Yama Rising Chapter 211: : First submission (3)

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Qin Ye took a deep breath: "Are you sure?"

Gu Qing laughed, his expression unbelievably confident: "Master Qin, it's not that I boast. Do you know how the government report is done? That's one word by word, and the ambiguous words should be replaced with beautiful words. A synonym for Lumeihuan. No matter how rigorous an academic paper is, it will never exceed the government speech, right?"

Qin Ye let out a long sigh of relief. The boulder in his heart fell, and he rubbed his temples, and his thoughts began to fly.

There are generals under his command, so I don't panic. At this moment, he really felt this benefit deeply. However, this is just "text". For the new dungeon to rise in the world of dungeons, literary text alone is not enough.

You can speak with a hard fist. With all the famous generals in China ascending to heaven with the Jizo, Oda Nobunaga's remnant soul, and the opportunity for the Jifu to take off, he would never let it go!

In the next few days, Lin Han and Su Feng came to him, and they all saw the do not disturb sign on the door. Except for occasionally appearing in the cafeteria in order not to arouse the school's suspicion, Qin Ye spent almost all of them in the underworld.

I have to say that Gu Qing is a real talent. The unit he was in was destined to have heard and written too many reports, from the national level to the county level. In the past few days with Gu Qing, the other party broke up the whole paper again and listened to Qin Ye telling himself. Logical thinking, then arrange again.

Every paragraph, every sentence, will add or delete a little bit, but just a few words make Qin Ye feel that the taste of this sentence is different.

How do I put it... If it is said that his previous papers were concatenated in non-academic terms, he even didn't know how to be rigorous in some places, but used straight-forward vernacular. So after the amendment, what we see is still rigorous, but with more integrity and professionalism.

This is a kind of fluency and comfort in reading, the words are still those words, but the experience is completely different. The entire article is sublimating at a speed visible to the naked eye, and Qin Ye is more and more confident in the publication of the Xiuxian Weekly.

One day, another day, Qin Ye and Gu Qing struggled with all their strength and had many disputes... When he finally typed the last sentence in the early morning of the fourth day, both of them breathed a long sigh of relief.

"I'm getting old..." Gu Qing rubbed his temples mockingly: "It took five days for a three-thousand-word essay, and it was definitely done in the previous two days."

Qin Ye didn't answer, but looked deeply at the paper in front of him, the central meaning has not changed, but now the whole article has only three feelings.

Strict, precise and logical.

"Mr. Gu." He looked at Gu Qing deeply: "How confident do you think this article is?"

"As long as they are not blind, ten percent of the publication!" Gu Qing replied categorically.

Qin Ye took a deep breath, squeezed his fist lightly, and whispered: "I mean... the unique version."

Gu Qing's eyes moved slightly, and he did not directly answer: "Master Qin, the quality of this paper is absolutely sufficient for the independent edition. But the issue of the independent edition involves too many aspects."

"You should know that the newspapers in China serve politics. I don’t know what the political background of the Xiuxian Weekly magazine you said is. If there are tasks assigned from above, such as: this issue we will release a certain topic , To promote a certain point of view, it is impossible to have a unique version of your writing."

"Furthermore, there are also editor-in-chief likes and dislikes. This is the reason why I amended some of the sharper words in your paper. Although sharp words can resonate with some people, they can also arouse disgust from some people. If the reviewing editor happens to be on the side of disgust... we don’t need to make this risky bet, just make sure it can be published."

He solemnly said: "For four days, we have avoided all the possibility of being cracked, changed it to a level comparable to a press statement, and done so much... If we exclude political services, I believe, This paper is at least 80% possible and can meet the requirements of a unique edition!"

Qin Ye took a long sigh of relief, took the paper and stood up: "Let your good words, if it is feasible, then... at the end of June, I will let you see the results of your efforts."

Turning the Yan Luo Yin, quickly appeared in the dormitory. He took a bath to make himself look fuller, and took care of his appearance. Print the paper again, put it in the information bag, and then rush to the professor's office without stopping.

Li Tao was the only one in the office. After he knocked on the door and got a response, he opened the door and walked in, solemnly placing the information bag on the table: "Professor Tao, please be correct."

It's strange, even with Gu Qing's affirmation, he is still very nervous at the moment.

Perhaps, people are like this.

When an event does not turn out, no one can say it is safe.

"Did you finish?" Tao Ran was reading the newspaper. He was surprised when he heard this sentence. He glanced at the cell phone next to him in disbelief, and then looked at Qin Ye: "Twenty days?"

Qin Ye nodded.

Tao Ran didn’t take it right away, but if he said with deep meaning, “Xiao Qin, the birth of a paper is a water-milling skill. The Xiuxian Weekly has a very high vision and tastes very difficult. Even the two principals are on it. Not many papers have been published. It will be reviewed in 20 days... Do you... Do you want to review it again?"

Only twenty days.

Even college student papers are not so fast! Let alone pure academic papers accumulated over time!

Too anxious... He sighed secretly in his heart. He knew very well that the selected tutors of the First Xiu University wanted to make grades, especially Qin Ye, who is a unique-sighted tutor, who can take it in the opening class. To the first place, his views can definitely be regarded as the foundation of a good paper!

However, for the so-called good paper, one quarter of scrutiny is short. Twenty days? I'm afraid that after finishing writing, I didn't have to deliberate deeply and came to myself immediately, right?

"We have checked it many times." Qin Ye said sincerely: "We already feel that we can't change it, so please guide me."

Tao Ran didn't speak any more, put on his glasses and waved gently, and the information bag floated into his hand.

It's useless to say more.

He was also young, so it is clear that there are things that are only known to be wrong only when he has done it. Once he thought his thesis could not be revised, he submitted it to his tutor confidently, and was approved as a dog-blood sprayer. I calmed down and deliberated word by word, only to discover how many places I can see clearly, but I missed it because of my urgency.

The best persuasion is action. Since Qin Ye insists, he uses action to tell these new mentors that learning really depends on time. More haste less speed.

The room became quiet, Tao Ran unfolded the thin paper, skipped the title, and read it carefully.

Crack, click... as if he could hear the sound of the clock, but just after five seconds, he whispered "Huh?" Afterwards, he raised his head and took a look at Qin Ye.

This look is very complicated, so complicated that the old man like Qin Ye has no taste. Just feel inexplicable.

Huh? Why does this old man look at him like this? Could it be the beauty of the prosperous age that shocked the official? You didn’t say anything when you watched it, but you made a statement...

Tao Ran did not speak, his face was like a stone sculpture, unchanged. From start to finish, three thousand words can be read in less than ten minutes. Then...

He watched it again.

This time I looked more carefully than before, and after reading it, I cast an inexplicable look again. I knocked on the table, and my voice was a little hoarse: "This paper... You wrote it?"

Qin Ye Surong nodded.

Tao Ran still didn't speak, but calmly lifted his chin: "I will consider it again, you should go back first."

...This old man is not authentic...Qin Ye is extremely slanderous in his heart, and the most annoying thing is to go back and wait for the notice. Do you know how much psychological shadow this will cause to the tutor?

However, there was no place to reason. After Tao Ran ignored his expectant eyes several times, he could only slip out of the door with his tail in his hands.

Boom... Tao Ran sat in the chair and closed his eyes to rest, and the door closed gently. He just sat quietly for ten seconds, fifteen seconds... Twenty seconds later, he suddenly opened his eyes, jumped up at an impermanent speed, then rushed to the door one step later, and immediately locked the door.

After that, he rushed back like lightning, spread out the papers in front of him, and read them one by one for the third time!

"This...how is this possible!" In another ten minutes, he put down the paper and pushed his reading glasses: "This, this is simply unscientific!"

"Oh... By the way, we ourselves are the biggest unscientific... No! This is not so metaphysical!"

His voice is even more hoarse than before. It's not that the Taishan collapse is not unpredictable, it is directly stupid by the landslide. Recalling that I wanted to instruct Qin Ye on how to write a thesis before, my old face was full of pain! That's why he drove Qin Ye away immediately.

Are you kidding me?

It’s like a white board number, suddenly took out a handful of orange martial arts, recharged Xinyue 13, right?

This essay made him correct?

The rigorous use of words, tight structure, and rigorous logic, he couldn't write such a paper!

"Huh..." He pushed his glasses in disbelief. Now no one is watching. He can let himself go, but... But what the **** is this Nima! Is this the paper's day? Can't fly up!

He tremblingly picked up a piece of paper, flicked it lightly, and touched it like a baby, and his voice was floating: "Perfect! Strict! The wording is accurate and the arguments are in one go! Read this paper, Actually... it gives me a feeling of enjoyment?"

"This was made by three novice tutors... You told me this is the paper of the three novice tutors? Even the reports from the national, provincial and ministerial agencies are nothing more than this! Are these three boys open?"

Tao Ran didn't know, it really came from a provincial and ministerial cadre.

Since they are all plug-ins, why should they be reasonable?

Suddenly, he seemed to remember something. He grabbed his phone and opened Momo, found an ID whose head was a fish, and took a few deep breaths until the rosy on his face completely receded, and his heart beat wildly. Typing calmly with fingers.

"Academician Yu, hello, I am Professor Tao Ran of the Department of Practical Combat of the First College, and your former student. I am also a professor in Qin Ye’s department. I have a very interesting paper here. I would like to ask you to taste it. ."

That's right... Xiao Qinzi and Academician Yu seem to have a good relationship. Is such an old and spicy brushwork, such a refined wording and sentence formation, the work of Academician Yu?

In academia, most people are younger brothers in front of Academician Yu. His current mood just wants to catch Academician Yu’s thigh with a plop: Teacher! You look into my eyes and speak! Did you cheat for my student?

Euphemistically...we want to be euphemistic... After this paper is posted, Academician Yu probably knows what it means.

I just want to praise my wit!