NEET Receives a Dating Sim Game Leveling System Chapter 65: Edit

"Sometimes, I also despise novels, although they are certainly not as good as you or Dai, but they have vision."

"Oh ... I'll be happy." Haruji nodded, approached, and put the book on the table.

"Then the store manager will take a look first, and evaluate it after reading it ... I'm going to change clothes now and get ready for work."

"Okay, you go."

After watching the teenager leave, Li Xiang looked at the book.

"It's completely hand-written, and the words are beautifully written. It's a surprise. Chuntian Jun still has this skill."

"'You will die if you don't become a handsome guy!'? Ha ha ~ Is this a novel based on himself?"

Li Xiang found the title interesting and read it with interest.

"The text is pretty good. It feels comfortable to look at, it is vividly described, and it is very interesting to tell."

"There are so many stalks that I don't understand, but Tucao is quite fun and has a wonderful refreshment."

"The girl is also very cute, huh ~ I don't know if there is a realistic prototype ..."

Beauty store manager reads and gradually sinks into it.

...

This morning, the staff at the kitchen felt a little strange.

The store manager, the boss lady Tian Hai Li Xiang, appeared too late, and seemed to have some snacks, and she left for a while.

Her sloppy appearance contrasts with the usual calm and majestic image.

What the **** is going on?

Houchi's staff quietly talked when they were busy.

"Is something wrong at home?" This is normal.

"I guess the old lover of the past called." This was ambiguous.

"Isn't that actually the day?" It was physiological.

"You are all too naive! Hum, according to my eyesight, the manager is actually doubting whether he is pregnant!" This is nonsense.

"Who's pregnant?" The cold voice sounded on the internal channel.

A proud male staff member froze instantly. The others looked at him in unison, looked at the phone call that he forgot to close, and then twisted his head together, pretending to be everything I don't know or know the look of this idiot.

"Kato, deduct your wages or kneel and give thanks, you choose."

"I'm sorry !!! The store manager's life is alive —"

I heard all the sorrowful dessert shop members: "........."

"What the **** is going on with the chef?" Haruhi adjusted the position of the headset and sighed.

"Spread, God knows." Tanaka passing by was also puzzled.

After the busy time, we can finally rest.

Haruji came to the manager's room again and saw Tian Hai Li Xiang still looking at the book.

"Hirano Jun ... coming."

Li Xiang looked up and smiled as she entered the room.

"Your work, it's quite good." She made a straightforward positive comment.

"As a general reader, this is a light novel that is worth my money."

Haruhi was naturally happy to hear such a comment.

"Thank you for your praise, I am very happy that my work has been recognized by the manager."

Tian Hailixiang smiled more charmingly.

"I'm also very happy to be your first reader, Field ... Jun Tianjun."

"After reading your novel, overall, what impressed me most about this novel was the text."

"Your description and your narrative are very well written. They are the best of the light novels I have read ... No, this is not enough! After all, I have not read many light novels. "

"The text of your work is so good ... that when I read a book, I can naturally imagine the scenes in my mind, and these scenes are moving! As if they are displayed in front of me ... It's as if I'm not reading a book, I'm watching an animation! "

Li Xiang admire heartily.

"It's such an excellent text that I can't help but read it over and over again. You must have polished it for a long time? You can feel the great enthusiasm in it ~"

Qing Si smiled silently.

There is some enthusiasm, but it is only one night to write this short story ... Is it better not to say it?

Hey, it's too good to pretend.

"In addition to the text, your story and characters are also good, but I don't have much experience, so I don't comment on this."

"I will contact the editor you know now. She is the female editor in charge of the novel version of Dai's works. She is a very good person."

Tian Haili Xiang took out her mobile phone and dialed a number.

"Hello, Miss Yizezawa."

"I'm sorry, I'm bothering you at this time. There's something here, specifically ..."

Li Xiang explained the request with concise words.

"Dai mentioned to you? Yes, this is the high school student."

"You'll be here soon? Well, he's in the shop ... I think he's fine." Li Xiang glanced at Seiji.

"Okay, that's it."

The beauty shop manager hangs up.

"You hear me, Chuntian Jun? The editor will be here right away to see your work ... and you."

Haruji nodded.

"Teacher Peach mentioned me, didn't she?"

"Yes, Dai told her about her date." Li Xiang sighed.

"Of course, Dai didn't say your real name casually, but only said that she would go to a garden festival with a boy from Yuanhua Middle School who is called Qingyuan Yuanyuan."

"That's what I said except my real name!"

"Yeah ... No way. She is a high school classmate of Dai and one of the few friends whom Dai trusts. It is natural for Dai to tell her about this."

Haruji nodded again.

"You shouldn't mind, right?" Li Xiang blinked.

"Of course, this is not a secret that matters."

"That's right, but because Dai told her about it, it made her look like you ..."

A subtle silence.

"Let me ask, this Miss Yizezawa ..." Seiji shook his lips, "Wouldn't it be ... over there?"

"No," Li Xiang apparently understood the boy's suggestion and smiled bitterly.

"She is not that kind of person, but it should be said that she formed a deep relationship when she was with Dai in high school, or for some other reason ... In short, she has such a special and special attitude towards Dai ... "

What is this very uncertain tone?

Seeing Qing Si's eyes, Li Xiang seemed to realize that the teenager was vomiting in her heart, and coughed slightly awkwardly.

"Anyway, she's here, you will see her soon."

"She is a good editor. Anyway, she will judge your work ... probably."

What you said is a little worrying, big sister!

Qingji suddenly felt that it was not a good idea to ask the boss to help introduce editors?

Forget it, don't want too much, see it when you see someone.

After about an hour.

Haruji was called to the manager's room again, and when he arrived, he saw a strange beauty inside sitting on the sofa and flipping through his book.

This beautiful woman is wearing a yellow jumpsuit with a well-formed body. She has skin-colored stockings on her long legs, and her bright orange long hair is tied into a beautiful braid. Her eyebrows are slightly thick, her chin is slightly pointed, and her lips are rosy He froze slightly, and the dark yellow eyes showed a sharp light.

It feels like a cold and beautiful young professional woman, and it has a sharp atmosphere.

"Hello ..." Haruhi said, greeting him.

Suddenly the woman brushed her head and looked up, looking at his face with sharp eyes.

"You are Kiyo Hara?"