectation, and it was a bit less interesting to see in the plain. This is a plot arrangement that needs to be reviewed. Fortunately, relying on a relatively good foundation (boasting), it is also It is more interesting to write, and it will not fall below the standard.
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