The Sage Who Transcended Samsara: End of the testimonial
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It ended abruptly, but it did end, and the idea should stop. The original outline thought of Little Meng and Xiaosang angry Gold Sovereign, ending with a **** battle, but when writing to the majority, the more The more I write about the terrible Gold Sovereign scheming shrewdness, the firm pursuit of Grand Dao, such a BOSS like Pāramitā, it is impossible to let himself fall to such an ending, mechanism is too smart, and it is his heart to be like an iron on the road. The final climax will not get up, and it is impossible to finish it heartily. For a creator, it is too painful that the fish and bear paw cannot be balanced.
However, I finally decided to respect the character Gold Sovereign, the villain who supported the third story behind, and the character and settings of the character. This is also my original intention to write the honor of life-every book, I will always consider which aspects of my own weaknesses to improve and improve.
Mei Yun is a complete temperament practice story, there is no rest. I wrote my heart with my hand, so I wrote the fairy, but there are too many lacks, writing, plot design, rhythm control, character shaping, these or There is a flash, but overall it is too ordinary and too thin, so Arcane God is dominated by world view decryption, the rhythm control is very good, the fine structure is better than the ruin, the characters are also improved, but not enough, the fight is also weak .
With these conclusions, I ’s original intention was to write people and write ideas. During the first half of the Jiang Hu, self-feeling characters, fighting, conflicts, exploration, suspense, ideas, passion, joy, etc. have written a new level. , Broke through the previous self, but after stepping into Exterior Scenery, the fight started to become empty first. There were too many confrontations of Gao Wuliu. I did not encounter problems that I did not expect. It was painful to write and slowly fell into a bottleneck. The gloomy and heavy world view gradually reveals, the conflicts of the previous styles, the integration of the past characters are new problems, and the more grand background, more character games, more elaborate clues paved, and need to rack their brains, it is difficult to Take into account the other, unless you can use one more chapter in two or three days, so while keeping the subject okay, many of the advantages of the previous period are gone,
These things are not something that can be thought of initially from the initial outline. Only when you write arrived will you understand, and you will know how to solve them when you encounter them. I have a good life, but there are indeed many problems that need to be summarized.
Fortunately, the game Supreme was written to the end, and it finally ended successfully. I am very satisfied with this. The content of nearly 4.5 million words can achieve this level. I feel good about myself. I just hope to summarize more. This book improves again.
The most satisfactory characters in this book are Little Meng, Gold Sovereign, and Xiaosang. Xiaosang was originally a dragon suit that a previously known girl wanted. There was only one requirement, written as a female villain. I looked at the settings of Yu Longzi , Suddenly felt that the neuropathy was also pretty cute, so she became schizophrenic, and then let me extend a series of inspirations. With the layout of Gold Sovereign, if it is not this accident, maybe the life you see is not like this.
The character Xiaosang may not be liked by many people, but at least for me, I think she is the best female character I have written, not the favorite and the most satisfactory, but the best. At the end of the seventh volume, Xiaosang and Gold Sovereign Face to face, when I was stripped of pride a little, I even felt like this character was alive.
To sum up here, first answer some pits that are not filled in the text:
One, what did Zhu Bajie know? With some lustful intuition, it is keenly aware that Thunder God and Monster Saint have adultery, so that there may be a problem with the true identity of Thunder God, so the old pig must die.
Second, Han Guang and Wang Siyuan were shaped by previous resourcefulness, and they had no plan to express the true will after the unveiling. Since then, there has been no drama, and the ending of Han Guang is already doomed. The original owner of Book of Luo is Donghuang. Wang Siyuan thought that he got it back only by clarifying the Heavenly Dao monster. In fact, it was the layout of Demon Buddha, and his resistance has been under the control of Demon Buddha.
Three, the escaped Kasyapa remains is the terrifying need to express the superior True Buddha. It was taken away by Great Sage Equal of Heaven and left behind. Imagine if it is possible for him to become sariputra in the new era. Find the new successor.
Fourth, why did no one go to memorize Tang Sanzang remains after the battle of Spirit Mountain? Because Pāramitā is balanced and involved in each other, no one dares to move first, until they all fall into a chaotic sleep, waiting for Final Tribulation, the old gentleman does nothing, and ca n’t recite it until the legend, so eventually rely on the sand monk to return early.
Fifth, the golden cicada carapace was originally prepared by Meng Qi to deal with the supreme True Buddha, but the Buddha was not really detached, so he could n’t use it.
Six, the Buddha did not really detach the pit, there have been hints in the early stage, Dao Venerate's reduction of empty products are very powerful, there are Huang Laojun, Huang Laojun split into Donghuang and Heavenly Dao monsters, all are Pāramitā, there are The old man, while Supreme True Buddha is indeed powerful and weird, but Tang Sanzang is much weaker. Meng Qi thought it was improved. When the trace of Dao Venerate was found empty and the brand of the Buddha still existed, some doubted that the Buddha was not detached. In addition, Dao Venerate has not shot, Buddha has take action record, there is the secret cooperation with Heavenly Lord of the Primordial Beginning before Demon Buddha, so the final battle take action is foreseeable, not a whim.
Seven, as each era is only one detached, the Buddha is detached. Why does n’t Meng Qi doubt Pāramitā ’s contention for Dao Fruit? I forgot to write here, he thought it was Final Tribulation, it was the big end of multiple eras before, not a single era, maybe there is still a chance.
Eight, why Primordial Beginning Lingbao Can't do it, Amitabha Buddha versus Gold Sovereign Is it okay? In the last chapter Primordial Beginning Say, they have transformed into a state long ago, disappearing karma , Waiting for the opportunity, not like Gold Sovereign Hurry and hurry like that, equal to leading half-step , There are 70% to 80% chances of winning Gold Sovereign Must use Six Souls Banner cut Daode(way of virtue) a bit.
Nine, the status of Monster Emperor is slightly equal to Buddha, but she is not restricted, but she is afraid that her previous efforts will disappear, and she is not afraid of Final Tribulation and Monster Saint as long as there is another epoch. .
Ten, the timeline sequence of Titled God Journey to the West, etc., first is Titled God, Celestial Emperor certificate Pāramitā, cross-bearing, then gradually centrifuged with Primordial Beginning, Daode(way of virtue), with Journey to the West, then Demon Lord was instigated by Thunder God to make Heavenly Court, indirect The secret of Jianmu fruit was pierced. It did n’t take long for Heavenly Court to fall. Pāramitā teamed up. The monkey took the Vajra circle given by the old man, and at the last moment the severely wounded Celestial Emperor and Heavenly Court knocked down Immortal Realm, giving him a lifeline to maintain this era. Existence, and finally the battle of Spirit Mountain, Amitabha Buddha, Bodhi and Monster Saint, Daode(way of virtue) and Primordial Beginning and other ancient people later intervened, Vajra circle, Qibao Miaoshu are damaged in this battle.
Of course, after all, it is a serialization close to two years. Some details before and after will inevitably cause memory confusion and non-corresponding situations. For example, Liu Luo has clearly seen the Demon Blood Peach picture drawn by Meng Qi. When exploring the top layer of Heavenly Court, he said that he did not know. Of course, it can also be interpreted as Little Meng ’s ability to draw “ghosts and awesome works”, which is amazing. The children ’s paintings are not even known to their mothers. Well, these are not related to the main plot, not to the trend. If there is a chance to publish in the future And repeat the proofreading again.
Others are the pits of the ending of some characters, some will be outside, and some will be left blank. By the way, when I see a friend in the book review area, it is best to serialize in the book. In order to take care of them, that book also Serialize it, use the free form, take a break, there will be the first character at 7 o'clock on Friday night, but I hope everyone can add me * prestige * letter *, there will be good paragraphs, there are various brain holes, there are Let ’s look at the manuscripts first. Fans who have nothing to do with I are also put there. For example, “If it ’s a city” tonight, in short, I will have time to update them three times a week. Just search for my pen name. Of ...
After summing up, it ’s time to talk about the new book. I mentioned it before. The new book is the city ability. Today, I can say more clearly that it is the city of martial arts or fantasy of the King of Fighters type. The level of strength will be lowered, which makes me better. Write characters and write stories, using the thing summed up by I, and this type is less written and relatively fresh, and it will be very creative to write ~
Of course, everyone will say that I will not die if I do n’t die, and I change the theme and the field. To be honest, I also know that this is not good, and I will definitely lose a lot of readers. Every time I see others add Hundreds of thousands of subscriptions, tens of millions of copyright adaptation fees, I do n’t envy it, that is impossible, but I ca n’t write the thing I do n’t want to write, I ca n’t force a smiley face and pretend to climax to write I have no inspiration, no idea yet Create passionate stories.
It ’s good to say naive or stupid, but I still remember the original heart when I first started coding. I wrote my heart with my hand and wrote me feeling good. I feel that I ca n’t wait to share the story with you and enjoy creating a world. , To write about the satisfaction of a character.
I am not young, but I still feel that I still have dreams in my heart, and I still have a passion, and I also have a whiff, and the story I want to tell has nothing to do with the theme, it has nothing to do with style, it is only related to my heart!
As Little Meng said, this is not a question of worthlessness, is it willing or not!
I am willing, I have no regrets, I am a fool!
The new book has been conceived for a long time. Before writing the arcane art, I had some ideas. Of course, I wanted to write a technological flow at that time. Unfortunately, already did n’t feel that way, but the accumulated details and accumulated bridge sections at that time were many Can be used, until now, generally already is perfect, just wait for the bricks and pieces, but I wrote it for almost two years, it is really exhausting, thinking is slow as if, it takes time to rest, it takes time to charge, look at good books, see how others shape people How to tell a good story, learn skills and experience, so, two months of rest and charging, a month of perfect outline and manuscript storage, October 1st, see new books!
Huh, I wrote in December, some friends passed high school, some friends graduated from college, some changed jobs, some started a family like me, Little Meng is accompanied by us At a stage in life, if this book can become everyone's memory of the past, then I would be too happy.
Sincerely, salute, see you outside, see you in the new book! (To be continued.)