Part-Time BOSS: Ask for feedback on the plot of the main character gaining the power of Deathwing


Every time there is a big turning point in the plot, Da Xie's heart will be up and down, very disturbed.

Because this kind of plot turning point determines the development route of the whole book, it can be said that a mistake will cause eternal hatred.

The original setting of the second volume is that the protagonist will follow the route of the prince, the road of dragon food, and there are no other branches. After two or three hundred chapters, he will get the boss template.

But after writing a few chapters, many readers complained about why there is no BOSS plot, and looked unhappy.

At this time, Da Sniper also felt that only writing the Prince's line did not fit the title of the book, so he thought hard and came up with an idea to add a BOSS experience card to the protagonist.

In this way, you can not only play the boss, but also continue the prince's route without delay.

That is the plot of Deathwing.

But in this way, some readers jumped out and said, how can I write a lot of scribbles.

Of course, Daxie knows that the readers who make complaints may not represent the thoughts of most readers, but this kind of thing is really difficult to distinguish, and I still feel very disturbed.

So again, I'm asking for reader feedback.

Although this chapter says it hasn't been opened yet, the author can see it, so feel free to leave a message if you have any ideas. Of course, you can also directly choose from the following options and just reply with the number.

After reading the last few chapters, do you think the plot of the protagonist gaining the power of Deathwing is——

1. God unfolds, and I am looking forward to the next development of the plot.

2. Good plot, you can watch the main character play boss and act aggressively, without affecting the development of the prince line.

3. It's okay, but it feels a bit messy.

4. Bad writing, superfluous, why not write the protagonist to play the prince, don't do those messes.


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