Part-Time BOSS: About the final outcome of the Deathwing plot


This plot about Deathwing.

Please don't blame me for the ink marks. A plot has been discussed and researched over and over again. The main reason is that this turning point determines the development of the next hundreds of thousands of characters of the plot, so it must be clarified.

Preliminary results from previous polls.

Choose 1, about 20%

Choose 2, about 60%

Choose 3, about 15%.

Choose 4, about 5%.

Generally speaking, the response is not bad. It can be seen that most readers still like the current plot.

However, some problems are still exposed. There are mainly 4 points that readers complain about.

1. The road of Dragon Feast overlaps with Deathwing.

2. The plot is a bit messy.

3. The foreshadowing is not enough and the turning point is abrupt.

4. Controlling Deathwing will be mindless, and the game will lose the sense of accomplishment.

Indeed, if you write about Dragon Feast, Deathwing's seizure of power, realistic plots, and the main character fighting monsters and upgrading himself, it will feel very messy.

And it would be outrageous for the protagonist to have such a big hang as Deathwing.

Some changes have been made for the above four points.

1. The main line of this book is still the story of the growth of the prince. The road of dragon food is the main path of power for the prince, and Deathwing is only used as an interesting side plot.

2. Canceled the plot of Deathwing's conspiracy to seize power. Most of the time, Deathwing just hibernates in the protagonist's body, and the protagonist will use his own way to obtain the throne.

3. Improve in the future.

4. Some small revisions have been made in the previous two chapters. The protagonist's unseal skill is a plot skill, which can only be used in plot events related to Deathwing, and cannot be used in normal times.

5. The three shifts will resume from tomorrow.


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