NEET Receives a Dating Sim Game Leveling System Chapter 64: If you don’t become a handsome guy, you will die!
It's dawn all night.
"Hey ... how is it dawning?"
Haruji looked back from his fantasy, and suddenly found that the morning sun was shining through the window.
He quickly looked at the time.
Mb, actually wrote an overnight! ?
His face was full of pressure, and he looked at the book in front of himself. The original thick notebook had only three or four pages left.
It's so fascinating ...
Although the writing impulse caused by clicking on the "write novel" action is also a reason, basically because Qing Se is indulged in the thrill of creation, he can't stop writing at all.
"Stop it." He lowered his pen and stretched his waist.
He then picked up the book and began to quickly read his creations overnight.
"... wonderful."
Haruji looked and raised her eyebrows gradually.
"Really ... wonderful."
The speed at which he turns pages is getting faster and faster.
"Very ... wonderful."
The eyes keep turning and they keep watching.
Finally, browse to the end.
"Pop", Haruji closed the book.
"Is this ... I really wrote it?"
He pressed hard at the excitement in his heart.
If he doesn't work hard to suppress it, he'll probably yell, excited.
Because, this novel is written ... it's so pretty ~
Haruji put down the book, got up and jumped, flipped a backflip, and made a victory posture in Dragon O!
Yeah! !!
In his heart, he shouted hard.
This light novel originally created by Haruji ... a short story, entitled "If you don't become a handsome guy, you will die!".
It is about a young man who once had blood, but fell after being brutally hit and turned into a waste house. He was surrounded by strange ghosts one day and forced to become a handsome man, otherwise he would die. story.
If you look at this sentence, you will feel that this work is spiritual and inspirational, but in fact it is the royal battle of the righteous and evil war.
In the beginning, the protagonist was threatened by a mysterious ghost. He had to do things against his will, go out of the house, work hard to lose weight, study, etc., and march toward becoming a handsome guy.
The focus of this part is mainly on the contrast between the male's inner and superficial actions. His decadent negative scolding and vomiting keeps going, but in actual action he has to be forced by the threat of the ghost and behaves very actively , Sunshine, and even justice, unknowingly gained the favor of several beautiful girls.
Then, when the male lead got the reward and care from the beautiful girls, he was touched, and finally he seriously started to face himself, and the plot turned sharply.
The weird villain appeared, and in front of him he hurt his childhood friend who had always cared about him. Fortunately, the ghost on his body temporarily gave him a strong mysterious power to fight back the villain.
The ghost then told the male lead about his identity and significance, why he fought with the villains.
It needs the protagonist's help. It needs to be a handsome handsome man with a positive energy in his heart in order to repel the evil forces that will come and protect the land of one party.
Under great pressure and the risk of death, the protagonist chose to escape, and he was reluctant to go out in his own room. The disappointed ghost had to give up on him and use fragile spirits to meet the enemy.
At the last moment, the present was evoked by the gift of a sweetheart, and reminded me of that passionate self who firmly believed in justice.
"Even if it really dies ...?"
"It's better to live as a waste, as a real handsome guy, die ..."
With this realization, the male lead rushed to the battlefield.
Meeting with the ghosts, after a fierce fierce fierce battle, he finally defeated the villains and saved the life of the childhood sweetheart.
When the green plum bamboo horse wakes up, it has returned to its original state. He is crying very ugly, with tears and snot flowing, and he continues to apologize.
Although she lost her consciousness, the girl who felt what happened in the underworld gently touched the man's face.
"You are really ugly now ... it ’s even uglier than when I was at home."
"However, I just think that now you, such you, are the most handsome boys I have ever seen ..."
The novel stops here.
Under Hari's sharp writing, this somewhat old-fashioned, short-story story of various vomits and stalks of the house to the sky is full of charming royal elements.
In the beginning, the protagonist's decadence and unwillingness, the arrogance and cuteness of the ghost, the fun caused by the contrast between the protagonist's heart and behavior, all kinds of beautiful girls are described very vividly, full of humor and cuteness .
Later, the evil and weirdness of the villain, the cruel and terrible behavior, the protagonist feels the negative and decadent caused by the fear and inferiority, the fond memories of the past with the childhood, the blood of fighting, the scene of fierce fighting, After the victory, the peace of mind, remorse, and touching ... are described with the most appropriate brush strokes!
This is an excellent work.
At least, in the opinion of Haruhi himself, this is a light novel that will allow him to watch it in one breath, laugh and be nervous on the way, and be a little moved at the end.
Except for too few words ... so it's a short story.
In short, this novel is so good that he can't believe it. This is something he wrote by hand.
And it only took one night!
Qingji felt the excitement in his heart, and slowly calmed himself down.
I would like to submit it immediately ... but I need to enter it into a computer, make a document, and then print it out.
Or post it to the website after entry?
Well, just how to submit a manuscript, you need to think about it.
Haruji looked at the time and was ready to go to work.
By the way, working ... he thought of his boss, Tian Haili Xiang, and peach teacher Tian Haidai.
Teacher Peach is a cartoonist, but the light novel is closely related to the comics. It is an adjacent industry. I wonder if she can give some suggestions?
Maybe the teacher is very busy. Then ask the boss first. The latter may also know something.
Haruji thought about it and decided to take the book to the dessert shop ... Of course, I had to tear off the part of the diary first.
It would be nice if Teacher Peach could be seen. Although she has male phobia, should the novel be okay?
The popular cartoonist may be very busy, so Haruji doesn't expect much.
...
Delicious dessert shop.
After Haruji arrived at the shop, he walked straight to the manager's room and found the boss lady.
"Good morning, Springfield ... Harano, what are you doing here?" Tianhai Lixiang looked at the boy and blinked.
"Good morning, manager." Haruhi greeted with a smile.
"This is actually the case. I wrote a short light novel and I want to contribute ..."
He explained the matter and showed the book to the other person.
Light novel?
Tian Hai Li Xiang was curious.
She knows Haruji is a otaku, but consumption and creation are two completely different things. It ’s not that you consume more and have creative ability.
Of course, watching anime too much, and it is natural to want to create your own story. In fact, this is the first step for many authors.
However, preferences and impulses are not exactly equal to talents. They are just a small part of talents. It is naive to want to enter the cruel industry based on these.
Tianhai Lixiang doesn't think Haruta Harutari is a naive boy.
The work that the other person really wants to submit should not be a rough work whim, otherwise he won't be able to pass it by himself.
If it's a real work ... that's curious.
"Although I am not in the industry, I have been with Dai for a long time and I know a little bit about it."
"If you want, I can introduce you a good editor, but before that, can I see your work?"
Tian Hailixiang said with a smile.